Protected, Part One and The Roommate

[Anthony Michaels]

Hey everyone, hope you checked out my stories "Protected, Part One." and "The Roommate." I wanted to say a few things about a couple of emails I have gotten.

 

One said: "I read the roommate and i liked it but it revolved too much around sex. you write good but you can focus on other stuff to."

 

I completely agree with this person. I wrote "The Roommate" a couple of years ago specifically FOR and Erotic Stories site. I only shared it here because I feel I should post my works so far. (There aren't very many.)

 

Also, despite the sex scene in "Protected, Part One." I feel like it has more substance, and as a continuing story will certainly not be revolving around sex throughout the chapters. I appreciate all comments though, thanks!

[Sparhawk]

You got my attention with "Protected", I am interested in seeing where it goes from here. Good start.

 

 

Mike

[Anthony Michaels]

Thanks Mike, I appreciate it. I appreciate any feedback I get, positive or negative, so to anyone who reads it...please say SOMETHING lol. I gotta know what you guys are thinking.

[Anthony Michaels]

Oh, also i would like to add, the more feedback I get, the faster the continuing parts of the story will be posted. Forgot to mention that.

[Anthony Michaels]

lol...ONE more thing for Dom Luka fans. Chapter five of "Desert Droppings" came out today, so if you've been reading that one, check it out. Its a favorite of mine.