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Silently speaking; Poetry collection - 4. Scribblings (Part 1)

This are the scribbling of a 14 year me...not really written as poem. I tried to shape it into a poem when I was 16 (when I actually started writing)...there are quite a few of them, so I divided it into parts

CRIME

 

Tired of looking at their retreating backs

For work, or study, or parties;

They never have time

Wanting to spend

A moment together, is it a crime?

 

JUST US AGAIN

 

Woke up to greet the usual view

An empty house and a note, so that I knew

They'll be late again; that was nothing new!

 

Made some toast and juice

and walked back to my room

surrounded in it's usual gloom.

 

I opened the window, and felt the dazzling ray

Letting it kiss away the pain

I raised my glass to it, smiling, its just us again!

(here 'their' is referred to my parents)
It's a bit amateurish, but I hope you all enjoy it!!
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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2 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

Nothing amateurish about feelings! Remember... No Apologies!! 🤗

Ahhh yes...Man I have gotten into habit!! Thank you for your views!!

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2 minutes ago, mogwhy said:

absolutely no need to apologize. i can feel the emptiness of a home

Thanks a lot moggy :hug:

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You wrote Just Us Again at the age of fourteen? Wow. Heartbreaking and powerful. I sensed... no... I felt the resigned loneliness. Wow again. It is so clear you were always meant to be a poet :hug: ... cheers... Gary....

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Just now, Headstall said:

You wrote Just Us Again at the age of fourteen? Wow. Heartbreaking and powerful. I sensed... no... I felt the resigned loneliness. Wow again. It is so clear you were always meant to be a poet :hug: ... cheers... Gary....

Oh Thank you so much Gary...Yeah, you see my dad was more than half the year outta house, n my sister left when I was 11 and my mum was well always busy with herself unless my grades are falling that is...(she use to get quite brutal at those times :/ )...so I guess staying in home alone, doing homework and no one to talk to maybe did the trick :P 

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2 minutes ago, Aviana said:

Oh Thank you so much Gary...Yeah, you see my dad was more than half the year outta house, n my sister left when I was 11 and my mum was well always busy with herself unless my grades are falling that is...(she use to get quite brutal at those times :/ )...so I guess staying in home alone, doing homework and no one to talk to maybe did the trick :P 

Our experiences help mold us... I'm sorry yours were not ideal... I understand that only too well... but if it helped you give voice the way you do with your words, then some good came from it :) 

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1 hour ago, Headstall said:

Our experiences help mold us... I'm sorry yours were not ideal... I understand that only too well... but if it helped you give voice the way you do with your words, then some good came from it :) 

Wow...I never thought it like that...true I wouldn't have started writing if I didn't experience it...N you are right our experience does mold us, n make us who we are!

N I knew that you will understand... thankz for your words:):)

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