Poems by Moonlight

[Michael9344]

I wrote my first poem for the Spring Anthology. I would like to know what you think about it. If you haven't read it yet, here's the link. https://www.gayauthors.org/story/michael9344/poemsbymoonlightbymike

[comicfan]

I've read them and commented on them. The first is such a strong piece. I enjoyed it greatly. The second I had a question about and hopefully you can answer it. I just don't understand the references to German and Lebanese.

[Marzipan]

I had the same questions as Com, but now that you explained them I understand the poem better

 

Sometimes really personal meanigs can be lost from the reader and that can create a drop from the idea. Yet I encourage to use as much personal feelings and experience in the poems as possible. That is what brings me back to read them.

 

I liked your poems as I said in my revs

[Michael9344]

'German care' is a phrase that translate special care. It's like a joke my mom tells us. I haven't yet met a gay Lebanese. So it means I'll have to live long before I go.