Yes, you are right about Jordan. He does have a long journey ahead of him, and he will need everyone to get to get him through. Ah, whoever hired Lucas to 'misinform' David is the killer. The notes... well no true master mind does his own dirty work does he?
Yes, I do love each and every character, and I try and make them as realistic and unique as possible. I am quite attached to these characters. They are part of me, and even though this story has had many versions, their personalities have always stayed the same. I nearly have the next chapter finished. When I finished I will send it off to my girls for editing which can be a lengthy process. We just want to make sure everything gets a good as we can get it thought. You shouldn't have to wait more than a couple weeks . As for the AJ thing don't sweat it. Just call me Holly. I look forward to your future reviews!