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    Chapter 2

    Toast posted new chapter in Zax

    Chapter Two A thousand years ago or so, Paragon found itself in a dilemma. After an equally long history of expansion and dominion, Paragon came face to face with an epiphany. A race so far advanced beyond their understanding and so sophisticatedly different that it shook the foundations of the empire itself. An ever burgeoning empire built on the steadfast belief in its own glory found itself second rate. And the political and cultural fallout was devastating to the mindset of
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    Zax

    Toast posted a story in Fiction

    This is a simple story. I don't think it will get complicated. But, then, what do I know.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast posted new chapter in Zax

    Chapter One Across the sky ocean Empty currents swell And beat themselves into Oblivion Reefs of swirling sand Crystal formations and Beaches of time Erupting lava black of soul Rubbed raw until smooth The Pearl of Meridian A short-term, containment cell was designed as a jar that provided storage and protection for a valuable asset. But, it was still a place of confinement, a prison; if that asset was alive. It was also used for other
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    Ramblings

    Toast commented on Douw's blog entry in Douw's Blog

    Hey Douw.
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    Congratulations Andy and Mike. I am so very happy for you both. Twins are wonderful. My niece has twin girls and a older boy. She is a very happy with the situation. You could have two boys or two girls or a boy and a girl. Have to get your names list updated. Love and hugs Sam
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    How much time

    Toast commented on Bondwriter's story chapter in How much time

    I loved this. Humor. Exasperation. Passion. Genius. All of life summed up. Very nice.
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    Novembers

    Toast commented on Bondwriter's story chapter in Novembers

    An interesting comparision of what life can be and has been. I enjoyed reading. Made me think of so much.
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    A Bon Chat, Bon Rat

    Toast commented on Maddy's story chapter in A Bon Chat, Bon Rat

    Wonderful words, like a path through a maze. I like this.
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    Happy Birthday! Myval ♥
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    A Very Happy Birthday! Joey! Best Wishes and Hugs!
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    Do not fear

    Toast commented on Agaith's story chapter in Do not fear

    I like this line: I want you to smile, and to bounce round and round. As hard as a relationship can be, it can still be joyful. Finding oneself and finding love are parallels. Liked reading this. Sorry, you did not enter it into the anthology. So write another one. Nice read.
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    I enjoy your skill with language as much as your story.
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    Chapter 11

    Toast commented on Hawkeye's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Thanks for the new chapter, waiting for more. Lol. Nate has troubles, but he is truely bless with his Derek and Thomas and Alex.. He is behind in his space studies too now.
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    Happy Birthday, Bleu! Best Wishes Too!
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    Poems I wrote yesterday and forgot or just the ones I didn't finish or the shy ones.
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    Nonsense bye bugeye 　 I don’t know The shape of a line A contour Shade dark Highlight bright I can’t tell Bemoan the things you want Enjoy the things you give The mulberry tree The magnolia blossom The twilight rose The turn Blue hyacinth Little wild thing Standing alone Out of touch Lonely spot Empty Used up Worn out Why not move Trapped What holds Stationary Not bonds Not hands Not spells
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    A life is a song and the past, future and present often sing different lyrics. But, the melody haunts all three. 2010 Gay Authors Reader's Choice Awards Best Poem Co-Winner
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    Consider The illusion Of spring Green Yellow Dew Lilac bows and light ribbons Decoration Wholly alive, wholly awake Bursting Charismatic Death shadows Endlessly sings risk Butterfly cries Deer eyes Denial comes easy Forever and forever Time stands still Everlasting moments Eternity
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    Black Light

    Toast commented on corvus's story chapter in Black Light

    Something I can relate to.
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    Hey Wild, nice picture.
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    Wingless Dreams

    Toast commented on Lugh's story chapter in Wingless Dreams

    I love this, especially the way it is written, its flow and sound. Very very nice.
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    Happy Birthday! Dear Matt!
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    Alfredo II

    Toast commented on corvus's story chapter in Alfredo II

    Is this an apologue, a moral of conscience. Like the imagery. It could in true be many things. It is comforting to have the ear of Alfredo, is it not.
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    I love the intricate plot, the complicated characters and the fantastical descriptions. This chapter is one the best so far.
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    Houses and Trees

    Toast commented on liukas_soli's story chapter in Houses and Trees

    Oh, Danny, I like this one even more.
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