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Toast

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  1. Absurdity and profundity with great artistry. I liked it even if it creeped me out somewhat.
  2. I will admit to loving our GA Canadians.
  3. I liked what I saw and heard. I wonder if we will change enough to embrace this kind of approach.
  4. I really liked the Gordon, is she going to come back to life too. Immortal after all? You have one powerful imagination.
  5. Your crush sounds like nice.
  6. Toast

    Chapter 9

    This isn't my first review of this story, only the first in the new GA Stories. This story was well reviewed and read previously in efiction and I know why. It is a great read. This chapter has 20,000 words and reads like it was only a few, because it just carries you along totally involved in the story. This is amazing, few stories are its match for this. I really admire your skill. And I love this story.
  7. Mood, by bugeye Above is the link to my GA Stories page. Mood is the third poem under the heading of Hesitation. Surprise me, leave a review!
  8. Toast

    Chapter 3: Mood

    Mood   by bugeye       A mood he is in Trying not to do, herein What leaves him with Such a tiny, little amount of expression Words he finds… that he cannot define Ring and ring and ring and ring He dares not answer for fear of the answer And the silence that comes Thinking around them has made a rut A detour tour thru a million things How can giving up a few words Cause emotion distortion and Communication jams and Circles under the eyes
  9. I see GA as a place to be optimistic and supportive. It is a community. The authors here do work hard on their writing. The staff works hard to provide us with a stable, safe site; that is easy to use. The bottom line is I enjoy being here. What's not to like? Oh, and most importantly, I enjoy reading here. Not giving that up!
  10. Congratulations Cia! Wonderful acheivement.
  11. Thanks, Nephy. What no videos? or pictures? Well true is your words are better.
  12. Congratulations Nephylim! And this site looks wonderful!
  13. Toast

    Tatters

    Tatters___ by Bugeye___         Hey, guess what………………………………............................................................................It was unknown to me in the past___ I am thinking of you……………………..………….......................................................................This knowledge of lust defined___ Again……………………………….................................................................................................By the silence of no r
  14. Tatters: A poem about what is said and what is never said. Thoughts torn apart for love. Supposition: Perception or assumption.
  15. I know even less about poetry. Poetry is one of those things most people dread will happen to them, like a traffic ticket. Thanks for reading my citation.
  16. This link will take you to my GA Stories. If you are interested this link will take you to my recent entry, it is under the heading of, Hesitation.
  17. What do you mean? Am I drunk? bye bugeye     When you throw love around Someone is bound to get hurt Lucky me The problem is There is an endless supply Of the crap Contrary to public opinion Don’t call me a love-a-holic Call me horny I can’t send my love away First off, he is not mine Secondly, he doesn’t care And dirty third, just visualize Me shooting the bird Love eventually makes you laugh Out of desperation Or is that constipatio
  18. As soon as I have a little greenie to give away it is yours.
  19. Toast

    Chapter 4

    This was not going to spoil everything, Timfer swore. He picked up his back pack and, before marching straight out the door, pointed a finger. The Elite can damn well stay here with Father. “You, I want you to stay here and protect Keufer K’han, my father“. It was a direct order, with all of his command behind it. By the time the Elite figured out what was happening he would be long gone. This was just like his father to pull a stunt at the last minute. Oh, he could sit and discuss things for ho
  20. Carl is good, been reading him for awhile.
  21. Toast

    Chapter 3

    Chapter Three       Where has beauty gone Cut from the meat of flesh And fed to the swarming horde To only starve the appetite for more Vanquished and vanishing mystery The endless quest sought in lore To belittle the heart’s desire             Timfer entered his father’s study with back pack in hand and the embrace amulet around his neck. Reconciliation and forgiveness at the front of his mind. With departure and excitement bouncing with joy in
  22. Happy Birthday! Soup!
  23. I enjoy reading Carl DaVinci, too.
  24. Happy Birthday! Greg!
  25. Enjoyed this very much. Loved the descriptions of the coastal wilderness. The interplay between Joel and Jarrad. The humor and horseplay. The danger at the end. Thanks.
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