LukeWren
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Brant seems very interested in how much Hector enjoys all that attention. I'm curious whether Sky will still find it amusing once he meets him.
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A Press Conference and Pyrotechnics
LukeWren commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in A Press Conference and Pyrotechnics
Shiloh blaming Noah again is getting frustrating. After everything that's come out about Jack, he's still looking in the wrong direction. Glad Noah has something much nicer waiting for him at home. -
Calling him Matthew was such a small slip, but enough to make everything feel wrong. Little B and those coloured pencils are a terrifying combination 😂
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The oversized clothes got to me more than Noah saying he was fine. He hadn't even realised he was trying to hide himself until they pointed it out.
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The blind review was a good call. Noah shouldn't have to choose between helping Shiloh personally and shutting him out completely. That ending took a horrible turn, though.
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Chapter 1 All the Colors Under the Sun
LukeWren commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 All the Colors Under the Sun
Warren calling Kellar a monster after everything he's done to him is a bit rich. Glad Kellar got out, but being alone in the woods with no idea what's happened to him is hardly much of an escape yet. -
Shem offering to help when everyone else seems busy looting or covering their tracks made me warm to him straight away. Curious what he's walking into with the Lordling.
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I liked that breaking the silence didn't magically make everything better. That difficult year afterwards gave the ending more weight, especially with the dead finally being named openly.
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Chapter 1- I'ma Need Some Therapy
LukeWren commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 1- I'ma Need Some Therapy
Having your younger self turn up as an unsolicited motivation coach sounds exhausting 😂 Curious whether he’ll actually help Rinlon or just make things worse.
