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    David

    Parchment_Of_Love commented on Parchment_Of_Love's story chapter in David

    There are plenty typos, but there are some plot mistakes as well. Are they story progressed the plot grew and changed, and now I have to fix all the beginning chapters to make it tie in together, but the general idea is still the same. I really am glad you are enjoying to story so much. I must be doing my job if I can spark that kind of emotion in my readers. Hugs, Holly
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    Yeah, chapter 14 is one of those fluffy chapters that I love so much. Although, I would suggest reading chapters 13 & 14 again once they are edited. A lot on the information in the conversations will change.
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    That is just Luke. He can't help but be a cute tease. I had a roommate that had a pet snake. I would leave the room when he fed it. Not pretty.
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    I had too much fun writing that scene! ou really have no idea
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    Thank you!
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    Thanks girl! I owe it all to you and Frosty!
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    Might as well feel bad for all of them . I mean I am horrible to my characters.
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    Your right, Drew doesn't give up once he sets his mind to something, which is something to remember. Luke himself is very protective, and he hates the isolation, but he would rather be isolated than to have harm come to anyone.
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    Your right, Drew doesn't give up once he sets his mind to something, which is something to remember. Luke himself is very protective, and he hates the isolation, but he would rather be isolated than to have harm come to anyone.
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    I really am glad you like the story so much. If you have any questions that you want answered or anything you want to discuss there is a link to the forum at the bottom of each chapter. Happy reading! Hugs, Holly
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    Drew's step dad was just an ass in general. You find out the whole story in chapter 13 I believe, but that chapter hasn't been edited yet so I would wait to read it.Much of it will be changed. I really love that you are reviewing as you read btw. Keep it up & thanks for reading.
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    Thank you so much!
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    The boys have a lot of work ahead of them concerning this mystery. Yes, the next chapter will be out much sooner than this one . Thanks for your review Lisa.Hugs, Holly
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    Complications

    Parchment_Of_Love posted new chapter in Always

    Jane was woken up by Luke in the middle of the night. Jordan had come to his and Drew’s room in hysterics claiming that James was in his bedroom. All Drew could do was pull Jordan into his arms and try and calm him down. Jordan didn’t seem to come back to reality until Jane came into the room and took Drew’s place. When Jane finally convinced Jordan that James was dead, he went back to sleep. However, an hour later Drew and Jane both heard a loud crash from Jordan’s room. Drew quietly got out
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    Jordan is just like his older brother who is just like their original father. Hopefully, Luke will be able to gain Jordan's trust, but until then he will continue to give him a hard time. As for Drew and Luke, yes they deserve to be happy & free, but life is very unpredictable and more often then not unfair. Only time will tell what the future holds for our beloved boys. Thank you for the wonderful review. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as it is posted. Hugs, Holly
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    Ah, yes the task of getting evidence that will stand up against the mayor will not be easy. As for Drew and Luke being scared..Fear is definitely present in Drew and Luke's minds, but they have been through so much that they know better then to let their fear control them. When it comes to Jordan things get complicated. He is obviously screwed up, but he is trying to act as normal as possible in front of his family, but sometimes his walls come crashing down (as you will see in the next chapter). Jordan knows he is being hard on Luke, but Jordan is simply trying to bring himself to trust another male. I am happy you like the chapter and I look forward to more reviews from you .
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    Drew twisted in Luke’s embrace as the sun beamed through their bedroom window. Luke yawned before pulling Drew closer in his arms and snuggling deeper into the covers. They could both smell the scents of fresh coffee and bacon wafting through the house. “I smell breakfast,” Drew mumbled into Luke’s chest. “Me too, but it is so warm under here with you,” Luke said with his eyes closed. “I know but we have a lot to do today. The press conference is at ten.” Drew felt Luke’s embrace tighten. “Yo
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    I haven't read the first one (I plan to), but A Hero in the Hallways was wonderful. I loved it!
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    I like One Direction not because they are cute British boy's either. I clicked a related video on YouTube once and found their video diaries. They are actually pretty hilarious to watch. I am a fan and I love their songs. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ppJ4KuJ6yAM&feature=related
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    Possibly
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    I like One Direction. I think they are funny as all get out. I like their music as well. That is Just me though .
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    What a wonderful review! I am very happy you are enjoying the story. One must realize that Jordan know nothing of the danger Luke is in or the trauma he has been through. So you really can't blame Jordan. Plus, he has saw a lot of people use his brother in the past. It is normal that Jordan is questioning Luke's motives. Now, David and Jordan... that is a whole different story for another time. I hope you do continue to leave reviews! If you have any questions you can PM or leave another review. Hugs, Holly.
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    I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. As for Jordan not trusting Luke.. Jordan has been through a lot and he is just protective over his brother; just like Drew is with him.
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    “You should have just told me,” Jordan said as he looked his brother in the eye. “You could have said, ‘Yeah, Luke is my boyfriend’ and I wouldn't have cared. Well, I care, but I wouldn’t have let it come between us.” It had been two days since Jordan was found and he was being released from the hospital the following day. Drew and Jordan had been successfully avoiding the topic of Luke since his and Drew’s relationship had been brought into the light. “Yeah, I just…I never really brought the
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    I will and thanks!
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