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    Celethiel
  • Celethiel
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  • 01/31/2012
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Broken Fate - 1. The Mirror on the Wall

The Mirror on the Wall
By J.A. Oshio

I look in the Mirror
Tears streaming down
It all becomes Clearer
As I look at the torn gown

What Have I done?
For I have tossed my honor away
And what I have won
Was not worth the price I had to pay

My soul is broken
I see the Child in me
I wish I could give him a token
And set him free

My heart Quakes
I see my lost Love
His hollow eyes like stakes
Just one more shove

My Fathers eyes once so proud
Now Anger Filled
Over My mothers shroud
As her Heart I killed

I see the Long line of my life
It is empty and hollow
I take out a knife
For I can not stand what is to follow

They are coming for me now
Blood splattering across the Walls
I make one last vow
Finally as Darkness Calls

Copyright © 2012 Celethiel; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Celethiel
On 04/30/2012 09:35 AM, Mark92 said:
Very powerful and emotional, lovely read well done :):hug:
thank you *hugs back* Tiger thought i was going to commit suicide when I wrote that :D
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comicfan

Dark poem. Makes you wonder what was lost and that would bring about such violence. If nothing else it is a piece that can not be ignored.

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Celethiel
On 04/30/2012 02:34 PM, comicfan said:
Dark poem. Makes you wonder what was lost and that would bring about such violence. If nothing else it is a piece that can not be ignored.
Thank you ^_^ I think the second one kind of explains what happens... ^_^
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