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you have no idea how unbelievably happy i was when i saw that you started posting a new story. i absolutely love all of your writing and this is no exception. love the characters and the plot so far! I hope you post the next part really, really soon. I will be eagerly waiting.

Hi, I really, really love this story and I was just wondering if you were gonna be posting the next chapter anytime soon?

Wow! Great writing. Every character introduced seems so interesting, I like how you are developing them. I wish I could read ahead! Please post soon!

GASP. He can't die! Not right after he confessed to Charlie that he loves him! What a cliffhanger!!! Tuesday better come quick.

Very, very sweet and sexy The only flaw is that the coincidence seems kind of unbelievable... That they would see each other at the coffee shop, having already met each other online, and then Max/Parker would be part of the team that rescued Percy... I have this feeling that Max/Parker (haha it is Max right?) knew who Percy was long before Percy knew who Max was.... I'm very eager for the next chapter!!

Ahhh!!! How are they going to explain their current situation to the police???? Holy shit. And I have a revision to an earlier review of mine: I don't just hope things work out for them, I hope Big C and Hero end up together! I'm a sucker for happy endings. As always, this story is highly entertaining and beautifully written. I can't wait for next tuesday!

I'm very eager to see how Mr. Too Close will compare to Max! I wonder if there is a connection between the two.... As always, well-written and highly entertaining writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

His father needs to rot in jail for eternity. He sickens me. This story is powerful and so ridiculously hard to read... yet... I can't wait for you to post again. What Tom is going through is just tragic. I hope that he finds a way to escape from his situation soon... I hope he finds a way to get help. Connor seems like he is going to be a very interesting character and have a significant impact on Tom's life, I, like Lisa, was wondering as I read if Connor sensed something about Tom. Or is stuck in a horrible situation as well. You are an extremely talented writer, the visceral way you uncover Tom's emotions is a testament to that. I hope you are able to post the next chapter soon.

Wow. There is so much more to Derek's character than one would imagine. That Derek would react in such a self-sacrificing and protective way at age 11 shows just how strong him and Charlie's bond is. I hope things work out for them in the end.

Short and sweet. I'm very excited to read the first chapter!

very cute me gusta. can't wait for chapter 5!

Luke is evil. Pure evil. OMIGOD. Poor Charlie... all alone. And Derek, injured with the bat, people will obviously think he was the one to beat up Charlie. And what if Charlie believes that? What a mess. I really hope things work out for Derek and Charlie in part 4 and that Luke rots in jail. 2-3 weeks!!! or more!!! nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Loving the story so far! Can't wait for the next update.

AHHHHHH!!! That was exciting. And heartbreaking. I feel bad for all the characters, really. Derek, for being so generally out of it, manipulated by Luke, distraught over his relationship with his father and the bloody jacket, and very confused i'm sure about his feelings towards Charlie (i'm a true romantic and really hope the two end up together, I have this feeling that Derek is only going to start feeling better when Charlie is back in his life- hopefully in a romantic way). I feel bad for Charlie for being in love with someone so confused and seemingly violent while not wanting to hurt him. I don't see his actions as disloyal, I seem them as him missing someone whom he's in love with and extremely important to him. Lastly, I feel bad for Travis because he so obviously really likes Charlie, and although his attitude towards Derek is annoying you can't really blame him. The only Derek he's seen is the cocky, violent one who outed Charlie to the whole school and in a way threatened him. Derek's violence is something that obviously he needs to work but... i'm not gonna lie... it was kind of romantic when he got defensive over Charlie (*swoon*). Sorry for the long rant. I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. I can't wait for next tuesday. So long!!! Did you message something earlier about posting 2 chapters in a week?

No update today?