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  1. Lucky indeed, Daddydavek on both counts... Glad to know you're still hanging in there. thanks for reading and posting a review... Kim
  2. Thanks, KC, I wanted to do the date right, so I thought dedicating the next chapter to it would work out better, that way I wouldn't feel rushed... I totally love Tag/Jimmys' relationship with the boys, as much grief that they give Ethan and Liam, you know they love them to pieces and visa-versa. I'm sure David wouldn't mind skipping dinner, not sure if Christian's ready... but you never know he might just surprise ya Thanks for reading and taking the time to post a review. I appreiciate it more than you know. Kim
  3. “Nawh.” Christian frowned “I don’t like that.” He voiced as he continued rifling through the rack of unfinished men jackets. “Oh, come on Chris, what’s wrong with this one?” Taggart held the jacket out for him to see the detailed stitching. “It’s not me.” He turned up his nose and continued digging. Playful giggles and the sounds of tiny feet behind him captured his attention causing him to look over his shoulder. Liam was chasing his little brother around the clothes rack. “Calm down,
  4. Okay, so we get a glimps into Sam's life and his current move. It's like with Lucca we learn just enough to want to know more. It's like we're getting two different stories at once, and I like that. So many questions that I'm sure will get answered, but the one that sticks out in my mind right now is does cousin Jeremy have a secret...did he just get busted??? Sam seems pretty cool. Might try to read another chapter later. Great chapter intune.
  5. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 8

    I'm glad that trashbag cleared that up, Just hope Ethan realizes he lost the game for nothing. Love Tanner so far. Gibby and his father's relationship is awesome, it seems they understand each other very well. Great chapter. Not gonna rush my life away, but if you want to pretend its next Monday, I'm cool... :D
  6. Ah, man. He left??? But why? Lucca has it bad. matt sounds gorgeous... Can't wait to find how what else Lucca is dealing with that makes him so sad. Great first chapter, totally leaves you wanting more that's for sure.
  7. *waves* Hey unlikelyu. New life, new job and new place. that sounds like a make over...cool congrats. tell me about the on internet I panic and break out in hives if I even think there's a problem, :D Yeah Chris and David are moving right along, but as you mentioned there's still a lot a head of them. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review, as you know comments fuel the writer's soul...mine anyway. Kim
  8. Thanks for the review FishWings. I'm happy you enjoyed the story. and yes, the editor took off the "flashback" prior to which was a great idea. thanks for taking the time to read Then Came You, but most importantly thanks for taking the time to leave a review. Kim
  9. *waves* KC..I have to tell you I went to youtube and listened to the song and I loved it...seriously. I actually listened to the words of the song and poor David. Yes Christian still has issues to deal with. The good thing is he's keeping his promise he made to David when he came back to him to never leave him again and I'm sure he doesn't even realize it. Glad the kiss worked...and glad you're reading and taking the time to review. As one who writes and runs a family I know the time crunch... So thanks so much. Kim
  10. Yeppers, Lisa new memories indeed. Slowly but surely. Yeah Chris is dealing with what is called repressed memory here, which will be explained later when he sees his Dr. again, but since he associates David with his father's death which as you said was a tragic part of his life that he's subcontiously blocking out, hence David gets blocked out too. poor baby. the cool thing in David's favor is Christian found him attractive then and it appears he finds him attractive now.not to mention they're married and have children Date night and Tags reveal comming up next Thanks dear for the review and for still reading. YAY!! Kim
  11. Merci, intune. Christian has to depend on David and his friends to help him remember things so we will get a few more back stories. Hopefully they will help, so far he doesn't remember anything though. Yep, I liked the last part of the chapter as well, I'm sure David did too, judging from his note. thanks so much for reading, editing and posting a review... Kim
  12. And Christian initiated the kiss, Richard...Hello that shocked even me. memories all good..boy I doubt it... oh lord Christian is determined to fix the relationship with his mom so that should be interesting. The first date, yes... Iz excited!!! Merci, Richard so apprecite ya. MWAH and hell yeah Kaleb remember I got ya
  13. Yeppers, Frostina that was some news. I think that the way Christian is handling all of this says a lot about who he really is. More of him comes out as the story progresses. I've gotta say, David loves him for a reason.. Tag, gotta love him... and I'll take the punch as a compliment hehehe. Danke Kim
  14. Thanks, Chica. I think I agree with you, it might just be better if Christian doesn't remember that. I know I have a few memories I'd love to forget. Christian may not remember David and his relationship but Christian is indeed gay because he's very attractive to his husband... yeah Tag has a big mouth...lol it will be interesting to see how Christian responds to the reveal. Again thanks for the beta/edit and review. Kim
  15. “You?” Christian shook his head in confusion. “Why?” He frowned, creasing his brow. Then, it hit him. “He came to tell you to stay away from me,” he concluded. “Didn’t he?” “Yeah.” David lowered his head and took a deep breath. “Wow…” Christian mouth faintly. “I told him not only that I couldn’t, but I wouldn’t. I told him I was in love with you. We love each other.” “Oh god.” Christian covered his mouth. “He didn’t like that…at all. Things got a little heated. I tried to remain c
  16. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 7

    Lord have mercy, can Amanda get any meaner...jeeze *rolls eyes* I know she's getting on Gibby's nerve because she's getting on mine. And I can't figure out for the life of me why Ethan would think anyone wants that trashbag. Tanner I'm hoping has better taste than that... lol Still loving Gibby sooo much. He's really cool.
  17. Thanks, Jams. Yeah, Chris is catching it, but he's got a good support system. It can't be easy hearing all this stuff that you don't remember and like you said re-living it sucks. But hopefully David can help him remember. I like how Christian seems to be softening up to David. He may not remember him, but he's feeling something for him that's for sure. Who knows it might be better the second time around. thanks for all the help with this story and for leaving a review.
  18. I wondered where you went...I know not every story is for everybody, glad to see this one is for you... Welcome back,, dear...sincerly missed ya. It's summer break for some. Hope to see more of you.. Thanks for the review. *hugs* Kim
  19. *Waves* Hey, Lisa. I love reading your reviews..hehe. No we don't know exactly how Chris's father died, but we will find out in the next chapter. And yes they will have to re-live it. Dr. Reeder might be on to something re: Chris blocking out time on purpose. We'll see. it's funny Chris still doesn't remember is past with David, hell who knows; the butterflies, the kiss...I don't know. Thank you, Thank you, and Thank you. Kim
  20. Thank you so much, joann, when I saw this was a review for Undetermined Identity, I was afraid to open it. this was one of my eariler stories from at least 4years back. I personally think I've gotten a little better, still in the crawling stage, but better. So when I read your review I was relieved...literally Again thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it... Kim
  21. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 6

    YAY!!! I'm all caught up and enjoying every minute of it. I'm so loving this story, again your writing style is wonderful. I feel as if I'm right in the middle of it all. Gibby, his father and all the students, you bring them to life so well. I can't want to see what's up with Tanner and what was up with the tiny pieces of paper? What happened last year that Tanner refused to do this year? Enquiring minds what to know... And Amanda I can't stand the ground she walks on. Here's to hoping she gets her just dessert and I don't mean pudding either. So far it appears Gibby is settling in okay,but i'm not naive either, I know we have ...I mean they, him and his father still have so much healing to do. I echo the seniments of the others..can't wait for more.
  22. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 3

    Another great chapter... Loved the school prank sending Gibby the wrong way was classic...hehehe...
  23. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 2

    WOW, what a great chapter. I love these two and the relationship they have. It's like it's only them against the world father and son. This chapter was wonderfully written and I loved the playful thing going on with Scott, then the stupid *bleep bleep* woman, Really lady how old are you? GWAD!!!!! Poor Gibby...
  24. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 1

    Okay, looks like I've found my next story, KC... Love the begining. It's interesting how it stirred so many different emotions, I felt sad, anxious, curious and my heart went out for these two, starting over isn't always easy and it seems like they have emotional bagage they're tying to deal with. I love how we get the fire thing, again the emotional and physical scars that mar them, but it appears they lost a whole lot more in that fire New Town and New beginnings for the both of them should prove to be very interesting. Off to the next chapter before I start the rest of my day.
  25. Okay. Okay, Richard, dang...hehehe but cliffhangers are so much fun. *pouts* not to worry I think the end of the revelation will be alright. It's funny because I mentioned earlier to a friend, Christian might not remember their relationship but he is finding David very aluring and attractive the second time around. And a come to Jesus meeting might be whats in store not to mention a dose of Taggart... I really appreciate your reviews, love them as much as chocolate :D Kim L)
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