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Somewhere a Life with You - 1. Part One – First Flush/Doubt Separation
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LIBRETTO
"Somewhere a Life
with You"
Cantata con dialogo e musica
For Three Voices
In Two Parts
by
AC Benus
This cantata is an outcrop from my large-scale oratorio work on Gay American History and Men in Love. I had many more lyrics from Leaves of Grass than I could use and composed forty of them into a songbook. In addition, I had much Whitman material in the form of letters to and from him, journal entries, and interviews. This cantata creates a natural bringing together of some of this material. I was also interested in finding a proper home for the eyewitness accounts from Andersonville extermination camp survivor John McElroy. He wrote eloquently of the kind of male-male adhesion in real-life hell conditions where it is tested in the extreme. His voice is an exact contemporary to Whitman’s visionary love for the younger men with which he surrounded himself. My goal here is to show how Whitman’s poetry was made manifest by his actions and the actions of others of his time. They bid us to live up to their aspirations in our current day; we have it so much easier than they ever did.
Cast:
Tenor
Baritone
Bass
Accompaniment:
Small ensemble with piano
Bibliography:
(as referenced in the footnotes)
GAH – Gay American History, Lesbian and Gay Men in the U.S.A., Jonathan Ned Katz, 1976 New York, Thomas Y. Crowell Company
LG – Leaves of Grass, Walt Whitman, 3rd Edition, 1860 Boston, Thayer and Eldridge
LS – Loves Stories, Jonathan Ned Katz, 2001 University of Chicago Press
MDB – My Dear Boy, Gay Love Letters through the Centuries, Rictor Norton, editor, 1998 San Francisco, Leyland Publications
Notes:
No stage sets; no props. The men should wear contemporary street clothes appropriate to their respective ages.
Musical Setting note:
The metres used throughout the poem generally indicate the delivery style/tempo intended for the stage action. Eight syllable lines are meant to follow the natural cadence of everyday speaking tempo, while decreases in the syllable count of individual line show progressively slower, more contemplative action. So, for example, a four-syllable line should take twice as long in performance as eight-syllable ‘recitatives’ lines.
How the dialogues are set, I leave up to the composer. I imagine a lively variety of different approaches – music under spoken word, musical silence until certain emotional (or inner dialogue) moments need to be highlighted, spoken word with sections of recitative and singing – whatever is appropriate to knit the scene together into a cohesive whole.
Recitatives I consider to be accompanied.
Part One – First Flush/Doubt Separation
Scene One: “First Sight”
No. 1 – Cavatina
Now I make me a new leaf
A tuned one fit for voices
For I have yet found nothing
As mighty as our voices.
For the word spoken in place
Has all the beauty we need
And every word thus uttered
Stands sweeter on its own terms.
For those of closed lips and brains
A word sung from a new leaf
Brings forth what lies slumbering,
Forever ready in words.[1]
No. 2 – Dialogo
BARITONE:
“You ask me where
I first met him? […]
[I was conducting
On my omnibus.]
He was the only passenger,
It was a lonely night,
So I thought I would
Go in and talk with him.
Something in me
Made me do it,
And something in him
Drew [him] that way. […]
We were familiar at once –
I put my hand on his knee –
We understood.”[2]
No. 3 – Cavatina
BASS:
Oh, the cityscape! You frequent
And swift flash of eyes
Offering me love,
Offering me the response
Of my own – these repay me.
Lovers unending
Only repay me.
Yet comes one, a city boy,
And when we must part,
Kisses me lightly,
Yet still full of robust love.
And I, in pub or crosswalk,
Kiss him in return.
American men,
We are those two natural,
And fine nonchalant persons.[3]
No. 4 – Dialogo
TENOR:
“[In Andersonville]
I saw an admirable
Illustration of the affection […]
A sailor will lavish
On [his ‘chicken,’] […]
A bright, handsome […]
Fellow of about Fifteen. […]
This ‘old barnacleback’
Was as surly a growler
As ever went afloat,
But to his [boy]
He was […] tender and thoughtful. […]
This ‘chicken’ had
A wonderful supply of clothes,
The handiwork of his protector,
Who, like most good sailors,
Was very skillful with the needle.
He had suits of fine white duck,
Embroidered with blue, […]
And blue suits
Similarly embroidered
With white. […] When
The duck came up
From The old sailor’s
Patient washing,
It was as spotless
As new-fallen snow.”[4]
No. 5 – Duettino
BASS:
Shine and shade play on the trees,
As supple the boughs wag
Haste and harm rush on the streets
As city the crowds walk
While along fields and hillsides
Delight alone rushes.
In health, the full-noon trills me
From bed to greet the sun.
TENOR:
My respiration,
My inspiration,
Beating of my heart,
The passing of blood
With air in my lungs.
BASS:
The sniff of green leaves,
My inspiration,
Dark-colored sea rocks,
Hay within the barn,
The air in my lungs.
TENOR:
My inspiration,
Words belched on my voice,
Loosened to the winds,
The passing of blood
Through thoughts to my brain.
BASS:
A few light kisses,
A few embraces,
Beating of my heart,
The tender reaching
Around of his arms.[5]
(a due at recapitulation)
(recap: “Shine and shade…” etc)
Scene Two: “Divided with Loss”
No. 6 – Dialogo
BARITONE:
Ned Johnson,
A young Englishman
[Whose] fist was
Readier that his tongue.
[And his chum,
Walter Savage] […]
Of the same surly type,
Had come [over]
Twelve years before
And had been
Together ever since.
[After Savage was
Killed in battle,]
Ned could not realize
For a while his friend
Was dead. It was
Only when the body
Rapidly stiffened
In its icy bed,
And the eyes glazed over
With the dull film of death,
That he believed he
Was gone from
Him forever.
[Through the rest of the fight
Ned headed every assault by]
Cursing the rebels bitterly.
[When his regiment surrendered,
Ned] sat apart, his arms folded,
Head hung upon his breast,
Brooding bitterly upon
Walter’s death.
[But when a reb officer
Rode up,] Ned sprang
To his feet, made a
Long stride forward, […]
[Drew] the revolver
He had been hiding, […]
Cocked it and leveled it
At the rebel’s breast.
[He would have killed him,
Had his fellow soldiers
Not disarmed him.]”[6]
No. 7 – Aria
BASS:
On his right cheek
I place the family kiss,
And in my soul
I swear I will never
Deny me him.
The drudge of the cotton fields –
Or cleaner of the privies – [7]
The three scythes at harvest time
Whizzing arcs straight in a row
From three lusty angel boys
With shirts bagged out at their waists – [8]
Blacksmith with grimed hairy chest –
The butcher boy sharpening
His knife at the market stall – [9]
My face rubs the hunters face
When alone in his blanket – [10]
The swimmer naked at bath –
The bending forwards and back
Of a rower in his boat –
The laborer seated there
With his open noon-time meal –
The apprentice boy wrestlers
Grown, native-born and lusty.[11]
On my left cheek
He places the family kiss,
And in my soul
I swear I will never
Deny him me.
No. 8 – Dialogo
BARITONE:
“[How I miss your]
Cheerful smiling face,
[Your] kiss of
Friendship and love,
[Your] kind ‘Good Night.’ […]
I have never before
Met with a man
That I could love
As I do you. […]
‘To know you
Is to love you.’”[12]
No. 9 – Arietta
TENOR:
All is a procession –
The universe with measured
And beautiful motion.[13]
Throughout the loving day,
The friend I am happy with,
His arm hanging idly,
Drapes warmly on my shoulder.
Lovely dripping fragments;
The poems of privacy,
Of night and men like me.
This poem shy and unseen
I still carry with me.
Soft forenoons drift to evening,
Smell of apples and sage,
The boy’s rousing to confide
What he was dreaming then.
The limpid liquid within,
The soft-scented young man,
Vexed corrosion so pensive,
Corrosion so painful,
Trembling, encircling fingers –
His pulse pounding through his palms –
I can feel it beating on my arms.
The wholesome relief then;
Smiles, repose and contentment.[14]
(recap: “All is a procession…” etc)
No. 10 – Cavatina
BASS:
Passing stranger – you do not know
How longingly I look to you.
You must be he I was seeking –
For surely I have lived a life,
Somewhere a life of joy with you.
All is recalled – as we pass by
You grew up with me, were a boy
That I ate with, that I slept with –
Your body became not alone,
My body not quite left yours yet.
Passing stranger – you do not know
You give me the pleasure of your eyes
You face, your smile, as we pass –
For surely you have lived a life,
Somewhere a life of joy with me.[15]
No. 11 – Finale della Parte Prima
TENOR, BARITONE and BASS:
Music always around me
Unceasing, unbeginning,
Long untaught, and yet I hear.
BASS:
A tenor strong, ascending,
Power and health with glad notes
I hear with the break of day.
TENOR:
A transparent bass shudders,
Lusciously under my feet
As sand rises ‘tween my toes.[16]
BARITONE:
A glimmering soprano,
Fresh as creation itself
Convulses through my love-grip.[17]
(recap: “Music always around me…” etc)
TENOR:
The different voices winding,
Strive with fiery vehemence
To excel in emotion.
BARITONE:
The tutti all triumphant
With sweet flutes and violins
Attend mourners at funeral.
BASS:
I think they know not themselves,
The higher meanings they make,
But I racked by them do know.[18]
TENOR, BARITONE and BASS:
Music always around me
Unceasing, unbeginning,
Long untaught, and yet I hear.
(Darkness – Intermission)
[1] LG = After p.240
[2] LS = p.165 interview, Peter Doyle meeting first Whitman
[3] LG = After ps.363 and 364
[4] LS – ps.138-141 memoirs, John McElroy, 1879
[5] LG = After p.24
[6] LS – ps.138-141 memoirs, John McElroy, 1879
[7] LG = After p.85
[8] LG = After p.87
[9] LG = After p.36
[10] LG = After p.100
[11] LG = After p.292
[12] LS = ps.155-156 letters, Elijah Douglass Fox to Walt Whitman, November 1863
[13] LG = After p.297
[14] LG = After ps.304-307
[15] LG = After p.336
[16] LG = After p.365
[17] LG = After p.60
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