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    Summer Rains

    Toast commented on liukas_soli's story chapter in Summer Rains

    Nice, Danny, I like it a lot.
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    If I ever try to write another story, I will try harder. I really didn't know anything about writing when I was doing this one.
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    It's just a story I did for fun, there was no thinking involved at all. LOL
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    I've used all these words, of course.
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    Happy Birthday Lacey!
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    Chapter 10

    Toast commented on Hawkeye's story chapter in Chapter 10

    So, the guys have made love. Which is great and nice, but Nate is leaving earth. Big time hurt on it's way.
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    Happy Birthday Androgene!
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    Happy Birthday Krista! One Amazing Woman!
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    Chapter 1

    Toast commented on AleMaho's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I think the guys are going to have a rough time of it. Liked the first chapter.
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    All I Ever Wanted

    Toast commented on AleMaho's story in Fiction

    A nice start, I like prologues. This one makes me interested.
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    October First

    Toast commented on AleMaho's story chapter in October First

    I like this. Thanks for telling me it was about a cigarette.
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    Well, what happens next? Don't leave me wondering.
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    American Vaudeville

    Toast commented on corvus's story chapter in American Vaudeville

    It is the words of this one that carry me away. I think it is a protest. But I am lost on "linoleum streets". Those two words open so many images and allusions. Even the title American Vaudeville resonants with a different sound on streets like these.
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    You look great Aggie!
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    Mother China

    Toast commented on corvus's story chapter in Mother China

    Heritage is important.
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    Add my best wishes too, I want to be uncle bugeye!
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    Happy New Year's Day! ♥
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    Night Song

    Toast commented on corvus's story chapter in Night Song

    The quote is the first thing I considered after reading thru this one. I couldn't find the quote as is, but I found a fable or fairy tale about 8 immortals and a king. Your poems are often mysterious. Is this a night's dream... a Night Song that is a nice way of describing a dream if it is one. I love the words and the images and the otherworldlyness.
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    Hesitation

    Toast posted a story in Poetry

    A place to store a few poems
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    Chapter 1: You Are

    Toast posted new chapter in Hesitation

    You Are bye bugeye You are And it makes me You are And I choose You are Not here And I am here You are And I Have happiness Covered in sadness Ignore me Turn away Blind eye Still it is a gift This cherished Moment I open You close The world I see Is painful wonder Is joyful despair Is of my choosing As free as I am Within this trap As gone as you are Outside this caress I have this This knowing inside
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    Thank you Joey.
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    Alfredo

    Toast commented on corvus's story chapter in Alfredo

    Alfredo is a fairly common name, so I wonder if this poem is speaking to a someone or to everyone. Or a someone who is everyone. A personal and yet universal comment. The first word Because... So this is an explanation or a reason believed to be already well known. I love the first three lines. To me it sounds like... I have given up trying to understand this. The second stanza.... oh well, yes I want to interpret the meaning of the poem. And ponder over it's mystery. It is so declarative. But maybe in a review all that is needed is that I love this one.
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    I visit chat most every day. Cause my friends are there.
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    Welcome back Matty.
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    The problem with asshats is one size fits all.
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