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Drowning in Pink


That bloody

Rhododendron

In bloom

Again

Pink

Could of died

Years ago

Should have

After all

Considering

I suck the beauty out of...

 

Hearts Minds Souls

 

These are

Imaginary burials

Long gone love

Complete with

Epitaphs

Last bitter taste

Looks and glaring hurt

And words

Never silenced echoes

 

A fucking damn

Dam

That holds on

Breaks

Bursts

Blackens

 

Every time

That

Beautiful

Loved

Rhododendron

Blooms

 

Friday 4.28.17

 

Been a while, since I wrote one of these down.

 

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Bleu

Posted

Sounds a bit gloomy for a Spring day ;)

Nice to see your poetry again.

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Toast

Posted

Ha

Humor

Next

Piece

Entitled

Pinkicide

?

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JamesSavik

Posted

We call them Azalea- just a little different from Rhodies. They don't like the heat down here.

 

When I was a kid there were abandoned homes out in the country that had giant Azalea bushes.

 

Old gardens gone wild are amazing. There was one I used to go see every spring that had massive growths of Azalea, Magnolia and  Iris.

 

I've got some of the Iris probably originally ordered from a seed catalog back in the late 1800s, maybe earlier. 

 

It's hardier than modern hybrids but not as flashy.

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Emi GS

Posted

These are

Imaginary burials

 

I quite liked theses lines as they brought back some clichéd moments of my life. A Heart wrenching poem for me. I have never used this kind of form before, but I quite liked how you presented it. Beautiful. In a sad kind of way. I might try one of these if you give me the details of this form.

 

That was really a beautiful poem driven with sadness and beauty of those pink flowers... :)

 

~Emi. 

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Palantir

Posted

Forceful words and powerful contrasting imagery.

once again - thumbs up!

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Parker Owens

Posted

This is a powerful set of words, full of memory and portent. 

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