My reason.

[JarianDaProducer]

Hello there everyone. 

Ok let me just start off by apologizing for my stories. Which talk about rape and also the trading of std's. 

I mean, i never actually meant any harm by them, in all actuality they were meant to be told in fantasy.

Anyway, i talked to cia and she informed me of a couple of mistakes that I'd made when starting up my story "18 Return To The Scene"

I'm most definitely planning on fixing some of those errors and mistakes i made when writing it. Please keep in mind my friends that I am still what you'd consider to be a rookie writer lol. 😊

Trust me, in real life I'm really light hearted.

And I'd like my stories to reflect that.

But make no mistake, the story "18 Return To The Scene" isn't finished or done by any means. I'm right at the beginning, which is good because i still have time to edit it right off the bat.

So once i've gone back to the drawing board and done some re-writing i'll re-post it.

I still plan to keep the sex scene in it, but i won't begin the story with it, and they won't be strangers (which actually wasn't my intention to begin with lol)

Also, I'd like to really and truely thank all of you and those who have been reading my stories.

I can without a doubt and most definitely say that you guys (and gals) are the whole reasons why I write.

Thank you. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Cia]

All authors start somewhere! I like that you aren't letting yourself get discouraged; you have a great attitude toward your writing. I'd recommend you join the Writer's Circle. There is technical information in there on writing to help with plotting, character crafting, and even a recent topic on sex in stories. And always, read, read, read. The more you read, the more you will get an idea of what good, even great, writing looks like. Check out the Stories sidebar in the Browse box under "Advanced Options" for the Most Read & Most Reviewed stories. Check out Recommended stories. If you read a story you like, check out the comments and reviews to see why other readers liked it or what they had to say about it that you could apply to your own writing skills. 

[Mikiesboy]

21 hours ago, JarianDaProducer said:

Ok let me just start off by apologizing for my stories.

Never apologize for your work, your creation.  Not all stories are light and breezy, full of the joys of spring.  Many are dark and that's okay. If you've not been writing long, you will only improve with practice. GA is a fairly safe place to do that. Just do it within the rules.

All the best.

Write bravely.