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A brand new, never before seen Chosen short? Bring it on!! I started re watching SG:A. I keep seeing SGA/Chosen cross overs! Fan fiction anyone? So much possibilities!

I know! it's hard not to ditch out spoilers! It was fun reading how others react to cliff hangers though I just want to encourage Tony so he'll keep posting (frequently!)

I have to agree with Chad "Halo" for a name is corny! LOL Great chapter and a very happy ending (well, at least until the next thing come along to destroy the universe). Can't wait for Book 3!

I say this is the best chapter in the series so far. Hands down! When I read I don't usually cry out like a psycho, but I'm afraid I might've yelled "No way!", "I did not see that coming" and "freaking hell" couple of times! haha I'm looking forward how you're going to up this one. Don't make us wait hanging too long for the rest dude

An awesomely great chapter as always @xTony gives us a great insight and a much needed backstory! Keep them coming! Can't wait to read the rest knowing what's coming

The KISS, where is the kiss? You left me hanging rite at the end dude! Would've been so romantic with a kiss, no? but then again it would've been a cheesy soap...? Great chapter dude. keep them coming :)

3rd time reading this story (all the way from Nifty) and still enjoying it! I love the witty writing its fun to read. Hope you will finish it this time Keep it up!

Absolutely love this chapter! It took me a while to read it and enjoyed every moment of it. Love how you list who's in each scene. It helps so much to visualize! When I started reading it absolutely felt like there wasn't a long wait between chapters! But I hope the next one won't be that long. It's amazing how you continue this saga so well during all this time. Keep it up Kyle!

Woah! the plot thickens. this is getting very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter

An awesome chapter as always. Thanks for the much wanted answers. Looking forward for more answers in the coming chapters. Man, can't wait for the next one! I want to learn more about Araziah. Is he going to be as bad as everyone's thinking? And what would Theo choose to do? Keep it up man, can't wait for the next one

Awesome chapter as always. And the Dragon turning in to a boy? That's a surprise! oh the possibilities! Man, Can't wait for the next one

Great story! I just read all 5 chapters in one sitting. It's that good. Cliff hangers and plot points makes you wanting more! Can't wait for the next chapter... BTW how often are you expecting to update this? Keep it up

Finally! After years of waiting, he rewards us with 80K+! It's worth the wait every single day! It's an awesome chapter. I hope and pray we can read Chap 32 sooner!

OMG I'm so hyped to hear abou the soccer boy & karate kid adventures again! You better post weekly Q! Loved the chapter & it brought me back to the universe very smoothly. Keep it up

This story is awesome! It' been a while since I've read good H/D fic. I know this has been written ages ago... But I sure hope you will finish it. And soon. Please tell me you are writing the next chapter already!

Awesome chapter! It took me more than few nights to read it but it's totally worth it! I wasn't expecting this chapter till Christmas so thanks for the early gift! Hope you'll remember us by then too (double the love if you do before December) LannisterEX, could you please give me the links to the artworks? I'd love to see them and yours too! Keep up the good work guys

Oh my God this is an awesome story I read in a while. I read it in 3 nights. All 15 Chapters in 3 nights that's how good it is. I don't mind the lyrics in it as long as they don't ruin the flow of the story. I think your right, don't put all of them (some can be horribly long ) And please don't stop it here, I think there are so many lose ends you need to tie up. I wanna see more hot action and not just Yaoi!!! Looking forward to read the next chapter. Hope you'll put it up soon. Keep up the good work!

Hi Andy,Great chapter & a great story. I'm really glad the Karate Kid cleaned up his head & together with the soccer Boy & it was a great ending.Looking forward to the epilogue. Hope we will see both Pete & Jesse in it a bit more [i will miss them ]Even though the story is finish, don't stop writing. Love to read more of your great stories....

Awww... awesome chapter. I miss Christmas already I'm just curious what Jase got from the op's will... and how would Pete react to it? Since your not a person to leave loose ends, hoping it'll be answered sooner than later. And isn't it time you posted more often?

Andy! You kept us long enough for this chapter. And mate, it's worth every second of it :DYou should've seen my face when I'm reading it. Happiness, sadness, hope & excitement all mixed in & you've portrayed is very well.Looking forward for the next chapter.

thanks for the new chapter Andy. Good to here Pete's condition is improving (although he hasn't woken up yet). Reading the replies for these comments it looks like you enjoy teasing us playing god hey. But I agree with you, being in a coma is not a good thing nor a bad thing. it can go either way Peter waking up doesn't mean he will live either. Death is very mysterious. Even though it has taken so long for us readers, it has been only a couple of days in the story's time line and I think (given my none existing medical knowledge) Pete is doing great during this time. His body is healing fast and the coma might actually help directing energy where its most needed and without dealing with all those emotions if he's a wake. But you know us right, we cannot be satisfied I'm a bit unhappy about the short chapter, you could've combined the next one with this! *pout* Hurry up & finish the last few chapters so we can read what happens to our dream couple soon. Looking for the next LONG chapter soon

'Killinghog' seriously? That's funny. Despite the grim situation I'm glad there's humor in it. As always I liked reading. But I don't like your attitude 'Peter might never wake up' we're all waiting to see the KK getting a full recovery soon. So better not spoil it Andy. Even though I didn't comment on last couple of chapters - got caught up with work, they were awesome too. Looking forward to the next chapter.

As always great chapter.... Wonder what's Barbara going to do. I don't think she'll take told off by his son's 'boyfriend's' mother well. Some thing else to think about.. if Tellermans saw Jese's pic in the news, who else would've seen it? What if Jason's grand parents saw it? and how would it affect the rocky situation.... guess we'll find out soon rite? I mean soon?

As always I loved the chapter. Except for the chapter end note. That scares me. Now Andy, if you do anything mean to either Karate Kid I might have to hunt you down... Looking forward for the next chapter...

OMG... I did not see this coming. After that little "Forgive me Jason" bit from Jordan I didn't think he will actually do anything like this. But I guess when your oldest friend say he didn't want to be friends with you anymore, some stupid idiots tend to do things like this, hey. It's a really great chapter. I feel for Jason & Peter. Especially Jason for what he has in line. He's emotionally a wreck & on Friday he has to deal with Barbra. It won't help his cause. Hope his friends can keep him together. I don't think I can co-op with 2 chapters a week. I'm so addicted I need the next chapter as soon as I finish one... so if it's what you have to offer I'll take it under 1 condition: You better have a happy ending for this story.... at least for Jase & Pete Looking forward to chap. 26.