Reconciliation

[MikeL]

I have published a new poem titled Reconciliation. You may read it here and discuss it in this forum.

[Toast]

How long have you been writing poems? It is so great knowing this about you.

[MikeL]

How long have you been writing poems? It is so great knowing this about you.

Thanks, Sam. I started writing poetry about a year ago. So far, I've completed only two, both of them posted here on GA.

 

The first poem? I'm still working on it; I'll finish it someday, I'm sure. It's a bit more personal and has been more difficult to write.

 

Edit: I tried to respond to your comment in the reviews, but the system doesn't seem to be working. I appreciate all your comments.

Edited December 31, 2009 by MikeL

[C James]

Very evocative. You can feel the heartache in it, and the questioning.

 

Well done, Mike!

[MikeL]

Very evocative. You can feel the heartache in it, and the questioning.

 

Well done, Mike!

Thanks, CJ. I really appreciate your comments.

 

No doubt you recognized the absence of any cliffhangers.

Edited December 31, 2009 by MikeL

[C James]

Thanks, CJ. I really appreciate your comments.

 

No doubt you recognized the absence of any cliffhangers.

 

Not so fast, oh amphibious one.

 

Your final line is;

 

Is it really better the second time around?

 

That's a QUESTION! An unresolved one. Therefor, I hereby declare a CLIFFHANGER!

CJ

[MikeL]

That's a QUESTION! An unresolved one. Therefor, I hereby declare a CLIFFHANGER!

CJ

It is a rhetorical question...no cliffhanger.