Power & Finesse

[Daisy]

http://www.fictionpr...wer_and_Finesse

 

Another story I like.

 

Not finished yet, but posting a chapter about once a week. 24 chapters in though so plenty to read.

 

It's different. And funny. And over the top, but good.

 

Try it.

 

The blurb:

Rowan was an epidemic, a disease that plagued the mind of anyone who breathed him in. As if being a college soccer player wasn't hard enough, now Rowan has to fight off some new guy after his glory. Obviously Avalon was going to have to be infected.

 

 

I did say it was over the top . But also believable too, in a way. And well written!

Edited June 6, 2010 by Smarties

[Daisy]

anyone else reading this? It's getting better and better.

And I love the way that the author develops her characters, the psychology involved.

 

And I also really appreciate the way that she shifts between characters - do you writers call it third person? I am that clueless about writing . Anyway, it's humorous and clever, and very skilled.

 

I urge everyone to read it.

Edited June 28, 2010 by Smarties

[Daisy]

urgh, feeling withdrawal. They'd been updating about once a week and it's now been 2.

 

can't believe I'm the only one that likes this story

[aiduatrebor]

Does anyone know what happened to this story? I haven't seen an update for a LONG time.

[Ramon]

I believe her computer crashed before she could finish the chapter, then she got a job which took a whole bunch of her time, and she started two other stories as well. She was supposed to post a new chapter last Sunday (Feb 6) but that didn't happen. However, if she is putting a date to when she will post, then I'm guessing she should have quite a bit of the new chapter done.

[aiduatrebor]

Thanks for the update!

[Ramon]

Chapter 33 is finally up so if you are following it, the link is there.