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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Broken Fate - 2. A Father's Lament

A Father’s Lament
By J.A. Oshio

You are my son
What I have lost
You will have won
But be mindful of the Cost

There is much I wish to say
If my eyes could see you now
But there was a price I had to pay
For no one can break their vow

You will grow Strong
And you will grow Wise
But you must write your own song
And beware the thinly veiled disguise

You must have your father’s pride
And your mother’s grace
But know why we died
It is not something to chase

We will always be proud
And will always love you
Even from the shroud
We know you’ll grow true

Copyright © 2012 Celethiel; All Rights Reserved.
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On 04/30/2012 09:37 AM, Mark92 said:
This is dark yet sweet at the same time, :) enjoyed this one. Nice work :hug:
Thank you ^_^ I tried my best.
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I see I wasn't the only one to play with dark themes when addressing this theme. Nicely done. I wonder what your last work will hold.

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On 04/30/2012 02:36 PM, comicfan said:
I see I wasn't the only one to play with dark themes when addressing this theme. Nicely done. I wonder what your last work will hold.
yes well it hit me like a stroke of genius when i wrote the first one.... to create three that weave together...
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