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    Celethiel
  • Celethiel
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  • 01/31/2012
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Broken Fate - 3. A Rose upon the Grave

A Rose upon the Grave
By J.A. Oshio

Why did you leave me alone?
I asked myself again
If only I had known
You were better then other men

Father So Brave
Fighting for her honor
But you stood against a wave
Alas you were a goner

My mommy I’d cry to see your face
But they took that all away
And with all your grace
They whisper that’s why I am gay

I read your Letter
I think you’d be Proud
I am doing so much better
And I stand above the crowd

I fight a good fight
To return your pride
And make things right
Your hope my guide

I have a boyfriend now
He is my knight in armor
but you have my vow
He’s just a simple farmer

I’ll place this Rose upon your grave
Even though it don’t always show
I am proud of all you gave
I have to go

Copyright © 2012 Celethiel; All Rights Reserved.
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Celethiel
On 04/30/2012 09:38 AM, Mark92 said:
Awww this one is the best of the three. :) My opinion any way :hug:
I thought so too, or at least the happiest.... I think i nearly cried on all three... for different reasons.
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Celethiel
On 04/30/2012 12:20 PM, SoullessCynner said:
All three gave me goosebumps and made me teary-eyed. You have talent. I very much enjoyed these three poems.
Thank you ^_^ they did the same to me actually.
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comicfan

You've woven three tales here in poetry. Darkness reigns in the first, the second is more of sadness, and here you have not joy, but a sense of living on, continuing the dream.I really enjoyed them all, but like the others this last one sort of holds a special place for me as a reader.

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Celethiel
On 04/30/2012 02:43 PM, comicfan said:
You've woven three tales here in poetry. Darkness reigns in the first, the second is more of sadness, and here you have not joy, but a sense of living on, continuing the dream.I really enjoyed them all, but like the others this last one sort of holds a special place for me as a reader.
I wanted to show that they moved on, and did not follow in the footsteps, and wanted to convey a sad pride... the kid had become an adult and was a good person and wished his parents were there to see it but weren't...wow i am starting to tear up... TwT
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