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Since I can only use one hand my comments have become short. The romantic wants Will and Zach to be an out couple. I guess one can dream.
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As with all of Mark's chapters it raises more questions than at answers. I am wondering if a new chapter of Lord Granger is coming in honor of the passing of the Queen.
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I am so glad Will and Jeff are good again it made me smile.
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with this chapter, we see Will at his best both using his power for good and bringing people together. What a change from the out-of-control teenager. Again, we see his growth over the years.
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again, our beloved hero shows us his love for his crew.
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being the romantic, that i am, i loved this chapter!! is there a future for Will and Zack? only time will tell. but i think there may be. i remember the words of Tonto LOVE IS ALWAYS WORTH IT. unlike DAVID I believe Zack is trying to balance his deep love for Will and the image he needs to play football. which will win?
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again, mark has left us hanging. who could this be? it could have been Darrius but why not just see him? so i think Patrick or john c. now that i said that mark will do something else.
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people say it's a small world and it is,
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awesome just awesome
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George is not a good captain he is a great captain. Caring for his men and officers. A man both of honor and kindness. I am still waiting for the homecoming. Sorry for the short comments only one hand is working.
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. i think as i said before Will should work with the foundation instead. loved the chapter
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To get 2 chapters is an awesome gift. i thought supper with Matheus endearing. However, the problem with the captain is much more troubling. i am not sure if George can remove him or not and premoatt the lt in place. the letters from home may the homecoming better. we will see.
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it is interesting that one of the youngest people has the wisdom to see through the problems Infront of him and others and find the answers.
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I found Theo Wahls's comment spot on.
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This chapter has become one of my most favorite ones in the whole saga. I am drawn to it time after time. I thought the stay at Visby would be a nonevent, but the reappearance of Matheus changed all that.
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Miles points out something i thought of too. this is not the first time George has adopted a parentless child I hope Matheus can live his dream.
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i think we forget Brad's childhood was damaged with abuse. thus, his control issues. maybe he has Finally grown out of it. as for will what more I can saY.
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I cannot tell you what joy it was to see two new chapters. it is truly a gift. in some ways they are the same both George and will are kind, giving people. George giving Mataus a new home at sea and will giving the grant money and both chapters end with a letter. both chapters are masterful and show us about our author. both his own kind spirit and his skill in weaving both tales. my thanks on the birthday of our nation.
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after finding this new chapter, a few words come to mind: WONDERFUL, POWERFUL, HEART-WARMING. some issues were settled and are still out there, as other have said, the foundation and john's band loom in the next chapters. oh two more things the LOVE between the cousins and that jake has found both a home and a true family at last. Truely an Awesome chapter. thank you mark.
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it a great joy to see George on his way home. I wonder want news will come with the letters. hopefully all of it will be good. it seems George has been gone forever. it does my heart good to see him going home at last. thank you for this wonderful gift.
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I have a feeling that the foundation will be shaken up. and bongo will have a new gig. not to be ungrateful but what is happening with George? I am still waiting for that homecoming.on another note maybe a flashback to tonto would be great too,
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we all know what will happen next. bongo will join the band. And Will make things right with mike. that is who he is.
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it is interesting that Will can pick up on both the problems with Brad and Jake and Bongo. Again this who Will is. a horny teen and a caring mentor. Not bad for someone who is 17.
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Many times Mark's chapters raise more questions than are answered.
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as many have said Will has again risen to save the day. we can only stand in wonder how much he has grown in the last few years. i for one wish he was real. have a safe trip Mark.
