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Never Goodbye - 1. A Never Goodbye

Something I came up with

Yellow leafs blew through the sky, high
Babies filled the silent air with cries
Moms trying to run and hide
But nothing, can stop the time

Huge bangs filled the air
Hair was waving everywhere
People embrace their dear
And no one had to fear

The sirens came with a rush
The people started to dust
Everything was in crust
But what was going on?

I see white
The sun shine with really bright
I feel really light
What is happening?

I heard shouts
I heard cries
But I hear no goodbyes
Is someone is holding me?

The whiteness has gone
And I could see someone
With fogginess I remember
With the pain, gave me the timbers

My companion hold me with care
He cried in tears
His tears touched my ears
I shivered with fear

Is this the end?
I think not
Can this be tend?
I think so

The sirens carried me to safety
The doctors came to me with hasty
I was endangered gravely
But was fixed to shapely

My lover cries with happiness
I could hear the tenderness
I can feel the softness
Am I alive?

My lover whispers to me
“Don’t ever scare me
I can never lose you
I will always love you”

With the message, I smiled
and with joy he cried
and with the end we never said goodbye

Hope you liked it.
Menace
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Heck that was powerful. It's not the best crafted poem I've ever read and in some places it was rough but it was raw and open and powerful. I can't honestly say that I understand exactly what it's about but I love it.

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I think I got the poem but then, there was many different pictures painted that they almost drowned each other out. I appreciate the near death experience that followed the disaster, I'm guessing... I like the rhymes too:).

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Is this some disaster that happened? It was exciting in places. I would suggest a beta or editor though just to iron out the creases. Good work :)

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I am sure having someone special with you when something like this happens, I am sure would make you fight for life, feeling your loved ones arms around you. Pretty deep stuff, but I really like it.

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