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Meetings on a Bus

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Genres: Romance
Sub-genres: General Romance

Almost every day, he sat opposite me, with or without the silly little dog, and I wondered who he was. What he was like. It wasn't long before I found out.

The idea for this story came about when I was on the bus home the other day and some kid sat opposite me. Then it just kind of sped out of control.
Copyright © 2013 Thorn Wilde; All Rights Reserved.
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  • 07/09/2013 (Updated: 07/09/2013)
  • 1 Chapters
  • 3,302 Words
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  • 19 Comments
  • Teen
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On 10/20/2013 07:45 AM, GrimIsaac said:
good, but feels a tad choppy and rushed, dont fret too much on it though, if it is shorter than 10k words it feels rushed to me. I've noticed something similar in all your stories, stirfry, and i'll leave it at that
That's what short stories are like, generally speaking. ;) I like it, because it strips the story down and sends you straight into the action. Minimalist. No extras. That's my style. :P Choppy is kind of the point here, anyway. The idea was that all the scenes had to start on the bus or at the bus stop.
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