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Breaking Point

   (2 reviews)
Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Drama

What do you do when your world is a pile of dung, and the one good thing is cruelly taken from you?

A short story of redemption. 

Moderate violence and abuse of a minor
Copyright © 2021 drsawzall; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (4 members)

  • Action Packed 0
  • Addictive/Pacing 2
  • Characters 3
  • Chills 2
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 3
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 3
  • Unique 3
  • World Building 0

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Table of Contents
  • 1. Chapter 1
    • 2,197 Words

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   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

A short read filled with powerful descriptions that stir the emotions and almost overwhelms the reader.  It is very much like a poem in prose form that describes the emotions of a young man's trials as he navigates high school, personal and family tragedies.  I does leave the reader hopeful at the end.  Excellent writing by @drsawzall!

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   1 of 1 member found this review helpful 1 / 1 member

This short story really paints an emotional picture of a strained young life with words. As the emotion builds the redemption at the end leaves the reader hopeful for better times in the future. A quick read that makes you think..........

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