Request? Action/adventure Setting.

[PlsSenpai]

I have a request for a Betareader, my story genre(s) is:

Action, Adventure, Romance and Mystery. Anyone willing

to help me out please?

 

 

It's been a whole year and not one person has said yes.

I remember on my last post someone said for me to copy

some lines for an example. I'll show my beginning and a

few lines after that.

 

Prologue:

Long ago, steel black towers started to appear everywhere. Controlling the animals and bugs around it, they began to attack all and other living creatures.

Pushing humanity and the already few hybrids left to the brink extinction, people began drawing oils of life from each different types of energies in a desperate attempt to fight back. Eight great leaders from each nation: Het, Wet, Thunder, Sound, Bright, Wind, Earth and Dark now mastering the oils.

Banded together to put a hold on these great beasts – long enough for society to grow again. After the Heat Nation mysterious fell, it was comfortable enough for all to live again. Enough even to make this once reckless fighting into a fun sport for all to enjoy.

One Het Nation survivor was found, alone in the middle of nowhere and on the Earth Nation’s grounds.  

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Chapter 01 Traditional:

 

5:30AM is the time that appeared on Kaiser’s pocket watch, 3 hours and minutes until other students even begin to think to show up for class. Kaiser’s lips formed a small smile, no one would notice the “Nation Hopper” in the back of the classroom.

[scotty94]

Hey there I wanted to offer you my support I love the concept of your story, and would be interested in helping you out I'll send you a PM with my personal information and if you fancy it reply back ASAP and we can set up a system of how you want to work with this.