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  1. Naptowngirl
    Thanks for the review FishWings. I'm happy you enjoyed the story. and yes, the editor took off the "flashback" prior to which was a great idea. thanks for taking the time to read Then Came You, but most importantly thanks for taking the time to leave a review. Kim
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    *waves* KC..I have to tell you I went to youtube and listened to the song and I loved it...seriously. I actually listened to the words of the song and poor David. Yes Christian still has issues to deal with. The good thing is he's keeping his promise he made to David when he came back to him to never leave him again and I'm sure he doesn't even realize it. Glad the kiss worked...and glad you're reading and taking the time to review. As one who writes and runs a family I know the time crunch... So thanks so much. Kim
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    Yeppers, Lisa new memories indeed. Slowly but surely. Yeah Chris is dealing with what is called repressed memory here, which will be explained later when he sees his Dr. again, but since he associates David with his father's death which as you said was a tragic part of his life that he's subcontiously blocking out, hence David gets blocked out too. poor baby. the cool thing in David's favor is Christian found him attractive then and it appears he finds him attractive now.not to mention they're married and have children Date night and Tags reveal comming up next Thanks dear for the review and for still reading. YAY!! Kim
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    Merci, intune. Christian has to depend on David and his friends to help him remember things so we will get a few more back stories. Hopefully they will help, so far he doesn't remember anything though. Yep, I liked the last part of the chapter as well, I'm sure David did too, judging from his note. thanks so much for reading, editing and posting a review... Kim
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    And Christian initiated the kiss, Richard...Hello that shocked even me. memories all good..boy I doubt it... oh lord Christian is determined to fix the relationship with his mom so that should be interesting. The first date, yes... Iz excited!!! Merci, Richard so apprecite ya. MWAH and hell yeah Kaleb remember I got ya
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    Yeppers, Frostina that was some news. I think that the way Christian is handling all of this says a lot about who he really is. More of him comes out as the story progresses. I've gotta say, David loves him for a reason.. Tag, gotta love him... and I'll take the punch as a compliment hehehe. Danke Kim
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    Thanks, Chica. I think I agree with you, it might just be better if Christian doesn't remember that. I know I have a few memories I'd love to forget. Christian may not remember David and his relationship but Christian is indeed gay because he's very attractive to his husband... yeah Tag has a big mouth...lol it will be interesting to see how Christian responds to the reveal. Again thanks for the beta/edit and review. Kim
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    “You?” Christian shook his head in confusion. “Why?” He frowned, creasing his brow. Then, it hit him. “He came to tell you to stay away from me,” he concluded. “Didn’t he?” “Yeah.” David lowered his head and took a deep breath. “Wow…” Christian mouth faintly. “I told him not only that I couldn’t, but I wouldn’t. I told him I was in love with you. We love each other.” “Oh god.” Christian covered his mouth. “He didn’t like that…at all. Things got a little heated. I tried to remain c
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    Chapter 7

    Naptowngirl commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 7

    Lord have mercy, can Amanda get any meaner...jeeze *rolls eyes* I know she's getting on Gibby's nerve because she's getting on mine. And I can't figure out for the life of me why Ethan would think anyone wants that trashbag. Tanner I'm hoping has better taste than that... lol Still loving Gibby sooo much. He's really cool.
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    Thanks, Jams. Yeah, Chris is catching it, but he's got a good support system. It can't be easy hearing all this stuff that you don't remember and like you said re-living it sucks. But hopefully David can help him remember. I like how Christian seems to be softening up to David. He may not remember him, but he's feeling something for him that's for sure. Who knows it might be better the second time around. thanks for all the help with this story and for leaving a review.
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    I wondered where you went...I know not every story is for everybody, glad to see this one is for you... Welcome back,, dear...sincerly missed ya. It's summer break for some. Hope to see more of you.. Thanks for the review. *hugs* Kim
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    *Waves* Hey, Lisa. I love reading your reviews..hehe. No we don't know exactly how Chris's father died, but we will find out in the next chapter. And yes they will have to re-live it. Dr. Reeder might be on to something re: Chris blocking out time on purpose. We'll see. it's funny Chris still doesn't remember is past with David, hell who knows; the butterflies, the kiss...I don't know. Thank you, Thank you, and Thank you. Kim
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    Thank you so much, joann, when I saw this was a review for Undetermined Identity, I was afraid to open it. this was one of my eariler stories from at least 4years back. I personally think I've gotten a little better, still in the crawling stage, but better. So when I read your review I was relieved...literally Again thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed it... Kim
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    Chapter 6

    Naptowngirl commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 6

    YAY!!! I'm all caught up and enjoying every minute of it. I'm so loving this story, again your writing style is wonderful. I feel as if I'm right in the middle of it all. Gibby, his father and all the students, you bring them to life so well. I can't want to see what's up with Tanner and what was up with the tiny pieces of paper? What happened last year that Tanner refused to do this year? Enquiring minds what to know... And Amanda I can't stand the ground she walks on. Here's to hoping she gets her just dessert and I don't mean pudding either. So far it appears Gibby is settling in okay,but i'm not naive either, I know we have ...I mean they, him and his father still have so much healing to do. I echo the seniments of the others..can't wait for more.
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    Chapter 3

    Naptowngirl commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 3

    Another great chapter... Loved the school prank sending Gibby the wrong way was classic...hehehe...
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    Chapter 2

    Naptowngirl commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 2

    WOW, what a great chapter. I love these two and the relationship they have. It's like it's only them against the world father and son. This chapter was wonderfully written and I loved the playful thing going on with Scott, then the stupid *bleep bleep* woman, Really lady how old are you? GWAD!!!!! Poor Gibby...
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    Chapter 1

    Naptowngirl commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 1

    Okay, looks like I've found my next story, KC... Love the begining. It's interesting how it stirred so many different emotions, I felt sad, anxious, curious and my heart went out for these two, starting over isn't always easy and it seems like they have emotional bagage they're tying to deal with. I love how we get the fire thing, again the emotional and physical scars that mar them, but it appears they lost a whole lot more in that fire New Town and New beginnings for the both of them should prove to be very interesting. Off to the next chapter before I start the rest of my day.
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    Okay. Okay, Richard, dang...hehehe but cliffhangers are so much fun. *pouts* not to worry I think the end of the revelation will be alright. It's funny because I mentioned earlier to a friend, Christian might not remember their relationship but he is finding David very aluring and attractive the second time around. And a come to Jesus meeting might be whats in store not to mention a dose of Taggart... I really appreciate your reviews, love them as much as chocolate :D Kim L)
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    Hey KC...I got ya. More on the way. And yes, David will need lots of hugs before its all over. I was thinking poor Christian and may not remember David or being gay, but... and yeppers and this might just be better the second time around. Danke, Kim
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    I'm sorry....hehehe. Well I hope I didn't lose ya on the garden path. I'm having so much fun with this, so thank you for the review and letting me know you're out there with me, Christian and David...lol I promise not to leave you hanging too long.. Danke, Kim
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    I know, intune it supposed to leave you and Christian with a lot of questions...lol On how they met I didn't want something all sugary and sweet, the sugary stuff comes in the relationship . Thanks so much for all your help and review... Merci, Kim
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    Thanks for the lovely review, unlikelyu, glad you're still enjoying the story and taking the time to post a review, I really appreicate it, sincerly. It appears that Chris and David are on the road to memory lane. I'm sure by the time it's all said and done, hugs will be welcomed. Kim
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    Frostina, I'm sure by the time it's all said and done David will need a hug... You're still reading YAY!!! Thanks you, Dear. Kim
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    “Hello, Son, how are you feeling?” The sound of his mother’s voice was just like he remembered. He felt a warm wave rush over his entire body and tears immediately filled his eyes. They say a mother’s love is something you never forget and truer words were never spoken, and Christian appreciated that at this very moment. Just the way she called him ‘Son.’ The inflection of tone and her deep Southern accent took him back to his childhood years. “Hey.” He smiled softly, his mind instinctive
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    Awwww...What a wonderful review, thanks so very much. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, Kaleb ROCKS and Chase was no slow link either...Shades of Gray was my first original story here and I was blown away by the response it received, so again Merci! Kim
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