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I totally agree with MikeTx8. This is so wrong. I forget WTF this story is about. Something about a storm........
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Certifying Doomsday cliffhanger-free
donkehoti replied to C James's topic in C James Fan Club's Topics
I totally, 100%, agree with CJ. Doomsday was not a cliff hanger, and to think differently you all must be reading an entirely different story than I. -
I have stuck with you for 3 years. I have been depressed on and off all week when I think of the possible outcome for our boys (and girl). I will pass my final judgement after I have read the final chapter and epilogue. Three years?!!!! Jeez. You think I would get a life.
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This is a really good chapter. I'm sorry I will have to wait two weeks for the next. But I look forward to reading Infinite Density.
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Dang! Pins and needles. Great chapter. You know I found myself kinda rooting for Bridget. To me anybody that had their escape that planned deserved to get away. It would have been a letdown to get her to her destination and then have them blow her out of the water, tho I don't trust Sanchez. I actually think you should let her survive that way you could resurrect both her and Gonzales in a future book.
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Great chapter! However, Matt is turning into a little bitch. But he remains one of my favorite characters in the saga.
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And the Sea shall give up its Dead
donkehoti commented on C James's story chapter in And the Sea shall give up its Dead
Great chapter CJ. So the secret witness is probably the same person that is on the dock. And I think I know who. If so, I sure hope you are able to give a reasonable explanation. Have you noticed when you are in Florida the plot really moves forward at a rapid pace, but just marches in place when in Australia? Nonetheless, you are great. -
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This chapter was really really good. It flowed effortlessly from point A to point B and it made sense. Also, even though nothing extraordinary happened but just by starting to connect the plot points, you are making me (the reader) keep tense from the moment we log in. Great Job. And I am remiss for not saying great job on your other stories. I have read them all. Thanks.
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Chapter 10 - A Day Not For Rest
donkehoti commented on Jack Scribe's story chapter in Chapter 10 - A Day Not For Rest
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I agree with daddydavek above. This is a fabulous story. I was even willing to accept that J & P might not end up together. But to promise us an epilogue then drop it cold right when it was getting interesting saying "fini". I said to myself well FU. Then I felt a whole lot better when I read in one of your comments that you were planning on covering the trial in another story. Yea, I was placated somewhat. Aside from that irritant you are a really really good story teller.
