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PESI - 7. Chapter 7

As we entered the courthouse, we were met by Abe, “Doctor Frankenstein, I have a small room we can meet before we go and see the judge. This must be the two boys who’ll be adopted?”

I introduced the boys to Abe; they smiled. We followed Abe to a small room just outside of the courtroom. “This should go pretty fast. The judge will want to talk to each of you boys separately in his chambers. He wants to be sure you want to be adopted and not being forced into adoption. Do you have any questions?”

The boys shook their heads no. I just smiled at them.

We waited just a few minutes longer when we were called before the judge. Abe showed us where we were to sit. I looked around and saw Mrs. Wilson there with another person at the other table. The clerk called the court into session, asking us all to stand. As soon as the judge sat down, we followed suit.

Abe made the presentation introducing the boys and myself. The judge mentioned he had read the report submitted by CS. He asked if CS was represented when the man at the other table stood up and introduced himself as the Director of CS.

The judge asked if CS had any objection to the adoption of these two boys by Doctor Frankenstein. The Director said they would stand by their report.

Each of the boys was invited into the judge’s chambers, separately. It seemed like a long time before they come back. “After reviewing the report submitted by CS and talking to each of the boys, it’s my pleasure to introduce Victor Robert Frankenstein and Robert Marcus Frankenstein, the petition for adoption is approved.

Then Mrs. Wilson stood up, “Your honor, I object.”

“You object to what?”

“To the adoption of these two boys by this man.”

“I asked you if you had any comments. You said you stood by the report CS submitted. Now you change your mind. You had your chance to object. You didn’t. I suggest you sit down before I hold you in contempt.”

Then Mrs. Wilson sat down and looked completely confused.

The boys were happy and ready to eat. Abe said he would pick up the papers next week and forward them to me. I invited him to have brunch with us, but he declined indication that he had another client to see about their case later this afternoon. The boys thanked him, as did I.

“Let’s go and have brunch.” There was a diner next to the courthouse, and we headed there.

While we were eating, Mrs. Wilson came in for coffee. She saw us sitting there and came over. “I don’t know how you did that, but my report did not agree with the judge’s decision.”

“I suggest you get a copy of the report that was sent to the judge, and maybe you’ll discover your error. By the way, why did you do the home evaluation? I understand you don’t normally do that.”

She looked puzzled for a moment. “All of the people who work for CS are capable of doing a home evaluation. It was my turn.”

“My lawyer will be contacting you, Mrs. Wilson and Officer O’Hara. It seems you had asked a lot of questions to my boys and threatened them. My understanding that this is not normal procedures. I have a written record as well as a voice recording of the questioning. I suggest you make your lawyers aware of the possibility of a lawsuit.”

Her face went pale as she sat down her coffee and quickly left the diner. “She didn’t finish her coffee. Should I take it to her?”

I just looked at him and smiled, “No, I don’t think she’ll want it anymore. Let’s eat and go home.”

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43 minutes ago, Tonyr said:

Over? Already? I didn't see it coming.  😡

Yes, over the years I created short stories, this was one of them . The main thrust was PESI

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 The Doctor should make a small pocket size PESI to take to office meetings when he meets people he's suspicious of.Excellent story one small question where was this Russian angle going?

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1 hour ago, Buz said:

That seemed both abrupt and tame. Well, it was a happy ending none the less...

yep, the boys are happy, Doc is happy, but some of my readers are not happy, 2 out of 3 isn''t bad😀

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8 hours ago, mikedup said:

Great chapter, I hope that sometime it will be continued

Maybe when the boys are a little older 

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5 hours ago, weinerdog said:

 The Doctor should make a small pocket size PESI to take to office meetings when he meets people he's suspicious of.Excellent story one small question where was this Russian angle going?

A pick up on the current interference with US politics. Think what they could do with this technology 

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1 hour ago, Buz said:

That seemed both abrupt and tame. Well, it was a happy ending none the less...

Happy ending is nice 

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Perplexed! I would've thought MANY more chapters were in order until reading the comments above. The fun legal battle with Wilson and her other cronies, the Governors office storyline regarding the suspected hacking, the Russian "central bank" debacle, etc. Have to say, while I very much enjoyed this story, the "ending" felt like someone put a boot to ones butt and pushed them off the cliff. UGH! 

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2 hours ago, CLJobe said:

yep, the boys are happy, Doc is happy, but some of my readers are not happy, 2 out of 3 isn''t bad😀

Most of the time, if you're enjoying something you don't want it to end.

You understand that it must, but you also make a judgement/estimate on how long before said something should finish. How long you get to enjoy it. This length of time is not really based on anything concrete. Just a, usually, educated hunch.

Sometimes your hunch is way off. If it is way off in the wrong direction...then that can be blah.

2 out of 3 is good. I think it is more 7 out of 8, you know? A higher percentage of good.

 

 

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9 hours ago, Chris L said:

Perplexed! I would've thought MANY more chapters were in order until reading the comments above. The fun legal battle with Wilson and her other cronies, the Governors office storyline regarding the suspected hacking, the Russian "central bank" debacle, etc. Have to say, while I very much enjoyed this story, the "ending" felt like someone put a boot to ones butt and pushed them off the cliff. UGH! 

They did, the law suits that followed, two people are on the unemployment line

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7 hours ago, Buz said:

Most of the time, if you're enjoying something you don't want it to end.

You understand that it must, but you also make a judgement/estimate on how long before said something should finish. How long you get to enjoy it. This length of time is not really based on anything concrete. Just a, usually, educated hunch.

Sometimes your hunch is way off. If it is way off in the wrong direction...then that can be blah.

2 out of 3 is good. I think it is more 7 out of 8, you know? A higher percentage of good.

 

 

A higher percentage is always good. But my stories leave the door open, and who knows when I have the time and the rest of my written stories are posted, I mayvgo back and write more about these stories that seem to beg for a continuance.

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it's nice when someone can think of others and not be so selfish.  I think all three gained a family.  Nice story. 

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2 hours ago, alexlittel said:

it's nice when someone can think of others and not be so selfish.  I think all three gained a family.  Nice story. 

You are right, a single man, who is quite a bit older than the boys, finds a fan ily late in life. Two boys rejected by their parents, find a home and a loving father., 

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I hope this will continue on in either another book or more chapters there’s a lot left unsaid. What do the boys do they grow up? what happens with the lawsuit? Just a couple of different paths that could take place. I do hope to see a continuation of the future thank you for a good story

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4 hours ago, Frostyvb said:

I hope this will continue on in either another book or more chapters there’s a lot left unsaid. What do the boys do they grow up? what happens with the lawsuit? Just a couple of different paths that could take place. I do hope to see a continuation of the future thank you for a good story

There are several more chapters which I think will answer your questions.

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