A December Breeze

[jovian_w2002]

I completed the draft for this novel two years ago, but during the editing process last year, I gave up. I thought it was a little sloppy for my taste, to say the least. Because I free-wrote the draft for this novel (with an outline), I thought it wasn't up to standard for me. The themes are serious! Furthermore, the goals of my characters -to me- seem to fluctuate. I don't know if I'm being overly critical of my work, lol. With feedbacks and criticism, however, I think would have a better idea if I should continue editing this novel, lol. Happy reading?

 

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Edited June 24, 2008 by jovian_w2002