Jump to content

Parchment_Of_Love

Author
  • Posts

    380
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by Parchment_Of_Love

  1. Oh, you have no idea. *evil grin*
  2. Thank you. I do try my best
  3. Parchment_Of_Love

    David

    There are plenty typos, but there are some plot mistakes as well. Are they story progressed the plot grew and changed, and now I have to fix all the beginning chapters to make it tie in together, but the general idea is still the same. I really am glad you are enjoying to story so much. I must be doing my job if I can spark that kind of emotion in my readers. Hugs, Holly
  4. Yeah, chapter 14 is one of those fluffy chapters that I love so much. Although, I would suggest reading chapters 13 & 14 again once they are edited. A lot on the information in the conversations will change.
  5. That is just Luke. He can't help but be a cute tease. I had a roommate that had a pet snake. I would leave the room when he fed it. Not pretty.
  6. I had too much fun writing that scene! ou really have no idea
  7. Thanks girl! I owe it all to you and Frosty!
  8. Might as well feel bad for all of them . I mean I am horrible to my characters.
  9. Your right, Drew doesn't give up once he sets his mind to something, which is something to remember. Luke himself is very protective, and he hates the isolation, but he would rather be isolated than to have harm come to anyone.
  10. Your right, Drew doesn't give up once he sets his mind to something, which is something to remember. Luke himself is very protective, and he hates the isolation, but he would rather be isolated than to have harm come to anyone.
  11. I really am glad you like the story so much. If you have any questions that you want answered or anything you want to discuss there is a link to the forum at the bottom of each chapter. Happy reading! Hugs, Holly
  12. Drew's step dad was just an ass in general. You find out the whole story in chapter 13 I believe, but that chapter hasn't been edited yet so I would wait to read it.Much of it will be changed. I really love that you are reviewing as you read btw. Keep it up & thanks for reading.
  13. Thank you so much!
  14. The boys have a lot of work ahead of them concerning this mystery. Yes, the next chapter will be out much sooner than this one . Thanks for your review Lisa.Hugs, Holly
  15. Jane was woken up by Luke in the middle of the night. Jordan had come to his and Drew’s room in hysterics claiming that James was in his bedroom. All Drew could do was pull Jordan into his arms and try and calm him down. Jordan didn’t seem to come back to reality until Jane came into the room and took Drew’s place. When Jane finally convinced Jordan that James was dead, he went back to sleep. However, an hour later Drew and Jane both heard a loud crash from Jordan’s room. Drew quietly got out
  16. Thank you! I have been trying to say that forever. Way to go! Smiles, Holly
  17. I am happy that you like it! I'm not sure when the next chapter will be ready, but I would keep an eye out for it within the next couple weeks. Happy reading! Hugs, Holly
  18. I'm so sorry to hear about your illness. I do hope you are doing well . I am glad you enjoy my work. It make me happy knowing it entertains you . I hope you enjoy the new chapters. My editor has only made it through the first four chapters, but we are working hard to get through them all. Lots of hugs, Holly
  19. Jordan is just like his older brother who is just like their original father. Hopefully, Luke will be able to gain Jordan's trust, but until then he will continue to give him a hard time. As for Drew and Luke, yes they deserve to be happy & free, but life is very unpredictable and more often then not unfair. Only time will tell what the future holds for our beloved boys. Thank you for the wonderful review. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as it is posted. Hugs, Holly
  20. Ah, yes the task of getting evidence that will stand up against the mayor will not be easy. As for Drew and Luke being scared..Fear is definitely present in Drew and Luke's minds, but they have been through so much that they know better then to let their fear control them. When it comes to Jordan things get complicated. He is obviously screwed up, but he is trying to act as normal as possible in front of his family, but sometimes his walls come crashing down (as you will see in the next chapter). Jordan knows he is being hard on Luke, but Jordan is simply trying to bring himself to trust another male. I am happy you like the chapter and I look forward to more reviews from you .
  21. I love how everyone is loving my version of vampires. I must admit I am fond of it also . Anyway, you wont see much of Mire and Tim in the next chapter because it basically deals with the proposal, bu you will learn all about Mire and Tim in chapter in depth in 19 or 20. When I was first writing the story Tim was actually a throw away character, but then I fell in love with him =). So, Tim somehow became a key factor in the story as i went along. I had originally thought about mating Amy with Mire and then I was like, "No, this is way better!". Thanks for your kind words and keep an eye out for the next chapter either tonight or tomorrow. Hugs & Smiles, Holly
  22. Drew twisted in Luke’s embrace as the sun beamed through their bedroom window. Luke yawned before pulling Drew closer in his arms and snuggling deeper into the covers. They could both smell the scents of fresh coffee and bacon wafting through the house. “I smell breakfast,” Drew mumbled into Luke’s chest. “Me too, but it is so warm under here with you,” Luke said with his eyes closed. “I know but we have a lot to do today. The press conference is at ten.” Drew felt Luke’s embrace tighten. “Yo
  23. I haven't read the first one (I plan to), but A Hero in the Hallways was wonderful. I loved it!
×
×
  • Create New...