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right Im almost back im semi used to my new routine i dont come home and want to sleep anymore and I am miles behind on my readin Ill be up to speed by the weekend tho I hope
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[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
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Im back sorry been mostly away had a mini break a birthday week a new job and it all hapopened together. Once im up to speed again ill post what Im thinkin but atm im just thinking oh my god I love my bed -
[Nephylim] The Face at the Window
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Wow Its over That was a fun journey Nephy for Haze Ace and for us following it. I had a great time following them and I will certainly miss em. It ended really well also. The two of them together Haze learning more and more that he can lean on Ace and finding closure on a very traumatic part of his life. As much as Im gonna miss Ace and Haze and the laughs and giggles they bring I think like the rest of us I am also eagerly anticipating our next little journey and the twists and turns contained within -
[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
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Yay Rivers back Still needs a slap every now and then though it seems but hes back Riber an Silver are back together and Silvers a whole lot stronger so all is good. Quite how River reacts to Silvers escapades will be a bit of a mystery for now but that will reveal itself soon enough. Im more looking forward to seeing Silver deal with the less savoury characters from Child Protection. Hopefully he will deal with them and make them go away Did feel for Ariel though poor boy needs a hug. Still overall big thumbs up Nephy loved it and glad the boys are back in business -
[Nephylim] The Face at the Window
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ooooh that was good Nephy very very good. Tallys fate whilst already generally know for it to cause such anger and fury was still sad to behold. It was definately a good step though that Haze has taken with Ace in trusting him and opening himself up to him. I actually dont really care if Logan makes an appearance in the last Chapter or not. He served his purpose and got beaten to a pulp for it this is good although whilst im not for an appearance im also not against it. My evil side says another beating for him would be fun Anyway what a journey I cant believe we are almost at the end these two have been a happy mix of fun and frolics with some Nephy angst thrown in for good measure and I have nejoyed every minute -
[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
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I totally called that death Nephy lol. Anyhoots that chapter really worked for me. Silver seems to be much stromger now than he was at the start of book 2 although this strength has come at quite high a price. Now we need to see what happens next what he and River decide andif they can make it work. As much as he loved Asher I still felt River was where he wanted to be now we just have to see what you have in store next although I get the impression that this book is drawing to a close Still that does leave us part 3 which from what ypou have said seems quite interesting and fun and god knows those 2 could do with some fun -
Meh im very much anti arranged marriage so I think that makes me anti gay arranged marriage as well Im not doubting some arranged marriage couples are happy but just no theres no romance no fun it just goes against everything I believe in. I think rather than looking to have arranged gay marriages we should be looking to get rid of the notion of arranged marriages in its entirety. Alot of things worked well over the past 1000 years doesnt mean we should keep them going now that we have outgrown the concept and practice
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[Nephylim] The Face at the Window
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That was definately what i wanted for Logan hehe. Not quite how I wanted it to end though with Ace getting hurt and then with Haze having a total freak out but meh at least Logan got his Now we just need Ace to put Haze together again give him a hug tell him its all going to be fine and see if he can work Hazes anger issues completely out of him Oly 2 chapters left tho Nephy this isnt good we wants more and is this the point I should mention we havent had a wedding in ages as well lol Gonna duck and cover now as Nephy explodes Haze style -
[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
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Well my take or rather what I think Asher is hurt definately badly maybe mortally with you Nephy its a possinility. With that in mind I think its gonna be fatal and its going to push Silver back to River for a resolution one way or the other. I think Silver will not blame himself but rather Tony for forcing the situation on him and it will strengthen his resolve to leave. As for Tony hes definatley lost Asher whether he survives or not I think any relationship ideas he had will be buried. Im not sure where he will put the blame although im guessing Silver will bear the brunt of some of his anger whether Silver is pushed or jumps who knows. I dont think Silver will be going alone tho I see Ariel jumping with him at the very least Of course I may be wrong but if I had to put money on it thats where id place mine -
[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
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Ouch Nephy that was goin so well for him as well, ok a few cuts and bruises but he showed some inner strength that really made it like he was turning a corner and then that. In some ways I think this will strengthen him even more but at what cost though I dont think I wanna be in Tonys shoes either this isnt exactly what he expected and its ironic that hes paying alot more than he intended to and is gonna be paying alot more at the start of the next chapter I hope I totally didnt see that tho until it was happening and I think you deserve a grrrrrrr as well -
[Nephylim] The Face at the Window
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Ooooh its hit the fan this time me thinks Jealousy may well get Logan the thrashing of his life and while im fully supportive of him being taken down a notch or 2 im not 100% sure that this is the right time for a good old fashioned beat down. We all knew it was Logan, what we didnt know was if Ace knew it was Logan now that he does and the truth is out there well its brought it all to a head. I think id setle for a quick hit from Haze and then Ace calming him down, also would kinda like to see Nick find out and see his take on this. Well whatever way it plays out theres a grrrrrrrr for ending it there and making us wait another week Although im still hooked so your doin somethin right Nephy -
[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
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because we havent had one for a while -
[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
Ara replied to Nephylim's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
Hehe the language barrier strikes again (cultural one that is as you both tech speak English). Sometimes the way we brits phrase things is lost in the translation across the pond but I can assure you it does read that shes agreeing with you and not suggesting anything else Now onto Enigma 3, wow just wow It would be cool to see what happens afterwards how these two worlds collide and maube see the main people from 1 and 2 step back and watch them through someone elses eyes and an interesting pair of eyes to watch them you have chosen im intrigued -
[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
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I loved that one. I think Silver is going to be fine now he seems to be gaining strength and finding himself. He and Asher are getting closer in some ways and I get the impression if Silver hadnt met River they would have made a great couple. It seems like we are getting to the final scenes of the story now, everything seems to be leading upto it, Silvers rediscovered who he is and is learning how to love, how to build friendships and who he is. Now he just needs to survive the next few days work out exactly what he wants and go make it happen I really cant wait to see where you take us next tho Nephy -
[Nephylim] The Face at the Window
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hehe im not sayin it wont affect Haze im just wonderin how it will affect Ace -
[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
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Damn my hangovers forst i read the chapters in the wrong order, then I forgot Id read them and then I remembered readin em and my head was so messed up I just went and read em again Anyway that aside seems Silvers still having his ups and downs. He needs to see River sooner rather than lter for his own piece of mind and sanity id say. Poor thing cant keep going as he is as it will just get worse. Still lovin it tho Nephy you are takin us on a hell of a ride here and I titally am not sure what your gonna do or what I want you to Keep it up -
[Nephylim] The Face at the Window
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oooooh grrrrrrr Nephy, such a nice time at the party all happy fun times and then this is how it ends I smell a rat, a Logan shaped rat and i'm pretty sure im not the only one who smells it. Thw big question is what this does to Ace in terms of his freedom, his confidence and how others treat him. Ill be tuning in same bat time same bat channel next week to find out. -
[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
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Gah I accidentally read the 2nd post before the earlier 1 which confused me a bit. On the plus side im several glasses in to a vodka session so the plan is to keep goin, forget I read either and deal with em tomorrow -
[Nephylim] The Face at the Window
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Hehe why does that not suprise me The uncle was a tad eccentric but he did have an important message for Haze in that Ace isnt made of china and a few scrapes wont hurt him, Seems Ace got a touch of that lesson as well but who knows. Its all good if you ask me and I am lookin forward to see what you have in store for the party itself Gogo Haze n Ace party like you mean it hehe -
[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
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The plot thickens, Silver is actually growing now hes moving forward and creating himself again which he didnt seem to be doing with River. I still want him n River to get back though but I cant deny Asher is good for him in the here and now. I just wish we had some insight into how River is doing. I can imagine him tearing up an down streets searching everywhere for Silver realising what an idiot he has been. Anyway thumbs up Nephy to another good one heres to many more -
[Nephylim] The Face at the Window
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Another fun day out for Ace Haze still showing signs of overprotectiveness which he really needs to work on and lose. Ace isnt a China doll and wont break if you hold him funny. Best part though was Nock, He put mum in her place and really stood up for Ace where it mattered. Hes turning into a good ally for Ace to turn to. Keep it goin Nephy -
[Nephylim] The Face at the Window
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Lol Jealous haze was Jealous although it was understandableish jealousy. Ace was most certainly quite naive with that call. Plus its good to see that its not sweet an happy the bad times make the good ones that much more enjoyable. I totally love this story tho Neph it really is cool and I like where your takin it -
[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
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Im back, did ya miss me Now woah there Silver he seems to be movin forward and has realised something about himself. This is all good. I have to agree River dropped a ball or 3 on this one but i am hopin those 2 make it in the end, if not river does only have himself to blame although Silver does need to deal with the River issue once and for all otherwise even with Asher hes gonna bealways lookin back Totally cool tho Nephy am loving this -
[Nephylim] The Face at the Window
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Ooooh I loved this one, hehe it made me smile and I totally love Hazes family his mum more so than the others but they are all up there Aces mum still has me very much in the meh leaning towards not liking corner but theres time for redemption. I dont like talk of green eyed monsters tho Nephy this makes me sad -
[Nephylim] Enigma II - Fighting the Man
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Lol having read the next chapter now I see why you wanted a response to Asher. Well heres my response With that in mind Im gonna cut Silver a bit of slack. I think he sees this as a way he can be himself and get back some of what he feels he has lost. Lets face it while River had the best of intentions they do say the road to hell is paved with them. I still think River and Silver should be together in the end I just think Silover needs to find out who he is and what he wants before that can happen. Going back to River now would not be in his best interests As for Asher phwoar he has some skills and he seems to be providing some therapy, I just hope its short term and these two dont get to involved. Watching with anticiation
