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  1. Toast
    A well written and thoughtful story. No one likes the harshness of life. We deny.
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    This is simply stunning and elegant. It deserves praise. Thank you for this.
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    Alright

    Toast commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Alright

    Wonderful. Profound really in its intensity. And subtle in its shattering. So much said and told in a brief poetic style. Art. I loved it.
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    Poem: The Bed

    Toast commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem: The Bed

    Thank you Maria.
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    It Was a Holy Day

    Toast commented on Lugh's story chapter in It Was a Holy Day

    Well, the immediate response was, I want the whole story now. I know this was a big short story, but I was constantly wanting more detail and more answers and more words. You get that don't you. Very well done, and I enjoyed myself very much.
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    Prison Of Hope

    Toast commented on Frostina's story chapter in Prison Of Hope

    Nicely done and written. I enjoyed reading. Very good first story... very.
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on Remijay's story chapter in Chapter 1

    You write well RJ.
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    Chapter 12: Crazy

    Toast commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 12: Crazy

    Wonderful!
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    Congratulations Andy!
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    Chapter 1: Spencer

    Toast commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 1: Spencer

    I am fairly sure I am going to enjoy reading this. It has started out at a galloping romp. What's to come?
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    ________________________________________Little old me, again
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    Chapter 11: Be Real

    Toast commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 11: Be Real

    Very nice, I am enjoying your story. Thanks.
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    Poem, 3.7.11

    Toast posted new chapter in 3.1.11

    3.7.11 By bugeye So Stop this Just embrace the pain No notice nothing But the view Bittersweet For some reason Smile ache The world looks right Frenzy At this window Spell cast touch Floats away It’s not the loneliness As much It’s the yearning For so much Sweep aside Time and distance An
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    A New Life

    Toast commented on Acedias's story in Fiction

    Oh heck, I just have to respond to that "maybe". Normally, I love the word maybe. I of course will read eleven tomorrow so maybe I should wait, and maybe I will stick my tongue out at you.
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    Chapter 12

    Toast commented on Hawkeye's story chapter in Chapter 12

    Nice to see you posting again. So Nate can shoot. . Enjoyed the info on the starships drive.
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    Penelope I think made a bad mistake in this chapter. Obviously, she has bullied her son. Perhaps this little trick will be the spur Haze needs to step out of his daze. I hope he does. Otherwise he might not be there for Blake, because Blake is acting like someone on the edge, someone needs to anchor that man.
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    Will the word spellbound freak you out, if I use it? It's not so much the location of the story or the diving or the baggage Blake and mystery Haze are carrying, though that is very well done. It's what's happening between Blake and Haze.
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    Happy Birthday! Westie!
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    Chapter 8: Diving

    Toast commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 8: Diving

    I think it is interesting that Blake finds diving freeing. That he is calmer and more aware of his outer world than his inner world. Does he think of underwater as the opposite of the world of air. It's like he switches his perception, focusing more outward underwater as opposed to this focus on his inner world out of water.I wonder if he could realize that as an epiphany of some kind, but does knowing change things? Haze is proving to be steadfast here isn't he.
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    Chapter 7: Real Haze

    Toast commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 7: Real Haze

    Besides being irresistible Haze has been kind of a mystery. I guess he still is. There is something up with his family. Something about his hiding his real self? from others. Is this mystery going to be a fulcrum in Blakes life?
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    Chapter 6: The Trick

    Toast commented on Acedias's story chapter in Chapter 6: The Trick

    Did Blake's "condition" make him a better lawyer? I wonder. Did he worry over a case and every little detail? Did he find answers that won his cases? On one hand I see him as very perceptive particularly about people. He just can't understand his own self or is that out of his control, is it a reality thing? Blake is a lot of questions, but I like him very much.
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    Powerful, I thought. That kind of experience could have unfortunate consequences, but I don't think that is the case here. Yes, it was bad and as much as Blake would rather it had never happened, I think this is a break for him. Maybe Haze is someone he can trust enough to... somehow help him?
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    Blake seems like two people almost. One is just as intriguing and fascinating as Haze and the other is so troubled and on the edge of losing himself. Very compelling and kind of very real. People are never simple are they. So, is Blake beginning to find some peace here in Kulibari. Maybe, it seems a start.
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    I love your characterization. These people really live in this story. Vivid storytelling.
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    Poem, 3.5.11

    Toast posted new chapter in 3.1.11

    3.5.11 By bugeye Sometimes life is in your face Up so close it closes out everything Other times you are so distant It all seems like the stars in the dark blue And the journey between the two Is either slow and painful Or fast and painful Joy and gladness imitate pain And pain is often joy and gladness Or so it seems Life is Here I am and what the hell
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