Albert's Day Chapter 4

This chapter contains my first real attempt at writing a sex scene. It was hard (pun definitely not intended) really hard, and I am amazed at how long it took.

I have a few notes I thought I'd share... Though please don't let them put you off reading the story.

1 - Never ever EVER write in the third person. It makes everything so much harder than it has to be.

2 - Here's an idea. Work out a plot before beginning

3 - Frequent shorter chapters are better than longer chapters every blue moon.

So I've blown No 1. That's for next time. No 2 is nearly sorted out, and I'm actually resonably happy with the result, and No 3 is a done deal.

This all leads me (nifty segue) on to another slightly harder topic.

I found and eventually joined this wonderful site, and I'm gay. Well Duh. But I now want to start telling people about this 'startling revelation'... And I find I can't.

Gah.

Camy