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I am almost afraid to post this question but who is Amber again (“I got a letter from an attorney representing Amber,”)?
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Between the "Sometimes it can backfire on you" comment in the last chapter and "escaped to my office with my art supplies and started drawing. I finished my project, then went back to my room to get ready for the next day." in this chapter, I wonder what embarrassment Jays is going to bring to family.
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I love all the little tie ins between all the different stories (changing speakers for graduation for example). I am not sure how you manage to keep it all together and cohesive but you do an amazing job. Thank you for yet another great chapter in Cj universe. I look forward to many more books to come.
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Not that I think it excuses the behavior - but I am thinking there is a little bit of Roid Rage going on.
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I am hoping "I collapsed completely, realizing yet again one inescapable truth. I would forever be trapped in a world within a world, a dream within a nightmare." that this means it was all a nightmare and tomorrow Q will be alive.
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Is it wrong to hope that this conversation "She also mentioned Northman was being transferred to Angola, and CJ knew he would have to call his friend Simmone to get details." makes it into a future chapter/book?????
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I am not sure if it is the author's awesome ability of miss direction or my gullibility, but Liebe being kidnapped was never on my radar. I am choosing to take it as the author's ability of miss direction otherwise it just hurts too much. Thank you for the awesome chapter.
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"...We deserve face-to-face. Well, I deserve it." Maybe I am reading this line wrong, but this does not seem to bode well for a great happy reunion.
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Mark Once again another incredible chapter. No matter how fast you post a chapter it will never fast enough. I have a feeling that it is going to get real ugly real fast. While JJ may be able to let Mary Ellen go with what he has already done, I don't think Will is. I find it interesting in that Wade appeares to be only thinking Will will go after Trevor and the roomate. I am guessing Will will go after Mary Ellen, her actions had a direct impact on him and people he loves. While I have always been a huge Will fan and think he is capable of a lot, I am not sure he is a match for Elizibeth Dansfield yet.
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WOW - the stage is set - but somehow I doubt that we can guess the outcome. Hopefully we will not have to wait that long for the next chapter(s). Thank you again for another great chapter.
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Like father Like son.... Will may not have his dad's contol issues, but it seems like he is like his dad in more ways then he thinks... He hates not knowing secerts. Thanks for another great chapter.
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It just goes to show how Claire will do anything for Maire right or wrong. She was asking for Maire to be able to go the party when she herself id still not allowed to go. In addition she was making the arguement for her to go with JP not marie herself....
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This definitly took a turn I was not expecting with JJ cutting himself and being in love with his coach, though I have to remember you have ways of throwing some great curve balls. I wonder now that this is out in the open, and Will seems to have repaired his relationship with Robbie and to some degree JJ, if will will go back to Malibu with them so that he can continue to help JJ through this? I would see Will having a hard time if he was not there to help since family is so core to his foundation.
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Why is it that no matter how quickly Mark puts out a new chapter it is never quick enough? I look every day for the next chapter even though I am emailed when it comes out. Mark you have truely made this characters come to life. I hope Wade is able to figure out what he enjoys so much by being with Brad and that he can find a way to explain it to Matt. I hope I am reading too much into this as I see the hookups between Brad and Wade as a danger to Wade/Matt. I hope Robbie gets his head out of his butt soon before he totally looses Brad. As we have seen in the past, not everyone lives happily ever after in CAP.
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Thanks for another great chapter. I only hope Robbie is able to pull his head out of his butt before the situation becomes beyond repair. I have to admit, it would be interesting to see Will in control of Stef's stock in the company.
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Another great chapter - I only hope I am not reading too much into Brad's answer to the question as to wether him and Robbie will be OK.
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I want to say upfront that I am a fan of Will's character. However, I wonder if Will realizes yet he used a Brad excuse when Darius confronted him about not talking to him first before including him in the lawsuit - the "I have been so busy ….." - He did say he was sorry for doing it, but it seemed to be more of a Brad rationalization then an actual apology. It just goes to show how much Brad and Will are alike. It would be interesting to see if someone where to point that out to him about his apology to Darius. On another note I wonder what JP’s comment “It is nice to approach this as a team” is gong to mean in the very near future. Thanks for another great chapter, and I am looking forward to the continuing saga.
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Thanks for another great chapter. I am sure there will still be some bumpy roads ahead for Will (like when Jeanine finds out). I have to admit, I was wondering how Mark was going to repair the relationship between Brad and Will without their actions seeming out of character for either of them. I think Mark pulled it off well.
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I think I need to go to Rehab at this point. I find myself checking every day, multiple times a day to see if there is a new chapter, even though I get an email when I chapter is posted. I was assuming that Brad had some master plan for Micheal to have an "accident", and that letting Micheal resign with a severance was just a way to not draw suspission on the family when it happens as there would appear to be no bad blood between them. After today's interactions I am not so sure, I understand we are seeing things from Will's eyes but it does not seem like this is going to be the case. But then again - Mark is known for throwing us a few curve balls once in a while. Once again, another great chapter that is leaving me wanting more.
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Is it just me or does anyone else want to see a chapter from Brad's point of view. Maybe if not from brad himself -maybe Will over hearing a heart to heart between Brad and Robbie,Steph or grand?
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Another great chapter. I am not sure what I am waiting to see play out more - Wade's battle with his mother or Will figuring out that Michael was not fired and got a severance package to boot.
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It looks like the healing has started, but I am guessing there are still going to be some major bumps in the road. It will be interesting to see what the consequences for all parties involved will be. One question that I do have is where has Cody been over the last few weeks. I know you mentioned that he was out of town the day Will took down Martin, but normally from what I remember about Cody is that he is amazing at reading people and determining what they need (or was that only in bed…). I guess I would have expected him to reach out to Will on some level. Thank you for all of the work you and your editors put into these stories/chapters, I know there are a lot of people who appreciate it.
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Thanks for another great chapter. You are definitely spoiling us with the rate at which you are posting them. I am going to be very interested to see how the reunion plays out between Will and Robbie. I am not sure if Robbie is just mad at Will for the roofies and trashing the car and clothes or if he is worried that Will be tanking away from his time with Brad. I am hoping that Robbie is not that shellfish but he has proven to be just that in the past. One again thanks for another great chapter, and I look forward to the next one.
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Seriously this is where you end the chapter? Could you not at least tell us if he made it to the beach house safely given how all of the surfers were seeing him as a meal ticket, now I am worried the cab driver will do something.... It was a very interesting chapter - somehow I don't think the war is over yet. Given Brad's email, I don't think he has gotten it yet. Also it will be interesting to see the fallout from what Will sees as a lack of caring from Robbie and Darius. Thank you for the incredible rate at which you are posting chapters. I am guessing this rate can not continue indefinitely, but trust me when I say I wish it would.
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I am hoping this is not just the first battle of the war. If it is then, I would hate to see what the next wave will be. I am sure I am not alone in thinking that Will may have went a little overboard, but if this did not get the point across then nothing will. I hope they can all repair the damage in these relationships, I would hate to see this situation go beyond repair.
