Parchment_Of_Love

Well, now that I'm stuck inside because of my broken foot I will be updating more regularly now. Maybe a chapter every two weeks if your lucky .

Glad you like it. Jordan is a tough kid and that's all i'm saying .

Chapter Twenty Three Is This Reality? As Drew neared the bed in which his brother lay, he could feel the tears that began to brim his eyes, noticing the battered and bruised state Jordan was in, and he took support from Luke squeezing his hand. Jordan’s face was pale and the skin was sunken in. He was basically a bag of bones. There were stitches above his right eye. Tubes and needles tangled around him, most of which connected to miscellaneous machines. Drew was flashing back to those n

That my dear that is the big question . I will tell you that the person who shot Rose (who was aiming for Luke) is the same person who killed Tyler and framed Luke. When James threatened Drew he meant he would have someone who worked for him to commit the act. As for the police, well they seem to only show up when absolutely necessary.

Actually, I will be updating very soon; within the week. The chapters should just roll out from there. Not saying you will get a chapter every week, but they will come more often then 3 times a year . As for your review . Really made my day. Reviews fuel my work. I write to please my readers and when I know I am doing that I work even harder. So thanks for turning my dull day to technicolor!

Alright, I have been in a relationship with a guy for about 3 1/2 months now. He is really sweet, but lately I'm just not sure what to make of him. Here is the situation... I live four hours away because of college. He is really paranoid about me cheating because he has been cheated on before. I would never cheat on him because I have also been cheated on. Around a month ago I got a message on here from a new guy claiming to like my work. I replied back thanking him and welcoming him to the site. He then proceeded to hit on me and I politely told him I had a boyfriend which sparked a conversation on the relationship. I didn't think anything of it until about two weeks later. Me and the bf had a weekend away and while in the hotel I was on his computer. On his google chrome I saw that GA popped up on the recently visited page. I was being a creeper and was wondering if he had been reading my work so I clicked on it. He was signed in as the guy that had been talking to me...-.- I nearly left him at the hotel and drove home. I mean who does that? When I confronted him his excuse was the he was afraid something was going on. I get we are in a long distance relationship and that he has doubts but dang that was a huge breech of trust to me. I told him to drop it and we would just forget about it but it still bothers me. Then there was the mushy factor. I couldn't open my phone or check my facebook without something along the lines of 'Oh baby I miss you so much, I love you, I can't wait to hold you in my arms, blah, blah, blah.' It was getting to the point where I quite honestly wanted to puke. So, I called him last week and told him. Hey, you gotta cut out the mushy gushy stuff. He went haywire and I literally spent like an hour on the phone with him about it. He cut out the mushy but tonight he really bugged me which, is the reason for this plea for advice. He calls and wakes me up from a really good sleep and was like "Hey, what are you doing." I replied with "Sleeping." Then he was like well it says you were on facebook like 4 minutes ago. At that point I was a bit irritated. First of all my computer was on the floor beside my bed out of reach and second I felt like he was accusing me of lying. I told him i had been asleep and he was like, "Well that is what it said." Then continued on and mention that I didn't answer his texts. I would also like to point out the fact that I feel like he could read this because he is secretly stalking my profile...I don't think I should feel that way... Okay, that was basically a book. Any advice? similar situations? Snide comments? All is welcome.

Yay! Desired response achieved

I'm glad that you like it!

Some of the chapters have not been edited, but yes i know what you mean. Were there any in this chapter?

Some of the chapters have not been edited, but yes i know what you mean. Were there any in this chapter?

I'm happy you like the new direction.

One day earlier… Jordan shook visibly in the passenger’s seat of the old blue Chevy pick-up as James Knight drove toward the house in which Jordan had been held captive for the past six months. James had dragged Jordan to the store in order to keep up the occasional appearance so the neighbors didn’t get suspicious. The story being that he was home schooled due to his extreme social awkwardness. James did not worry too much about anyone recognizing Jordan due to his recent growth spurt. His fa

I'm proud and you are forgiven =) and we will discuss it again soon.

I am really happy you like my work. I hope to finish eventually. I am really sorry that this hit so close to home since Luke and David have had such hard times. I do hope you are doing okay now. Hugs, Holly

If someone were to put a book out on this I think it would be a best seller . Now, I'm very simple when it comes to my oreos. I dunk them in milk, eat them, then finish off my milk and normally have to get a refill.

Well, I live in a dorm so It differs, but the most usual is: I come in kick of the day shoes and slip on the house shoes. I grab a drink and my laptop and sit them on the bed so I can get a running start and make the insanely high jump to get on said bed. After that I just chill. Simple yet very relaxing and is almost always followed by a nap .

Your welcome =]. The chapter will be coming more regularly now so no more six monmth breaks lol. Expect an update next week.

Don't worry dear both of my stories will be continued. I just got done moving and such and i don't yet have internet at my new house, plus i have a mild case of writers block =0. NO worries though. Drew and Luke will have and ending as will jake and Donovan. Thanks for your words of encouragement. Hugs, Holly

I'll think about it.

I have to say that I loved this. I have read all the twilight books and seen some of the Harry Potter movies. I never liked Bella so this was perfect lol. Plus, when I saw Robert Pattison and Daniel Radcliff in that Harry Potter movie I was like OMG! Chick boner! However, you do have a ton of typos and grammitical errors that really distract from the storry (now I know how people who read my un-edited work feel ). Nevertheless, I liked your work. I would suggest reading back and correcting a few things or ask someone to edit it though. Smiles, Holly

I thought this was a wonderful story. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Great job .

Hmmm...The Final Hour by Comicality is good, Escaping the pain by Cia, Black Star Cross by Young Sage... These may or may not help but they are all great reads anyhow. Try sniffing around authors. You normally can find someone that deals with the genre your looking for. Welcome to GA BTW

Jeans without pockets?! No, no, no. I have to have my pockets for my loose change and a place to put my hands. I fidget often and if I don't have pockets I feel awkward. I must have pockets...they make me feel safe and warm on the inside.

To sleep I have to be down right tired. When I'm not I usually write or you tube it out until a can't keep my eyes open. When that doesn't work I turn off the lights and put on some nature music.

Welcome to GA! As for your story I have no idea. It may be smart to look at authors that write in that genre.