Broken

[itari]

Hey, I hope you guys enjoyed reading the first two chapters. if you havent yet please do The third chapter shouldnt be as long a wait as was the second. I got great news, I now have a wonderful editor that has gotten started editing the first two chapters and as soon they are done ill repost them. if you have any comments or criticism go right ahead and post or message them to me. I would like to improve but I can only do that with your help

 

Thanks,

Itari

 

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Edited January 13, 2009 by itari

[Drewbie]

I like it so far, didn't see chuck and larry looks pretty bad.

[hh5]

Just edit the chapter and cut and paste in the improved chapter

 

that way you can keep your reviews

 

otherwise you lose them if u delete the chapters

and add them back in

 

Look forward to chapter 3

 

Its been a long time since I had a best friend - and - moving around doesn't help

[Zeoanne]

Oh Ya! A birdy told me it's gonna be Goooood!!

[itari]

Oh Ya! A birdy told me it's gonna be Goooood!!

 

 

I hope that birdy was right lol or im going hunting.

 

Its coming along slowly I know, im done chapter three now just got to send it off to be edited. sorry for the long wait ive just been busy with school and work and getting ready to move soon. Yay college! lol

 

Im going to have edited chapters of One and Two also reposted when I post number three up.

 

I got a good start on four so it shouldnt take as long as three did. The eleven hours round trip it took to visit my soon to be new home helped lol

 

thank you for reading so far.

[itari]

Chapter three is finally up. thanks for waiting.

[Zeoanne]

Exellent Chapter!!! You are doing very good and improving so much with each chapter you write! Who would've thought Kyle would be a Psycho? Poor Allen, no wonder he wanted to end it all.... I have faith you'll fix him up though.

[itari]

Well thank you. I don't know about Allen, is it still possible to save a fallen soul?