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Chapter 6 The Approaching Winter
Paladin commented on BecSun's story chapter in Chapter 6 The Approaching Winter
Tate has the resources, both physical and financial to simply help Richard and bring him into his life.But Tate wants to do more than that. He wants to restore Richard's confidence and self esteem so he doesn't see himself as as Tate's charity case. Tate wants a loving relationship with Richard but he wants Richard to join him out of love rather than gratitude. -
When a story's title and the opening line teasingly mimic Jane Austen you just expect the story to be a wonderfully entertaining read. Pride and Pucks and Prejudice delivers goal after goal. Just start at the beginning and enjoy every chapter until the end where you'll wish there was still more.
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I think you nailed it.
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I feel that Tate already had misgivings about this meeting which is why he told Victor not to provide "models". Alex's job description was obviously broader than sexy distracter. Richard's discomfort during the evening no doubt contributed to him not just reading the contract but analyzing it. This chapter went well for Tate. Now things need to go well for Richard and the relationship they both want.
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I'm with you @Ticklishboy30. I'm often tossing up between giving a story a ❤️ or a 😄 and wish there was a reaction that indicated that I loved the chapter and the humour.
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A lovely Halloween love story
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Back in Chapter 1 Noah admits to himself about Jackson; He also came with the face and body that landed him on every Sexiest Man list ever published apparently on the strength of those ridiculous shoulders alone. And he was just my type, as his starring role in my dreams attested. Now that Jackson has a staring role in Noah's reality he doesn't know what to do with it.
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I have to do something to keep you interested and reading.
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Thanks @Ticklishboy30
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I think it's 2 Viscounts. I'm sure I've included a reference somewhere to both Rick and Martin assuming each of their father's minor titles. Jonathon's mother is a social snob which can create blind spots. Enough social status and money and she'll overlook being gay or gay friendly.
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Noah and Jackson have moved through their relationships from rival captains of competing teams, through being team mates, then best friends to now lovers. The previous relationships in this transition they could rationalize in terms of hockey. Now they have are learning how to be in a loving relationship.
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I think you're right @Summerabbacat. Bertrand and Jonathon's mother would have little in common.
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@CincyKris you're on the money regarding Jonathon's mother. She doesn't want his sexuality interfering with her political and social aspirations. Most gay high school students stay low key regarding their relationships, more because of other students than school policy.
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Also tempting @Summerabbacat.
