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Lol awwwww snuggles all round Anyway gogo Jayden show that psycho she aint gonna break ya ......well until Nephy decides she is anyway. Almost made me feel sorry for Anya i mean ok she grew a pair at the end there and paid the price it seems but then she did side with Kelly and anyone who helps her out is not on my christmas card list thats for sure Not long left and I fear help is here but unless Cals blew the door of its hinges with a shotgun I do believe its still advantage Kelly and shes serving for the match, although to complete the tennis analogy shes also British so it stands to reason shell choke and it will all go wrong

Hey 2 Chapters in and wow. Have to say i am agreein with the other reprobates postin here that youve set your stall out very well on this. I'm looking forward to the journey we are all gonna take on this one but also what Nephy said, Take your time live your life and write at your own pace. Your only young once and you have to make it last as long as you can, hell I managed to stay 19 for 8 years but then it all caught up with me and now I just cant do it anymore

So does that mean if I say Nephy was gone what when I didnt notice you will be nice to them? Just a hypothetical at the moment of course

hehehe. You are right tho i did see camels in the Welsh Mountain Zoo a few months ago and it wasnt a very nice smell but you know panto camels are rumoured to be amongst the cleanest and most noble of all the panto creatures. As for Nephy she could just be throwing you off the scent ya know lulling you into a false sense of security before she hits you with a real tearjerker I wouldnt put it past her at least.

If you really cant find a Camel me and Phana will get a pantomine 1 mocked up and play the role out for ya. After all its the least we can do. Im playin the front tho as I can honestly say on my list of things to do before i die playing the ass end of a camel hasnt even made the top 1000 and its my panto camel so I get 1st pick . Of course we will have to change the scene slightly if thats the case because even if it does tatse like chicken im not eatin. Let me think..... OK how about and then a camel pops along gathers all the remains in a jar and packs it off to front row seats at every venue of a Spice Girls reunion tour. Actually come to think of it thats much harsher than just being eaten Cheers Phana btw I usually just say what im thinkin without filterin so it does sometimes get me into trouble

Activating finger wag emote Nephy Enough said

Haha ist Salt n Pepper Chips or for the people over the pond I suppose i should say Salt n Pepper fries (its basically chips firied with chillies, onions and green peppers with a few other bits). Seriously next time you visit the chippy see if they are on the menu and I promise you will never go back. The chippy by mine does em in 3 styles Mild - Sheer perfection yummy tasty and easy to eat Medium - Bit of a kick they take Mild up a notch in taste as well Hot - OMG talk about blow my head off these bad boys kick like a horse and a camrel combined are the ones I always get and by the end of it I cant feel my mouth but they are soooooooo good. Anyway enough im bloody starvin thinkin bout em now So onto the serious note who is going to die well I gave it some serious thought and decided the most likely outcome since Kelly and Anya are off limits is Kelly kills somenody. For that reason I think Jayden is safe. She wants him to suffer and that would be to easy for him. with that in mind I think Cals also safe, the likelihood is if she killed Cal Jayden would just shut down completel and it would be the same effect as if she had killed him. That left me with only 1 serious contender poor poor Luc. Lets be honest while his death would devastate Jayden it would not cause him to shut down especially if Cal is still alive. It will also cement the fact that Kelly is quite psycotic in his mind. Considering Luc has been her biggest supporter this will give Jayden some serious concerns about what else she has in store for him and will actually cause him much more pain than if she killed Cal as instead of shutting down emotionally hes going to keep replaying it in his mind but with Cal in his place. As for the how im pretty sure she has prepared for them following her. The nuts neighbour was to convenient, if she didnt want them to follow she would not have mentioned to anyone where she was going, that leads me to believe she is ready for them. Im also pretty sure its not gonna be a quick death something tells me she has some toys that will come in very handy for such an occasion. I can see torture pain and death in his future. Of course this is also where Kelly could lose Anya for all intents and purposes Lucs an innocent in this as far as she is concerned and in killing him Kelly could set of the chain of events which culminate in the final chapter. anyway thats my actual prediction since the earlier one was shall we say a little far fetched

I dont think we come close Nephy lol. Where do you want them though here or PM?. I suppose the car rocks grand piano and wild animals are out so ill have to come up with something devilishly fiendish and worthy of a bond villain though the who I already have sorted

Hehe Llamas would work Im also open to the prospect of a Goat or a Wild Boar. As for the prospect of cats I have my own evil duo consisting of 1 eating machine and 1 that I do believe is using me as part of her bid to rule the world, watch this space I wouldnt be suprised if she made her move pretty soon. Anyway onto Anya, Im willing to concede that we haven't seen an awful lot of her and what little we have seen shes been the lesser of the 2 evils so she would be allowed to roll out of the car before it went over the cliff.providing she gives me reason to allow it Something is tellin me that Jayden is going to survive this for everything he has been through and for all the pain he has endured I just dont se him dying at the end of it. Unfortunately the others dont seem to be as clear. I can totally see Kelly and Cal in some sort of standoff at the end where one or both of them go in a blaze of glory as for Anya im gonna read another chapter before I make a full on decision in that regard she is a late arrival though so it does offer her some protection Defo grippin stuff here Nephy and it does seem to be building towards an explosive and potentially catastrophic ending im certainly on theedge of my seat

Hehehe I use coke as a mixer its prob the Salt n Pepper Chips your refering to but they are food and by food i mean the food of the gods. Have to agree on the cold hearted part though Last time I was properly devastated by something I read or watched Im pretty sure was when I watched Watership Down at about 10 years of age. I also remember ET used to really upset me even though I knew the 2nd, 3rd etc times that he wasnt really dead. I usually go with the it will all work out in the end mantra and just refuse to be upset. I also wont say she didnt come close on several occasions but I managed to reign it in I think it was just that incredibly sad and happy moment in Enigma at Davids grave where my willpower and the surgical removal of my tear ducts failed hehe. As for how its gonna end I really cant call it, of course I want the happy Cal and Jayden lock themselves away for 6 months and try to have eachothers babies meanwhile Kelly and Anya accidentally drive off a cliff land on some seriously sharp spikey rocks then somebody drops a grand piano on them and finally the car explodes and their remains get eaten by camels but somehow I cant see that happening. Im not ruling out Evil Nephy striking a final blow though especially as Hostage most definately used up our quota of happiness for this year and the 1st half of next

Hehe I knew Kelly was bad news I just couldnt see this being a good choice for Jayden. Altough now that hes there and hes in that position again Im wonderin if we are gonna see the right results born out of all the wrong reasons. For want of a better way to phrase it Jaydens got his chance all over again he was powerless when his parents had him there but if he can hold it together and see himself through this he may just end up all the better for it. That being said he may also not survive it so this ones still pretty much on a knife edge, I really cant call how its gonna end I see a messy end for our 2 coniving witches when the rest of the band and esp Cal get their hands on em. I certainly cant see Cal knocking politely and waiting for an invite thats for sure Have to agree with the others who are grrrrring at ya tho Nephy this one has so many twists and turns im not even sure what way im facing still I kept my tears in check and I maintain that you will never get more than that 1 tear you had from me when I read Enigma and I swear I had somethin in my eye at the time

Nooooooooo, I hate cliff hangers, I may just have to not read it until the next chapter goes up as well. Oh who am I kiddin I will still read it even knowin theres a cliff hanger And the neighbour seemed to be a sandwich short of a picnic if you ask me altho I think weve all had neighbours like that. Im not sure if I do atm though as I dont even know who my neighbour is or what she looks like been livein here 4 years and I only found out 3 months ago its a she so mu powers of obs arent to hot it would seem. As for food and vodka can ya blame me if I was religious id believe that vodka and salt n pepper chips where brought about by divine intervention

Oooooh I got Sweet n Sour Chicken with hot Salt n Pepper chips, a nice ice cold vodka and a fresh chapter its like its my birthday or somethin The plot thickens it seems an appearance from sis #2 is about to happen poor Jay was nowhere in sight and Cals goin mental. Im distrustin that wench (love that word but hardly get chance to use it) of a sister even more and she wasnt even in this chapter...........sorry just found another piece of chicken mmmmmm. Anyhow apologies for my unenforced absence my graphics card blew up and ive spent the last 4 days reinstallin and patchin everything and redownloadin everything i own talk about a pain in the ass. Good to see ya back nephy and hope ya feelin ok

Im still deeply suspicious of Kelly or maybe Im just with Cal and dont like her. Poor Jayden does seem to be on a downward spiral here and is practically in freefall, I just hope when he does hit the bottom theres enough of him left to start climbing back up again after all theres another wedding to plan now. .......... Hehe just kiddin Nephy however this one pans out its certainly gonna be one hell of a ride

Well Nephy I gave the 3 stories you offered us a chance to settle, applied some complex mathmatical formulae, run a pros and cons analysis and then did some in depth soul searching and I am happy to announce that I have narrowed your next story down to one of 3 choices 1. Project X 2. Vampire Lightly 3. The Face in the Window What I suggest we do now is have an X-Factorish marathon where for what feels like the next 6 months we all vote behind the scenes via an 0900 number which charges an extortionat amount of cash and gradually our choices are whittled away until we are left with the one that everyone knows was going to win from the start. Of course thats prob where your stories and the X-Factor seperate as you will still be popular in 6 months and try as I may I dont think I can recall more than 1 or 2 winners without the help of google. Or as already suggested you pick the one that feels right and we will have fun anyway

Hehehe so is this where we are all gonna hang out now then. I hope you realise you realise Nephy your gonna have to always have a story on the go now otherwise the natives will get restless and you know idle hands generally leads to Asbos

So yeah I may have forgotten most of the last 2 chapters although I do remember a happy ending. Funnily enough I had a dream about this last night as well, I dont usually share dreams as they are quite boring but I think most of you will see the humour in this one. Anyway I have a terrible tendancy to dream about things I am watching/reading just before I go to sleep and last night I was an actual fly on the wall for the wedding night. Before you all get overexcited and get the popcorn and ask me to fill you in on the details it seems Rowan took his protector roll a little to far and the poor fly got whacked with a tea towel so I saw nothing but it did startle me and I woke up and started laughin so much I woke the old ball and chain up. Lets just say he was most displeased especially when I was laughin so much I started to hyperventilate. He was even less amused when he found out why I was laughin think I may be on the couch tonight

Yay, just yay I loved it, and did I say yay oh and yay, with maybe some yay thrown in He best it though is im boody trashed and by tomorrow I will have forgotten that I read this and ge to read it again. That and my bloody cat has gone mental and she is attacking everthing in sight distracting me Oh and yay again I have to say Neph part of why thiis is such a good ending is even up to the very end it was on a knife edge. I had my fingers crossed, my legs and even my eyes until I had to read that is And I got to be an Usher. I absolutely loved this tho such a gripping story and you kept us guessin until the end so an equal measure of and are called for me thinks

Your all quite mad and by quite i mean very and by very I mean completely. But then madness is a state of mind I am aspiring to so who am I to complain

Damn this just gets beter and better but worse and worse on my poor fingernails. Poor poor Astrin what a silly silly boy hes been. Now it seems we have 2 princes in a very sticky situation. Im hoping Rowan fills the role he gave himself as Astrins warrior and protector. No matter what happens though id say Strebo has less days than an Advent calendar ad him and Rowan are going to be having words I still have my heart set on it all coming good in the end. Oh and just so we dont all bring the same gifts im on the toaster

Ive just realised it seems they have both forgotten their first kiss, correct me if im wrong but didnt Astrin kiss Rowan when he healed him during the car journey. I think we can forgive Rowan forgettin this one though as he was out cold at the time. Anyway with that new chapter up im off to find some chocolate to enjoy it with

If all is well and good they will go with something along the lines of Astrin realises he was an idiot for running changes direction heads straight to the bedroom where they spend the next 3 days chatting about the weather with some 'mild' exercise. I like this one its most definately my favourite possible outcome Failing that I can only see 3 possibilities he runs and just keeps running, he runs and something happens to him or he runs and someone happens to him. Rowans reaction in each of these cases would be quite different. Should Astrin run I believe Rowan will set off after him and we may never see either of them again although the takes of Cody and Ansel could well continue. Should something happen I think Rowan will most likely turn his back on both houses holding them partially to blame for forcing this path upon them and has a successful but unfortunately short time as a mercenary. The latter option of someone happening is the one to watch for, I would not like to be the person responsible for that. Im pretty sure after Rowan was finished the wedding party would also like to have a few harsh words with whatever he left. I would also think the person(s) responsable (guessin Strebo) would need to watch their backs. Even in this instance though I cannot see him taking the crown I think it more likely hed go it alone maybe hook up with Neive and her group and take the fight directly to House Michael. Of course these are just possibilities and im sure you have a twist or two of your own still left, but im keepin hold of my outfit as well still got it all crossed for a happy ending

You wasnt being thoughtless you was being thoughtful and I didnt mean for you to move it, although dedicating the story rather than a chapter does seem more fitting. Anyway now that ive absorbed the story properly all I can say is poor poor Astrin, hes got everything he wants handed to him the chance for love and hapiness and hes just up and panicked, but then what can you do. Im sure once he calms down and realises its all worked out for him he will say what the rest of us want to hear. Im still fully fingers toes atc crossed for a wedding, just need to find the perfect gift

Im not sure what to say, Funilly enough Id just sat down with a vodka (yeah i know its a bit early) and thought id see if anything new was up. From joy to sadness in just a click. My deepest condolences Nephy, I know I am fairly new to your work and I dont really know you other than the little interaction we have had this past week or so. It feels wrong to comment on the chapter itself here so all I will say is dont underestimate how much of a trinute it is. Its an amazing story that is being shared amongst a massive community and is something you should truly be proud of. I am sure im not the only one here who wishes you all the best take care of yourself and theres people here if you need them

Well either way i think im gonna need vodka to celebrate or commiserate but vodka tastes soooooo much better when your in a happy place (not so subtle big hint)