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    Menace
  • Menace
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  • 05/13/2012
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Menace's Collection - 1. Lonely Beauty

 

 

The Lonely Sleeping beauty


I close my eyes as the dreams of our meetings can start again.

I’ve waited for you day and night until we can meet again

When the stars are shining, I close my eyes to see you appear

I smile with happiness, while something on my eyes appears in a form of tears.

You never knew how much I’ve longed for you

You never thought how much I’ve wanted you.

 

I’m so lonely, my heart is empty.

I try my best to remember you toughly

Since a boy like me can never catch your eyes

When I wake up from this dream, then your only saying is a goodbye

Do you know how long I’ve waited for you?

I’ve past the days with dreams of us two

 

I’m the sleeping beauty that’s waiting for you right here.

I’ve screamed for your name, can’t you hear?

Losing you is the only thing I fear.

When I lose you, my heart cries with red tears.

 

When I can’t see you

I feel very blue

I don’t know, I don’t have a clue

I’m lost in this endless dream, only thinking of you

When the dreams end, our fate becomes undo.

 

So where did you go?

I’ve lost my soul

I’ve become a doll

There’s nothing here for me at all

 

I have decided to run

I have decided to hide

I have decided to end my small little life….

Menace
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 
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On 05/18/2012 06:40 PM, Mark92 said:
I really liked this despite the ending :P

You're quite the poet well done :hug:

thanks mark! :hug:
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Yettie One

Such a moving poem. I love the sentiment of love, quiet, desperate yet unknown. Beautiful use of words Menace. :)

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Menace
On 06/13/2012 09:42 PM, Yettie One said:
Such a moving poem. I love the sentiment of love, quiet, desperate yet unknown. Beautiful use of words Menace. :)
thank you~!
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sacredlove

Hey Menace,

Honestly, I'm not much into poems but as I read this first poem of your collection, I'm in love with it.

It has such a deep meaning, so thoughtful of you.

The lines,

 

'I smile with happiness, while something on my eyes appears in a form of tears', 'Since a boy like me can never catch your eyes, When I wake up from this dream, then your only saying is a goodbye' and 'I’m lost in this endless dream, only thinking of you When the dreams end, our fate becomes undo' are my favorite lines in it.

You are amazing. And can't stop myself from asking, are you seriously just sixteen????

Great work!

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Menace
On 03/02/2013 12:19 PM, sacredlove said:
Hey Menace,

Honestly, I'm not much into poems but as I read this first poem of your collection, I'm in love with it.

It has such a deep meaning, so thoughtful of you.

The lines,

 

'I smile with happiness, while something on my eyes appears in a form of tears', 'Since a boy like me can never catch your eyes, When I wake up from this dream, then your only saying is a goodbye' and 'I’m lost in this endless dream, only thinking of you When the dreams end, our fate becomes undo' are my favorite lines in it.

You are amazing. And can't stop myself from asking, are you seriously just sixteen????

Great work!

Thank you! Yup, I'm only 16 :P
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