Parchment_Of_Love

I don't know about seeing chapters faster. Sorry, but you will just have to take what you can get. This story sometimes get left in the back of my mind to simmer. I should have the next chapter up by the beginning of July though. As for a snitch in Raul's army, well with a leader like him there is bound to be one don't you think? Thank you! I am so happy that you like it! When i began the story I wanted a completely new version of vampire to be established. I'm happy to hear you like the result of my imagination.

I completely agree with you.

I like One Direction not because they are cute British boy's either. I clicked a related video on YouTube once and found their video diaries. They are actually pretty hilarious to watch. I am a fan and I love their songs. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ppJ4KuJ6yAM&feature=related

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I think what my friend it trying to convey in this story is that Spencer is a very strong person at heart. My point is she is trying to show people that no matter how horrible things get you shouldn't give up.True he has been through hell and most people would not survive what he has gone through, but he is a tough little cookie. No one has said Spencer is not scarred for life by his tormentors I mean they can be pretty viscous at times. Point being is that her message is "to never give up". Riley and Dexter..yeah their assholes, but if you continue to read the story you will eventually understand why they think their actions against him are justified.

So, after finding a discussion thread for one of my other stories I had forgotten about I decided to create one for this story. Please feel free to ask any questions you like. I promise to reply. I write the story as I go along and feedback definitely helps.

Sorry about not replying to you sooner, but no one seems to ever post on here and I sort of forgot it existed. Sorry about that. Sorry about the grammatical mistakes, but I didn't have an editor when Always was on e-fiction. When I transferred the story here I found Frosty and she just hasn't had time to go back and edit all the chapters for me. All the latest chapters have been thoroughly edited though. There may be a couple mistakes, but we are all human. I do hope you are still a reader of the story.

I like One Direction. I think they are funny as all get out. I like their music as well. That is Just me though .

What a wonderful review! I am very happy you are enjoying the story. One must realize that Jordan know nothing of the danger Luke is in or the trauma he has been through. So you really can't blame Jordan. Plus, he has saw a lot of people use his brother in the past. It is normal that Jordan is questioning Luke's motives. Now, David and Jordan... that is a whole different story for another time. I hope you do continue to leave reviews! If you have any questions you can PM or leave another review. Hugs, Holly.

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. As for Jordan not trusting Luke.. Jordan has been through a lot and he is just protective over his brother; just like Drew is with him.

“You should have just told me,” Jordan said as he looked his brother in the eye. “You could have said, ‘Yeah, Luke is my boyfriend’ and I wouldn't have cared. Well, I care, but I wouldn’t have let it come between us.” It had been two days since Jordan was found and he was being released from the hospital the following day. Drew and Jordan had been successfully avoiding the topic of Luke since his and Drew’s relationship had been brought into the light. “Yeah, I just…I never really brought the

I will and thanks!

Well, now that I'm stuck inside because of my broken foot I will be updating more regularly now. Maybe a chapter every two weeks if your lucky .

Glad you like it. Jordan is a tough kid and that's all i'm saying .

Chapter Twenty Three Is This Reality? As Drew neared the bed in which his brother lay, he could feel the tears that began to brim his eyes, noticing the battered and bruised state Jordan was in, and he took support from Luke squeezing his hand. Jordan’s face was pale and the skin was sunken in. He was basically a bag of bones. There were stitches above his right eye. Tubes and needles tangled around him, most of which connected to miscellaneous machines. Drew was flashing back to those n

That my dear that is the big question . I will tell you that the person who shot Rose (who was aiming for Luke) is the same person who killed Tyler and framed Luke. When James threatened Drew he meant he would have someone who worked for him to commit the act. As for the police, well they seem to only show up when absolutely necessary.

Actually, I will be updating very soon; within the week. The chapters should just roll out from there. Not saying you will get a chapter every week, but they will come more often then 3 times a year . As for your review . Really made my day. Reviews fuel my work. I write to please my readers and when I know I am doing that I work even harder. So thanks for turning my dull day to technicolor!

Alright, I have been in a relationship with a guy for about 3 1/2 months now. He is really sweet, but lately I'm just not sure what to make of him. Here is the situation... I live four hours away because of college. He is really paranoid about me cheating because he has been cheated on before. I would never cheat on him because I have also been cheated on. Around a month ago I got a message on here from a new guy claiming to like my work. I replied back thanking him and welcoming him to the site. He then proceeded to hit on me and I politely told him I had a boyfriend which sparked a conversation on the relationship. I didn't think anything of it until about two weeks later. Me and the bf had a weekend away and while in the hotel I was on his computer. On his google chrome I saw that GA popped up on the recently visited page. I was being a creeper and was wondering if he had been reading my work so I clicked on it. He was signed in as the guy that had been talking to me...-.- I nearly left him at the hotel and drove home. I mean who does that? When I confronted him his excuse was the he was afraid something was going on. I get we are in a long distance relationship and that he has doubts but dang that was a huge breech of trust to me. I told him to drop it and we would just forget about it but it still bothers me. Then there was the mushy factor. I couldn't open my phone or check my facebook without something along the lines of 'Oh baby I miss you so much, I love you, I can't wait to hold you in my arms, blah, blah, blah.' It was getting to the point where I quite honestly wanted to puke. So, I called him last week and told him. Hey, you gotta cut out the mushy gushy stuff. He went haywire and I literally spent like an hour on the phone with him about it. He cut out the mushy but tonight he really bugged me which, is the reason for this plea for advice. He calls and wakes me up from a really good sleep and was like "Hey, what are you doing." I replied with "Sleeping." Then he was like well it says you were on facebook like 4 minutes ago. At that point I was a bit irritated. First of all my computer was on the floor beside my bed out of reach and second I felt like he was accusing me of lying. I told him i had been asleep and he was like, "Well that is what it said." Then continued on and mention that I didn't answer his texts. I would also like to point out the fact that I feel like he could read this because he is secretly stalking my profile...I don't think I should feel that way... Okay, that was basically a book. Any advice? similar situations? Snide comments? All is welcome.

Yay! Desired response achieved

I'm glad that you like it!

Some of the chapters have not been edited, but yes i know what you mean. Were there any in this chapter?

Some of the chapters have not been edited, but yes i know what you mean. Were there any in this chapter?

I'm happy you like the new direction.

One day earlier… Jordan shook visibly in the passenger’s seat of the old blue Chevy pick-up as James Knight drove toward the house in which Jordan had been held captive for the past six months. James had dragged Jordan to the store in order to keep up the occasional appearance so the neighbors didn’t get suspicious. The story being that he was home schooled due to his extreme social awkwardness. James did not worry too much about anyone recognizing Jordan due to his recent growth spurt. His fa

I love a good HS drama lol, but it must have some spice to it for it to tickle my interest. I'm not a big sci fi fan unless it has a modern feel to it. I normally look for the geek/jock stories that zland666 goes for. If the description sounds good though I always give them a glance.