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Book Review: Three Ex Presidents and James Franco by John Buchanan


Drew Payne

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It is 2008 and John, an Irish university student, is spending a year at an American liberal arts college. During that year he forms three very different relationships with three very different young men—the radically gay Jake, Eric the straight jock whose life is turned upside down when he is shot, and Brendon, his former best friend from Ireland. Also during that year he will be involved in a shooting, cause a scandal at a historical monument, meet an ex-president and be complimented by a rising Hollywood star.

Unfortunately, this novel does not live up to its plot summary. Rather than an emotional roller-coaster ride of discovery and entry into the adult life, it felt plodding and lacking understanding of its characters. None of the characters felt like real people, they just seemed to be there to serve the plot. The plot also felt very pedestrian, moving from one event on to another; each event seemed to finished and rounded off before the next one began. No event bleeds into the next one.

So many times in this novel we’re told what has happened, rather than shown what happened, without any insight into the characters and their actions. Far too many times the narrator turns into the author philosophising about different aspects of gay life and life in general. These sections, apart from adding nothing to the plot or narrative, did not read like the musings of a 19/20-year-old Irish young man; they read like the philosophising of a middle-aged, cultured man. But worst of all was the fact that the narrator’s voice was all wrong. He was supposed to be a 19/20-year-old Irish young man, in America for the first time, exploring what it means to be a gay man. There was no wonder, no culture shock, no comparing American culture to the one he’d grown up in, no questioning of the new culture he was living in; he didn’t even get confused with the new currency he had to use. He spoke and behaved like an American man.

There were so many missed opportunities in this novel, in so many ways it could have been so such better, but so many times it fell back on cliché or lacklustre plot turns. After finishing reading this novel, I was left wondering what the point to it was; it was so flat and lacking in insights.

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A serious critique. As an aside, I teach writing for students doing Cambridge University exams  in English as a foreign language.  25% of grade is for “communicative achievement”  - and this is where your review is so good and I will use part of it, with your permission, as a perfect example of how people fail in this part, see para three. “Supposed to be the musing…”

a great review and a model for others to use.  Thank you so much and I hope what I say makes sense!

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On 10/19/2022 at 8:20 AM, Gary L said:

A serious critique. As an aside, I teach writing for students doing Cambridge University exams  in English as a foreign language.  25% of grade is for “communicative achievement”  - and this is where your review is so good and I will use part of it, with your permission, as a perfect example of how people fail in this part, see para three. “Supposed to be the musing…”

a great review and a model for others to use.  Thank you so much and I hope what I say makes sense!

@Gary L, thank you for the amazing feedback. Of course you can use my review, as long as you cite it when you do.

I have a great former magazine editor, now retired, Roger Evens, to thank for teaching me how to write reviews. His main advice was to tell the reader if I thought the book was worth reading or not, and to give the evidence for my opinion. I owe Roger so much of all the great advice he gave me.

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