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She leaned forward, placing her hand on the leather seat in front of her to get a steady, closer view. “You sure this is the right address?” She asked doubtfully as she peered out over the manicured lawn. “Yes, Ma’am.” The driver nodded as he reviewed the address written on the small piece of paper. “This is it,” he stated positively. She sat back using her finger to daintily swoop the stray strands of hair behind her ear and sighed as she rested her back against the seat. She wasn’t sure
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Awww, Krisz, it's so true, many can relate, I was hoping for this response. We all can relate. thanks for taking the time to pop in, spend a little time with me and share you thoughts. Kim
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That's execty my point, Mike. I know my little drabble just scraped the surface, but that was my intention, to show that most gay teens go through it, and it's okay. Comng out is a personal choice that should be made when you're ready. Like my character said, if he didn't do it then, there will always be a next time until the right time. Thanks so much for posting a review, I really do appreicate it. Kim
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Joann, thanks for giving Dilemma a chance. It really was somthing I just threw together in an hour or so. I wasn't even going to post it till I ran it by Jammi and Ryan they thought it was good enough to post so I did. I hope it helps folks to see that coming out is not an easy choice, but it's their own choice to do when they are ready. again thanks so much. Kim
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Merci, intune. It was my shot at it, first person pov with only one person was easier than I thought, dont think I'm ready to tackle first person with more than that just yet. lol thanks for giving it a look and leaving a review. I should been sending you the next chapter of Hello, shortly Kim
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Merci, Lisa, glad you liked it. It was something I was thinking and decided to put it on canvas. It is my first person pov, so I appreiciate you noting that, and taking the time to leave a review. You Rock, chica. Kim
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Lalanekomaster, thank you so much, glad you enjoyed my little drabble. It was supposed to be short and sweet. lol Again thanks, Kim
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Its 9:30 on a Friday night and here I lay in my bed staring up at the ceiling. I would say I’m bored, but I’m not. I’m contemplative right now. I used to love Fridays. Fridays meant no school the next day, which meant staying up late hanging out my friends. Man, those were the days. Hanging out at Patrick’s, horsing around, joning on each other, telling ‘Yo momma’ jokes till his mom cut on the porch light then it was time to head inside to watch wrestling. We all had our favorites. Patri
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undies and a tee shirt for me because I have kids who don't knock before entering my room. they've been warned. I keep telling them, they're going to get an eye full one day by busting in without knocking and it would be pretty...lol I usually get my nudity on when they are away though.
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Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
*waves* Glad to have you back. Sorry to hear about the horrible semester exam, hope do did well on it though Glad you enjoyed the last two chapters, oh and Krisz, I haven't forgetten about the message either... :D The orginal David and Ethan are spoken for, but we have duplicats ready for shipping. Their not as good as the original, but pretty damn close. LOL Gliches in the wedding eh? I'm hoping you'll be there. I dig it...I've been warned by a few, hahaha. And in other news, thanks so much for the wonderful reveiw..love them lots!!! Kim -
Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Thank you so much, Mike. And welcome. I have to admit, I love getting reviews, I just do...lol but I love it when I get one from a reader who just joined the party. You mentioned you're reading all my stories to that again I say Thank you. Hopefully you'll see the growth in my writing. It's something I totally love doing and to have persons such as yourself leave such a wonderful, inspiring reviews it makes this writing business so worth it. Comments fuel the writers soul, I always say. merci,Kim -
Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
unlikelyu, yes, my dear, the wedding is around the corner. I take it you received your invitation...lol I too love their everyday life, routine as it were with the kids. I love Ethan and Liam. And you're right they are a healthy and happy family. Christian and David's love is very sweet and special. Thanks so much for sticking in there with me and see ya at the wedding. Kim -
Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
I've gotta say I love Christian and his boys, those are actually my favorite scenes I think he's a real trooper here. He stepped in taking full responsiblity of daddy hood and doing it all so gracefully. You've gotta feel for David, because he does remember his husband, and loves him. Patience is his middle name. the fact that Christian is alive and home is all he really cares about at this point, to him the rest will come. And yes, Here's Mom!!! So glad you're enjoying this story and glad I didn't lose you when I started posting over here... *hugs* -
Chapter 6...Promises Made
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 6...Promises Made
Awww, Nettie Poo, it's your rambling that I crave. I love reading you insightful comments, it shows how much thought you give not only the chapter, but the characters themselves. And as a person who writes stories, that's very appreciated. As you read the story further you'll gain an understanding as to why Christian remembers Tag, and not David. Oh and yes, you would catch the comment Tag said re: Christian's father, keep that in mind when you read the next few chapters. Again thanks, Nettie Poo, you Rock, chica. -
Chapter 5 My reality...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 My reality...
Yeah, poor Christian, It actually took him into overload. Just a little too much at once. But yes, I agree with ya, the kids are adorable and as I mention in another review, I use the kitchen scenes as a way to keep the boys in the story, and yet stay focused on the story. What's cool as you mentioned is these boys have no idea whats going on or the fact that their dad doesn't even remember them and if Christian has his way, they never will. Thanks, Nettie Poo, always love your reviews, have a wonderful weekend -
Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Stephen, when I saw your review I smiled because I've missed ya. I was glad to see you were still with me. so thanks so much for leaving a review.Christian is getting back on track with his life. I think both he and David are very lucky to have each other. I kind of think that if it was the other way around Christian would do the same thing. oh yes that pee monster is all over the place all the time, and don't forget to tell them about the "Act Right" it does come in handy... hehehe You know what they say, Chris, there's always the calm before a storm...just saying thank you again, loved the comment Kim -
Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Oh, Lisa, I so look forward to your review and I got a long one YAY!!!! Girl I think if I cloned David I would make a killing... David and Christian are good together and its nice that Christian sees that. Oh I wish I could find a nice pic of this motley crew, Tag, Jimmy, Ethan, Liam and of course Christian and David... that would be sooooo freaking cool. they could replace the picture over the mantle.. If all goes well with the wedding it would be especially great for Christian, but David would get to relive the most important day of their lives a 2nd time do that's totally cool, and yes Chris did get the invite, so you better be there, chica. -
Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Merci, Big Daddy. glad you enjoyed this chapter and are still hanging with Christian and David.That Wedding, Man...lol I'm hoping you are one of the RSVPs that Christian and David Recived. just saying. Kim -
Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Love Ethan and Liam as well. I must say being a mom of 3 girls and one son, my son being the youngest, I'd shoot for the son. I think it's a girl thing...lol I agree Chris needs to have a wonderful new memory to share with David, lets just hope he gets it like you said since he doesn't remember the first time.Danke, KC I know how busy you must be, hell I get all of the review notifications...lol congrats by the way. -
Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
thanks for the review RC, next time save me one...lol no seriously that fact that you have time to read, write and post a review is totally cool. Oh and the "Act Right" a really great girlfriend of mine would always threaten my kids with it when they were misbehaving. We never knew what "Act Right" was but my kids to this day laugh about it and was scared the hell of it so she never had to pull it out. It seems to work for Tag too. Oh and gotta love the bed wetting monster. Been in my family for many years...thanks again -
Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Danke, Jammi. I too love the morning scenes. I find it my time to have the fathers interact with the childrens, keeping them active in the story and at the same time, staying on track. Hopeless devoted does indeed discribe these two. David because he knows, and loves his husband and Christian because that's just who he is...not to mention he's falling in love with David in such a short amount of time. Tag...as he said, there's only one him. I think David always new that some day Chris would confess, just wonder if he thought it would be when he didn't even remember it himself, but just felf it was the right thing to do. And it goes without saying. You've got front seat at the wedding, See ya there Oh and thanks for taking the time to post a review and all your help. -
Chapter 4 And So the Journey Begins...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 And So the Journey Begins...
Yes, you kind of have to feel for Christian here. All he remembers is being told how horrible being gay was and yet he wakes up being told he is gay, not only gay, but married with children. then you have David, who loves his husband and will not give up on him. Glad to see you're still trucking on with this story. I love your reviews and how you get into the characters. It's the small stuff that some miss that actually makes them human. Thanks Nettie Poo -
Much More Than Saddle Sore
Naptowngirl commented on Swhouston44's story chapter in Much More Than Saddle Sore
What a day. I enjoyed the ball game. Funny how Cole started out as the stranger, then the ‘New Guy,’ to finally the red head, the beautiful red head I might add. This should be interesting to say the least. -
Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Danke, Nettie Poo. Glad you enjoyed the chapter, I have to agree with you, I love Christian too. He's a brave soul, to embrace this thing called his life.He has a husband, these little rugrats who worship the ground he walks on. What is he to do? What choice does he really have? To him he only had one and that was to go home with this man and his sons. Out of the mouths of babes, Liam and Ethan telling Chris about David crying at night, it was innocent,yet very telling. Oh and hell no, Mr. Beck, gay...whatever. Hehehehe. Thanks my friend. Miss ya. Kim
