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Michael9344

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  1. Pretty simple. What are you reading now. Which book, novel, story, newspaper, mag? I'm reading Two Little Girls In Blue by Mary Clark and enjoying every single chapter....
  2. I just got Mirrors by Justin Timberlake and I've been playing it since then!
  3. Hi, Jay. Welcome to GA. It won't be hard making friends. There are lots of endearing hearts and invigorating minds.... And the stories are almost limitless...
  4. Michael9344

    Chapter 3

    This is sweet. Nothing like realizing you were wrong, and accepting it. Kei's got a love coming to him. He's going to be alright... Great story. Thanks for sharing, Nephy.
  5. Hmmm. Love the first chapter better:P. Now, how are these two going to get together...?
  6. Things have definitely gotten more complicated. What are they going to do now?
  7. Michael9344

    Pretty Boys

    Fore warned. It was weird but still appealing and qualitative. Interesting short read. Thanks for writing:)
  8. Okay. I really really do like this one. This first chapter is what a good first of a good story of this nature should be. Interesting, describing, intriguing. Good work:)
  9. Michael9344

    Chapter 2

    Okay. Jake's adorable. Can't wait for Saturday to come!.
  10. Michael9344

    Chapter 1

    I like it alright. I'm hooked. Looking forward to the next one?
  11. Michael9344

    Chapter 5

    This is the best chapter yet! No horror.... Love this. Impatiently waiting for the next chapter...
  12. Michael9344

    Chapter 4

    Toby's lost, but Zai is well... He doesn't really know what he wants apart from getting laid and having fun. Now, how are they going to get to "home"?
  13. Michael9344

    Chapter 3

    Hmmm. I'm hoping this story gets better, less horrific and the demon becomes more sensitive... Anyway, I'm still enjoying the story...
  14. Michael9344

    Chapter 2

    Okay, I'm getting what you meant by torturous... The love is still out of grasp. Hmmm... Anyway, interesting story:).
  15. Lol. I like this. It's so... I don't know the exact word... But I like how alluring Dave and Nick's story look. And I know who Zoe's now:).
  16. Interesting first start. Story shows great promise:). Dave and Davis is a little confusing, but... Anyway, who's Zoe?
  17. I'm assuming you're asking this about a story? I think this largely depends on the plot and the characters. It won't be ideal to pick one above the other without being aware of the plot line, or something... For reference, Twilight... Anyway, I like Samurais better. I've read some novels with Samurai characters and I like every single one of them.
  18. Michael9344

    Introduction

    Lots of needed description. I like how you're telling the story in various perspectives... The plot needs it. Anyway, I like Mikey, he emotional... I guess... Moving up to the next chapter:)
  19. Hey. Welcome to GA. I'd love to read your work when it's done. But at the moment, have fun reading all the great stories here:)
  20. Happy Birthday, Finn. You must have fun today!
  21. Interesting. It made me laugh out loud at some point:). It's got a Catcher In The Rye sound to it if you could just develop the story and slow things down a notch. On average, promising:). Thanks for sharing:)
  22. Now, how's that? A whole different calendar?
  23. Michael9344

    Chapter 1

    I just don't know... Interesting, intriguing in the begining, and then it took a wild turn. Exciting, but maybe too overt. The descriptions were helpful, butchilling. Anyway, this is a good story, some good writing:)
  24. Michael9344

    Chapter 9

    Okay, some conquering is being done. It's so sad that Jack's dead... Can't wait to see what Colton and co. are going to do...
  25. Michael9344

    Chapter 8

    This chapter was sad. Too much disappointment and sadness... Silver lining?
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