Salvation

[Agaith]

Hey guys and girls

Its already posted in efiction but here it is anyway My 3rd poem which is called Salvation

 

Through the whispers of the trees I hear your name,

 

As the rain falls I see your tear streaked face, looking at me through the abyss.

 

Pain etched onto skin, I reach out.

 

My tears match the rhythm of your own, my hand slips through

 

Your light still shines in my mind, my heart, banishing the creeping shadows.

 

Our cries ripple the void beyond, the barriers between us we will shatter

 

My breath, my heart, my mind, my soul, my love

 

Are all shared with you, until damnation or salvation

 

I will be with you.

 

 

[AnytaSunday]

Oh that's lovely. Extremely passionate.

[jian_sierra]

That was just awesome. This is why I love poetry

[Agaith]

Thank you both I never know what to expect when I put my poems up so :D

[phana14]

I just never know WHAT to expect from the "Poetry Corner"!

 

This time another surprise. A beautiful 'story' told with feelings of deep love for another person.

 

It dosen't have to be a *long* story to be effective. This one truly was--effective!

 

Thank you, Agaith.

[Agaith]

aww always a loveable comment from a lovable person phana