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    Chapter 2

    Hey John, thanks! I'm glad you don't hate me anymore. Let me hug yah If you do decide to continue reading, hope you enjoy the rest of the story. I'm sure you'll get the chance to find faults in my stories, I have lots of them. Would appreciate if you point them out to me. I do want to get to the point where I can say that I'm a good writer. No luck yet, but I'm trying my best
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    Chapter 1

    Hey John, I did discourage you from reading my stories in chat so don't blame me Anyway, thank you for reading. I do get this feeling that you don't like me that much though. Let me just say this, I'm not a 'winner' like you say. I'm just someone who likes writing stories. The 19 (well 20 now after yours) reviews that you pointed out, well they're not that much. I'm not complaining, just saying. What I'm really getting at is that I'm not half as good as everyone here on GA, but that's ok. I'm proud of my 20 reviews. As long as there's someone out there who seem to like my story, I'll keep posting. So you're barking at the wrong tree (so to speak). I am not and will never be a 'winner', I'm just me
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    It Was a Holy Day

    This is the second time I've read your work, Lugh. I love it! I like the world you've created. Granted that I got confused with all the names, but I love the richness of your world. You can do so much with this story. Now I think I should wait for the next bits grr. But really, I love this. Thanks for sharing
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    Chapter 1

    Hey, Maria. This is one of the first stories I've written. It probably shows, huh? Anyway, thank you so much for reading. And yeah, I've been told I'm a size-queen
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    Chapter 15

    I guess it has to do with the fact that as I post a chapter, we're nearing the end or that I'm just really weird This birthday will either be a success or a disaster.
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    Chapter 15

    Thanks, Aggie I wonder what Coop will do. Any suggestion
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    Chapter 15

    Thanks, Frosty. Again, I'm amazed at how fast you read! Don't mind me, I'm melodramatic lately
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    Chapter 15

    I could have moved to my side to cover Mich from Vern. Taking control of the situation, I should have steered him back inside the bedroom. There were a lot of things I could and should have done. Instead, I stared at Mich’s astonished face and noticed the beads forming on his forehead. “Hi, Vern.” He retreated to the bedroom. The sound of the closing door snapped me back to reality. Vern! My mind raced as I searched for any way I could explain to her what happened. What had exact
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    Train Ride

    Hey RC, thanks for reading. Sorry if this chapter is too short. I totally agree, but it was intentional. I usually keep my first chapters short so that readers won't give up on it if it turns out to be boring. As for cliffhangers, I love them so expect that this story will have lots of them. Cheers!
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    Chapter 4

    Is it me or do you like Joey so much?
  11. jian_sierra

    Chapter 1

    Oh wow, you even read this? Thank you so much. I'm speechless right now
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    Train Ride

    Hey Frosty, this is the story I was talking about in chat. This came so close into being deleted. Anyway, thanks for reading! And I get a 'wow' yay
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    Train Ride

    Hey, Sam, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. In my opinion, the key in solving a mystery is to ask the right questions. Whether you're on the right track or not, only time will tell. Thanks!
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    Chapter 20

    I have a word file of this story and I read them all throughout every now and then. But I'm surprised that you re-read this story. Thank you. Maybe you'll be happy to know that I'm contemplating a continuation of this story? The new story will focus on Joey
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    Chapter 1

    Yep, I rather think this was a happy ending as well. Or rather, a bitter-sweet ending. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. It lets me know that I did something right
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    Train Ride

    Thanks for taking the time to leave a review There won't be that many chapters left as this was originally meant to be a short story. But I'm sure you'll figure out what's happening soon
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    Train Ride

    Well thank you very much for that compliment (I'm taking it as a compliment whether you like it or not).Thanks for reading and writing a review
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    Train Ride

    Well it won't be a mystery if there aren't a lot of 'hints' given out. The vital part here is which 'hints' are relevant in the story and which are not. I'm sorry you don't like Toby, but I like him for the mere fact that he's so confident and at ease with who he is Let's see how the story unfolds...
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    Train Ride

    You have keen eyes. Let's just say that the valium will play some role later on in the story.As for posting soon, my priority is still SB, but I'll squeeze this story in my schedule somehow.Thank you very much for reading and writing a review
  20. The scenery passed unnoticed as my attention centered on my reflection in the glass window. Inside the small compartment, I slumped on my seat, my legs extended in front of me. My free hand rested on the leather seat, the other supported my head. The unsmiling reflection--the malevolence it exuded--made me shiver yet I couldn’t stop watching myself. My mind wondered whether reflections showed the dark side of a person. If so, the person in front of me felt like a stranger. I’m not you. O
  21. Toby meets a guy on his way to visit his grandparents. He was instantly attracted and he got to know a little about the guy. The only problem is that the little he knew about the guy turned out to be lies.
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    Poem: The Bed

    Hey Sam, I really enjoy reading your poems tremendously. The truth was I had to re-read this poem, but only because I feel there's something more to it. And the second time I read it, another 'meaning' came to me. Thank you very much. John
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    Prison Of Hope

    Well that was truly unexpected. Please, please write more. I've enjoyed reading this so much
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    Chapter 1

    I love a poem which I can read without going back because I can't understand what I read meant. This poem just flowed. So using logic, I love this poem Thank you for sharing.
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    Chapter 14

    Well let's see about Luke shall we As for Coop, yes I totally agree. Thanks for leaving a review. I appreciate it very much.
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