Goldilocks and the Three Lumberjacks

This reinterpretation of the traditional story has a blonde boy as Goldilocks and three lumberjacks replacing the bears. Aren't most lumberjacks bears in real life? I digress. It's an interesting take on the tale we all grew up with. The ending is cute as Goldilocks is told why the punishment inflicted for breaking into the cabin was what it was.

Although well written from a technical point of view, I felt the story faltered in its tone. At times it felt slow, at other times it flew by. The emotional content wasn't there most of the time. Overall it felt rushed and inconsistent.

All in all, it's not the best I've read but it's far from the worst. If you have a free thirty minutes, it's worth the read.

I enjoyed this short story. It was a nice twist on Goldilocks while maintaining a fairy tale feel. 

Nice little fairy tale with a twist on an old standard. It was fun, a little inconsistent but worth reading.