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Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 17 Hopelessly Devoted...
Danke, Jammi. I too love the morning scenes. I find it my time to have the fathers interact with the childrens, keeping them active in the story and at the same time, staying on track. Hopeless devoted does indeed discribe these two. David because he knows, and loves his husband and Christian because that's just who he is...not to mention he's falling in love with David in such a short amount of time. Tag...as he said, there's only one him. I think David always new that some day Chris would confess, just wonder if he thought it would be when he didn't even remember it himself, but just felf it was the right thing to do. And it goes without saying. You've got front seat at the wedding, See ya there Oh and thanks for taking the time to post a review and all your help. -
Chapter 4 And So the Journey Begins...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4 And So the Journey Begins...
Yes, you kind of have to feel for Christian here. All he remembers is being told how horrible being gay was and yet he wakes up being told he is gay, not only gay, but married with children. then you have David, who loves his husband and will not give up on him. Glad to see you're still trucking on with this story. I love your reviews and how you get into the characters. It's the small stuff that some miss that actually makes them human. Thanks Nettie Poo -
Much More Than Saddle Sore
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What a day. I enjoyed the ball game. Funny how Cole started out as the stranger, then the ‘New Guy,’ to finally the red head, the beautiful red head I might add. This should be interesting to say the least. -
Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 3, Meet The Children...
Danke, Nettie Poo. Glad you enjoyed the chapter, I have to agree with you, I love Christian too. He's a brave soul, to embrace this thing called his life.He has a husband, these little rugrats who worship the ground he walks on. What is he to do? What choice does he really have? To him he only had one and that was to go home with this man and his sons. Out of the mouths of babes, Liam and Ethan telling Chris about David crying at night, it was innocent,yet very telling. Oh and hell no, Mr. Beck, gay...whatever. Hehehehe. Thanks my friend. Miss ya. Kim -
The next few weeks were a blur, yet Christian seemed to be fitting into his life perfectly. With video conference calls, and meetings with the florist and caterer, he almost had to schedule time to breathe. Then there was Ethan and Liam; their schedule was never ending. “Daddy, Ethan peed in the bed!” “Nuh-uh!” “David,” he griped, “I thought you said you put a pull-up on Ethan last night?” Christian sighed; sleep still thick in his throat. “Daddy!” Liam whined again. “Daddy said top telli
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Poor, Gibby, his mom was so mentally sick...poor baby. I gasped when I read that. I can't wait till they start investigating poor Tanner's death though. Amanda and Ethan still have to be dealt with... Glad Gibby was able to share is past with Tanner. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 First Impressions...
Hahaha...Nettie Poo, glad you enjoyed chapter 2. Poor Christian not only has he lost his memory, but he's also confused. Checking out David like that...Not so sure he's not gay. Almost wonder whose he trying to convince David and the doctor, or himself. lol It's funny because I'm on chapter 17 I have to go back each time you post and say, ah, okay. Thanks, chica, there's a lot more fun stuff coming your way. We get to learn about Christian as he learns about himself so that's fun. Kim -
Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
The message is long forgotten by Christian and David, anyway However I have not for forget. What the call or message was will be revealed in due time my pretty. All in due time. *with my OZ witch laugh...lol Merci for the comment and all your help. Kim -
Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
The message is long forgotten by Christian and David, anyway However I have not for forget. What the call or message was will be revealed in due time my pretty. All in due time. *with my OZ witch laugh...lol Merci for the comment and all your help. Kim -
Chapter 1 Sneak Peek...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 1 Sneak Peek...
Nettie Poo...Welcome, Girl. Miss ya. we're near the end, but like you said, you have something to look forward too. Oh and thanks for the hook up on FB love ya, chica. and no Christian is not gay...let him tell it. hehehe -
Happy Birthday to ya...Happy Birthday to ya...Happy Birthdayyyyy.... Happy Birthday, Renee!!!!!
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Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
I think they worked a number on each other...hehehee. Nope he still doesn't know who's on the machine, but we will find out soon. Yes,Tag and Jimmy are married, it's about time, I think. Thanks for reading and taking the time to post a comment, unlikelyu, we only have a few more chapters left...Have a wonderful weekend and be safe. Kim -
Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
I love Tag so much, probably not as much as Jimmy does, lol. the message on the machine, like I told Lisa, they haven't given it a second thought, but I have..lolCan you imagine Christian's mom seeing them getting their freak their groove on. she would die right there on the spot I'm sure. Hahaha Merci, KC, I really apprecate you taking the time to read my lil old chapter with so much going on with you. it means a lot. Oh and I'm with you till the bitter end of Shepherds Crook -
Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
Yes, my dear, Lisa, that message is long forgotten by him and David, but not by me ;)just saying...Tag and Jimmy, I just love them. It's like it's them against the world. They are two totally different individuals that mirror each other, two halves whole. Chris and David have that kind of love thats rare as well, but not like Tag and Jimmy. Thanks so much Lisa. and yes even as I type, Christian is planning his wedding... Kim -
Aw, Man, poor Gibby, I can just feel his pain...so sad. I actually feel bad for Tanner as well, besides the obvious of course. I'm sure he never intended to Gibby to see that paper, funny and sad how we formulate opinions about people we don't even know... I hope that he and Tanner get past this and they have what they need to incriminate that trashbag and Ethan too. thanks for the update, great chapter.
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Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
RC, I've been waiting for the 2nd chapter. I check everyday, so hopefully, you'll get it back soon.Tag and Jimmy with their own story eh? I dig them too. and in the last few chapters we get more of them. Will Christian hold true to his name sake...we have to wait and see... I know I say it all the time, but it's from the heart. Merci, Danke and thanks. -
Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 16 What About Your Friends...
Umhum, Big Daddy. but off course it will be when the time is right, Merci my dear. Hope you still around, we only have a few chapters left, before things wrap upKim -
“Hey, Babe, the light is flashing on the answering machine!” David informed Christian as he grabbed his keys off the counter and headed for work. “Check it,” Christian’s groggy voice called out from their bedroom. “No time, running late. Love you!” “I’ll check it when I get up. Love you too. Call me later!” He drifted off to sleep before he could realize that David was gone. Christian and David’s “body massage,” lasted till the wee hours of the morning and David decided to let Christian
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Of course I remember, you. I remember everyone that posts to my stories,and if I don't see them for a while, I'm sure they left me. I understand life happens just glad all is going well with you... thanks so much again.
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Chapter 15 I Do...Again
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 15 I Do...Again
YAY!!!! unlikelyu, I thought I'd lost you... so glad I didn't and glad you enjoyed the last three chapters. Hope all is going well with you. and I hope you stick around till the end. Whose on the phone, you'll have to read and find out... :D Thanks so much,again glad to see you're still with me. Kim -
Chapter 15 I Do...Again
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 15 I Do...Again
Hey, Lisa, *waves* who's on that phone...Hummm Yeah I agree getting re-married is an awesome idea. Thanks so much for still reading and hanging in there, I actually look forward to seeing what you think about each chapter, so again...thank you. Have a safe and wonderful 4th stay cool... Kim -
Chapter 15 I Do...Again
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 15 I Do...Again
Krisz, merci. Glad you like it. I don't know with these two, they are such a class act to me that, that's the only way I see it. I wanted hot, yet sensual, with a seductive flar, if that makes sense, after all he did just ask the man to marry him again...quote:I can't seem to stop writing exclamatory sentences... [] I say write on... thanks so much for the review... Kim -
Chapter 15 I Do...Again
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Merci, Dave, glad you're still loving it...love the calm before the storm...lol -
Chapter 15 I Do...Again
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Hmmmm...Frosty you'll have to wait and see... Glad to see you're still hanging in there... -
Chapter 15 I Do...Again
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 15 I Do...Again
Yes, Sir,RC we have a wedding to plan...and I actually got crab legs after I wrote this chapter and they were heavenly..Thank you, Kind Sir, for posting a commemt. Impatiently waiting for an update from you, Mister
