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  1. Naptowngirl
    Oh yes, Rebelghost85, believe me and that is all I can say. The next chapter should be interesting indeed...Thanks for leaving a review... Kim
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    He sat in his car drumming his fingers against the steering wheel, debating whether to go inside. It seemed like a good idea on the drive over but now he wasn’t so sure. He took a deep breath, chewing nervously on the inside of his cheek rationalizing with himself. He needed to do this. It had been two months and not much had changed in the way of Drake’s behavior. To him it was as if Drake had become obsessed, namely with Max. He understood the promise Drake made to Brad, to look after Max
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    joann414, it's I that thank you, for reading, and posting a review...I love both Kaleb and Chase,and loved writing the whole story,but I have to admit the epilogue was my fav, because we see that they have a wonderful life together and normal, beautiful children...Again thanks so much for the lovely review, Kim
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    Merci, intune. I wanted the reader to get to know Brad and how cool he was not to mention why he was so important to both Max and Drake. I appreicate you reading and posting a review... Thank you!!!!
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    Okay, so I'm a little jealous that my song is not as cool as most, I saw this and was like Seriously???? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1yW1GIYAGY
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    Thank you for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, You're right things could have gone a lot worse.Thanks again for the review, I appreiciate ya! Kim
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    Wow, so I read this chapter with my chin cupped in the palm of my hand, snapping at anyone who interrupted me by asking dumb questions like can we eat now...lol joking but I agree with the majority very intense indeed. Poor everyone especially Cooper and CJ, man that poor kid...sighs. I'm sure I'm not the only one checking here daily for an update, with that said welcome back and thanks. I'm truly enjoying this story. and yes I'm still keeping hope alive with Kyle. You knew I couldn't post a review without mentioning Kyle
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    “I don’t know, Mom,” Cody sighed as he sat down. He had just poured himself another brandy and was feeling a little melancholy. Whenever he was feeling this way, a ‘good dose of Mom’ always seemed to do the trick. He thought back to what brought him to seek solace from his mom. He and Drake were in the middle of making love and Drake answered the phone, right in the middle of the act. Who does that? Drake does, apparently, he thought. “I don’t mean it like that,” he clarified. “I just m
  9. Naptowngirl
    Thank you Chibi, glad to hear you are enjoying the story. I love the flashbacks and thanks for the compliment, the editor actually took of the flashback tags...lol so I think I'll keep them off it looks better if nothing else lol. I'm hoping you'll continue reading and let me know what you think. Kim
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    Awwww.... Neph, thats so much. Kaleb and Chase are and will be always special to me. I actually have a one shot story that I plan to post sometime in the future so that should be fun. Them having kids of their own seemed only fitting being Kaleb loves kids so much. the fact that you even read the story let alone commented thrilled me to know end, so it's I that should be thanking you. So thank you... Kim
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    Swhouston44, you are totally to kind and you know it. but thank you. I love the term "real good stuff" it makes me happy that you think so. Ozzing out the fingers eh??? lol well I hope you stick with me till the end, it's a short story so I shouldn't take up too much of your time Merci, Kim
  12. Naptowngirl
    Thanks intune you know what I love more then getting reviews? getting thought provoking reviews...I love it when the reader tries to get inside the head of my characters...I just love it :D !!!! and as you well know Ican't give anything away, that takes the fun out of it...lol Thanks for the great review and come on now, writing tricks*blushes*, you've got my head swelled so big I couldn't fit through the door this morning... Kim
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    They stepped inside the dark apartment, Drake allowed Maxwell to enter first. He stopped, and scratched the side of his head as he absorbed his surroundings. The place was a total mess and the smell wasn’t that great either. He didn’t notice it this morning when he came by to pick up Maxwell, probably because his mind was on more pressing issues like getting through the funeral without breaking down. As he stood there, he realized that Maxwell hadn’t been living, he’d been existing. The cu
  14. Naptowngirl
    Love those cities, though I'm partical to NYC, any one will be cool with me, so count me in..
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    Hey.... thank you, hope that means you plan on reading the rest..lol Kim
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    Thanks intune. Yep it's a totally different vibe, and I hope to keep your attention and keep you reading. and thank you for the compliment, You Rock! Kim
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    Thanks for encouraging words, now the pressure is on...lol. The characters in this story are a little different, and I've already fallen in love with one... the flashbacks will help us understand who Brad was and why he was so important in Maxwell and Drake's life. I hope I do the story justice and you enjoy it... Merci, Rebelghost85 Kim
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    Thank you CK, you are right dealing with death can be tramatic, especially when it's so close to home. I'm hoping you will stick with Maxwell as he tries to cope with life and possible love after Brad..Thanks for taking time to post a review. Kim
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    Hold up already...hehehehe... don't tell me you've forgotten Kaleb, his feeling might be hurt if he found out...lol Whats' his name is used to it. But anyway, glad to see you enjoyed the first chapter, it is a little different, came to me during the night literally. It should be an interesting ride to say the least. the fun part for me will be seeing which one you favor as the story progresses... Thanks, Swhouston44 for the review, Kim
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    “Unto Almighty God we commend the soul of our brother departed, and we commit his body to the ground; earth to earth, ashes to ashes, dust to dust; Let us pray.” Everyone bowed his or her head except Maxwell. He did just the opposite. He looked up, the wind catching his hair, gently lifting it off his forehead as he glanced around to all the mournful faces standing around the silver-tone steel casket that would be lowered into the ground. He lifted the collar of his black, wool trench coat s
  21. Naptowngirl
    Losing a loved one changes your entire life, especially when the loved one was also your husband... and best friend. How do you move on without the overwhelming sense of betrayal and guilt? How will you know when you're ready, and will you recognize love when it's right in front of you.
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    Super sized Thank you Jdamn...glad you enjoyed the story, thanks for letting me know you were reading.... Kim
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    Awwww...thank you, again As I said in the PM I totally love this song. It's playing in the background as I type this. As I listen to the words, I have to agree it's perfectedly fitting...it carries you away with the melody as well. I'm excited aboout what the New Year has in store. Happy 2012 to you as well. Kim
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    Well and proper....I like that Thanks for much for reading and sharing your reviews...AWESOME!and a Belated Happy Festivus to you as well and my 2012 be filled with many wonderful things. Ease into it safely. Kim
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    Danke, intune...loved your reviews... now that this story is done, I can do what I love to do read...looks like you've got one out there I need to check out... Kim
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