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Chapter 22...The Epilogue
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 22...The Epilogue
pfox25, glad you enjoyed Shades of Gray. I really enjoyed the epilogue too. Thanks for taking the time to post a review. Kim -
Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
MarqMur, thank you for the wonderful review and compliment, you've got me blusing over here. I'm so happy to see that you are reading and enjoying the story. I hope I do it justice. As I've mentioned I'm really enjoying it myself, I love getting into the heads of my characters, they actually help write the story, if that makes any sense...lolAgain thanks so much. Kim -
OMG...WOW and all that jazz.... You've just set the bar so high for me, I don't think I can write a love scene that hot, that steamy, that intense and that revealing. I was caught up in the moment myself and that's not good because I was at work. I was scared for Ross for a moment, and then released the breath I was holding when everything was okay. He finally found his missing piece and that was amazing. What a wonderful story. I can see why it's your favorite. You can tell you put a lot into it.
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Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Children are a lot of fun, they have so much character and wit, glad you like Ethan and Liam and I hope you continue to read and enjoy the story. I'm having a lot of fun with it and the journey pushes forward Merci,Kim :D -
Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
I think it's a nice slow progression, one that even he doesn't notice himself actually so I agree with you. Ahhh the date. That should be interesting indeed. Ah, intune, I see ya trying to get Christian in that room. hahaha I'm sure David would second that for sure. Thanks for the review and the edit!!! Kim -
Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Hell, I'm glad you found it again...stay with me now...lol You like and that makes me smile. Kim -
Great chapter! I'm so happy for Rosaly/Ross, lol I wanted to scream I love Jeremy!!!! then you introduced Nash... either way Ross is happy and so am I'm I.... Oh and I must say the sex scene had me holding my breath, so intense and so beautifully written.
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Awww poor Rosaly, I'm glad you didn't go into too many details and I liked the way you wrote this. I was wondering in the last chapter what happened in the garage after the 1st chapter...cleaver. I'm glad she finally told, on both parts actually. Maybe now she can start to understand herself and she doesn't have to live with that freak Danny...Grrrrr. great chapter KC.
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Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
thanks KC. I dig Tag, look for a lot more of him...He's a lot of fun and I think Chris is lucky to have such a loyal friend. I want him to remember too, just hope he can handle whatever it is, there's a reason the Dr. thinks he's blocking it out, so we'll have to see. Merci. Kim -
Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
MWAH Lil brother. You know how I do it...nice fluffy chapter and BAM!, nawh not really, I don't do BAM very well, maybe not to fluffy..lol Ive got an update at your request -
Matt needs more than just a paddleing in front of the class, he needs his A** kicked. That was stupid. He better be glad I'm not her mother, just saying. lol And again what a dissapointment for her knowing she wasn't the one getting asked to the dance. That which does not kill us makes us stronger. She is a strong chick.
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Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Hey, Lisa *waves* trust me on the child rearing thang, my kids didn't know what a time out was, they knew spankings. Now I did put my child in the corner and she fell asleep so... I loved that Christian didn't remember that Ethan always turns over his oatmeal, but Liam did...lol Oh yes, Christian is crushing on his husband, which could be a good thing for David, He could get a do over and just be good all the time. So glad you like Tag and Jimmy, I think they are cool. Their outer shell may appear hard and scary, but the inside is rainbows and skettles..and Ethan and Liam love them to death. Oh yes and David will have to explain somethings. Thanks for the Great review, Kim :D -
Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
He is. He surrounded by people who love him and based on the way he's handling the situation there's a reason why. He must be a pretty okay dude. I was telling a friend of mine that based on the story plot it's almost unfair to Christian thus far, because we get to see how David is for the most part, but with Christian and his struggles we haven't seen the real him...Yet Super excited that you're still enjoying the story and letting me know you're out there.. Kim -
Hey Scotty, welcome to the party. Glad to hear you are digging Christian and David, and that I haven't bored you to death. Thanks for the review,and I hope you continue to read and let me know what you think. Kim
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Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Oh Richard, I've got tons of them. Raising 4 childrens I've got all kind of stories for miles, so trust me with kids in this story there will be more misshaps Vanilla, eh? That's nice and smooth,then you add the Rocky Road... :D just saying I kinda like the queen of cliffhangers. Let me see what others I can come up with. I really appreicate you reading and leaving reviews, they always make me smile, if not laugh out loud. Kim -
Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
unlikelyu, it does appear their household is coming together nicely. I think that even though Christian dosen't remember he knows what everyone is saying about his life is true, and David, being as patient as he is really does help. Then there's Tag and Jimmy who really are great friends. Tag will definitely keep Chris in line...lol Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave a review. 'Comment's fuel the writers soul'I always say. Kim -
Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Thanks for all your help Jammikins, I really appreciate it. Christian is doing well making the adjustment with the kids. And I commend him for not letting them know he doesn't remember them. I'm sure David appreciates the fact that he's trying so hard and willing to jump in and get his hands dirty sorta speak. I also agree with you Tag and Jimmy are great. Thanks for the review and help with this chapter. Kim -
Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 7 I Think I Can. I Think I Can...
Oh Frostina, just a skeet taste.. You and I feel the same about Jimmy, I think Tag likes his man a little rough aound the edges and strong...hehe.Thanks for the review, glad to see you are still hanging in there with me. Kim -
“Now, you’re sure you’re okay with this?” David asked one last time as he picked up his keys. He was both anxious and nervous at the same time.. He wanted more than anything for their lives to get back on track, but more importantly he needed Christian to want it as much as he did. He didn’t want him just going through the motions for the sake of him and the kids. “I’ll be fine,” Christian assured him as he followed him to the door. “I’ll get the boys up after I have my coffee and get them
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Chapter 8 It's like Deja vu all over again...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 8 It's like Deja vu all over again...
Awwww.... good night, thanks for reading, and thanks for the review. Kim -
:D Hope you like it!!! let me know. Merci!
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Chapter 6...Promises Made
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 6...Promises Made
A saint, eh let Tag tell it that's far from the truth. lol at this point as I mentioned in an eariler post all we're really getting is David because Chris don't remember their previous life as a couple, but there's got to be a reason David is so into him. Thanks for the review and edit, you ROCK! Kim -
Okay, I was doing good until the last part. I'm a little scared here. But I will suck it up and try. I love the writing, but if that....touches her...just saying lol Figured I'd start with this one
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Chapter 6...Promises Made
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 6...Promises Made
Hey little bit, hows it going thanks Sid for the review. you know how much I love them..HEHE yeah David got a reprive this time. Let's hope there's no more crying in his future. Tag is great, I'm glad he seems to be going over so well, since he will be around through out the journey. Oh and the character you are referring to...the bald guy lol is Bleek. and I think you mean how Jons doing if you are referring to the crazy husband...lol love ya back bro and next chapter is in the making even as we speak so hopefully if all goes according to my plan it will be posted this weekend. *crosses fingers* Kim *Hugs*
