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  1. jian_sierra

    Chapter 1

    Far across the horizon There lies a place Which is far beyond the reach Of even our imagination A place immortalized in a song as ‘Somewhere over the rainbow’ I’d like to go there sometime Someday One day Maybe In the bleakest of days When everything seems to go wrong There comes a moment The most sudden of moments A point in time Brief though it maybe That an answer to all your worries Presents itself right before your eyes But then it
  2. jian_sierra

    Beyond

    Random thoughts...
  3. jian_sierra

    Chapter 1

    Can anyone truly fathom the depths of being alone? I guess not if you’ve never been in that state before The seemingly endless days of being by yourself Trapped in your own small senseless sanity Has anyone truly been happy alone, I wonder If I ask a hermit, what do you think he’ll say? Or would my presence affect him somehow His monotonous loneliness broken If people were meant to be together Why are there people alone? Me and you, you and me as one Wi
  4. jian_sierra

    Alone

    My thoughts on being alone...
  5. jian_sierra

    Chapter 1

    More means less When understanding Lacks Over and over Yet still the same Knowledge is beyond Grasp Tossing, turning Frustratingly damning Whoever said Older means wiser? First a thought Then another Before long A thousand thoughts In one small vessel Wondering what Happened How did this Happen? Tired of thinking Introspection Became Self-litigation It’s a win-lose Situation Tried to be busy Worked for a while Wo
  6. jian_sierra

    Confusion

    My thoughts regarding confusion...
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    Chapter 1

    Heart pounding, shallow breaths I think of you from deep within Legs hurt, feet numb I ran toward the Light The more I ran The farther It gets I stumbled forward And broke my nose Blood gushing, teary-eyed Got on my feet and started again Wobbly steps, blurred vision Like a sentient being, the Light beckoned Memories of you came Our happy days together And the day the Light first arrived You were taken in Its bosom Screaming lov
  8. Thanks guys. Much appreciated
  9. Hi guys. Not sure if this is the right place to post this. Really need help with the the development of a storyline. Basically, I'm wondering if a person can get drunk so much that he won't know who he had sex with? I don't drink so I really wouldn't know. I'm thinking the drunk guy knows he had sex, but he could only remember snapshots of the actual deed. As for the mystery guy, he feels he knows him but couldn't place him exactly. Is this storyline believable? Thanks in advance. John
  10. jian_sierra

    Chapter 12

    at least I was able to shock you hehe. Coop has a lot of explaining to do.
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    Chapter 12

    Cheers to you too and thanks Oh Coop I just wanna hug him.
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    Chapter 12

    Mich... “I’m sorry, I didn’t know. I am an insensitive prick.” Fuck, fuck, fuck. As I spoke more words asking for forgiveness, Mich turned more pensive. Looking at him, I felt the urge to comfort him. I wanted to hug him, let him know he wasn’t alone. I’m here. A slight wind blew. Mich closed his eyes and I distinctly saw a single tear fell down his face. Letting go of my inhibitions, I laid beside him close enough for our shoulders to be pressed together. “Mich, I—” Befo
  13. jian_sierra

    Chapter 1

    Hey RC, I should be the one thanking you for reading. Glad you like the story so far. Hope you still do in the coming chapters. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review
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    Chapter 11

    Hey Leicht sorry for the constant cliffhangers. Sadly, there's more to come :(As for the next chapter, I hope it's soon Thanks for the review
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    Chapter 11

    Hey Agaith,Thanks for the review. I'm glad Coop and Mich are together too. Hope they can help each other.As for more, well I'll try to write or at least pretend that what I do is write
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    Chapter 11

    Sorry for making you wait. I'm dealing with some insecurities right now which makes me doubt a lot of things. But I'm glad you seem to like this chapter. I wasn't entirely sure about posting it Thanks for reviewing.
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    Chapter 11

    What are you boys doing? Grandpa's words rang in my ears. I wanted to look away from Grandpa but couldn’t. His eyes—so much like Mich’s, yet I gazed at them in a different way. When I peered at Mich’s eyes, I longed to know what was going on in his head. With Grandpa, right now, I really didn’t want to know. Something about them freaked me out. Briefly, my gaze moved toward Mich. His head was lowered—ashamed at being caught? Look up, look at me. My heart sank lower when he didn’t
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    Chapter 3: Mood

    Hey Sam, Sorry for not keeping in touch. Glad I was able to read your poem. Thanks very much for sharing. I enjoyed reading this one for its flow. Congrats
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    Story

    I'm grinning so big after reading your review. Thank you very much for the review Cheers!
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    Story

    Thanks AleMaho. Sorry about the time confusion
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    Chapter 10

    Oh Frosty, thanks so much for reading. Glad you like the chapter. Cheers!
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    Chapter 10

    I'm hoping it leads them somewhere nice Thanks for reading.
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    Chapter 10

    For the first time, I looked at Mich without fear of being caught. His cheeks further reddened to the point of being… unnatural. I didn’t care, he started this, right? He could have let me walk away, but he had to go kiss me. Those damned lips! Those damn lips. I wonder what he’d do if I kiss him? “Stop it already.” He didn’t seem irritated. Instead, he sounded embarrassed. Cute. “I’m not doing—” “Hell you’re not. I feel like a fish in an aquarium or an animal in the zoo the way you’re
  24. Hey Anyta, I'm glad you haven't given up on me (or this story hehe). Will try to finish the chapter before Christmas
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