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Chapter 5 Grief Reactions...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 Grief Reactions...
YAY!!! Glad you'er enjoying the story. I'm having fun with it...I must agree with you. I'm sure Drake was having a hard with this, but taking it all in stride. I think back to the flashback, when Max sat on his lap trying to get him to go out with them, I'm sure that had to be challanging to say the least. Again glad you're enjoying it, hope you continue their little journey with me and thanks for the compliment... Kim -
I did say lines would be crossed, didn't I...lol Love your response to what happened here. If you hit him repeatedly in the face, you might break his nose...lol.Truly love the reveiw, and glad you are reading, hope you continue... Kim
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Chapter 5 Grief Reactions...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 Grief Reactions...
I think Max and Drake would make a great couple too, intune. There are so many factors to deal with here. Cody being one of them... lol.Thanks for sticking with me during this story and posting a review, I appriciate it as I hope you know...comments fuel the writer's soul I always say... Kim -
Chapter 5 Grief Reactions...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 Grief Reactions...
It truly is, Labrador, having dealt with it myself, I can atest... some pretty crazy, amazing and very tragic things can come from it. Thanks for the compliment, its very kind of you. I hope not to dissapoint ya, and thanks so very much for the review, glad to know your reading and enjoying the story so far. Kim -
Chapter 5 Grief Reactions...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 Grief Reactions...
Yes they did...can you believe it? lol. Glad to see your still reading... Thanks, Kim -
“Hey…” Maxwell furrowed his brows as he stared at his friend. “What’s going on?” He asked as he sidestepped him making his way inside. “Um…” Drake closed the door behind. “What are you doing here? I’ve been trying to call you.” he stated as he followed Maxwell into the living room. “Well, I’m here now. What did you want?” Maxwell asked as he turned to face his friend. “Huh?” “You said you’ve been calling me.” Maxwell reiterated, “What did you want when you called?” “Oh yeah.” Drake ch
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...I Never Thought it Could End That Way
Naptowngirl commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...I Never Thought it Could End That Way
Couldn't sleep so I got up milled around on the computer and found "Gold" Great Chapter as always. Kuddos to Devon for doing the right thing...CJ and Cooper are wonderful together. Loved the flash back as well. It showed that Devon got it...I understand she was devasted and upset at Coop for wanting to end their marriage, but when it's all said and done, they were never in love with each other, not to mention, Coop was gay... Things got turned upside down, but that's how life is. some things we can avoid and some we can't. I got to see Spencer and he never dissapoints....lol Chase is handling this like a champ,he's very sincere and I want to like him, but somethings off to me about him. I think I'm with Spencer and the guys, I still have trust issues, not to mention there's Morgan, I could go on and on about the dynamics of that situation, being that it hits pretty close to home for me... then there's K... who I'm not going to mention, (whispers) keeping hope alive...lol Great find, now back off to bed, I can sleep happily -
...I Tried So Many Times to Do the Right Thing
Naptowngirl commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...I Tried So Many Times to Do the Right Thing
Okay, So glad you posted, I was about to PM you just because...lol No seriously I think I scan the stories looking for your updates... I must say Kyle hurt me...I mean, I've been waiting for Cooper to reach out and Kyle was too busy...Really? Are you trying to kill me a slow death? Should I put away my Team Kyle shirt... Then the Morgan thing was like OMG, no he didn't, but I don't blame him, gotta look at the competion...Chase handled it rather nicely.. Poor CJ...Sighs..Can't wait for the next update, Cooper loves his kids in spite of his lifesyle and it shows... Great Chapter...again!!!! -
Chapter 4...Bargaining
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4...Bargaining
Oh yes, Rebelghost85, believe me and that is all I can say. The next chapter should be interesting indeed...Thanks for leaving a review... Kim -
He sat in his car drumming his fingers against the steering wheel, debating whether to go inside. It seemed like a good idea on the drive over but now he wasn’t so sure. He took a deep breath, chewing nervously on the inside of his cheek rationalizing with himself. He needed to do this. It had been two months and not much had changed in the way of Drake’s behavior. To him it was as if Drake had become obsessed, namely with Max. He understood the promise Drake made to Brad, to look after Max
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Chapter 22...The Epilogue
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 22...The Epilogue
joann414, it's I that thank you, for reading, and posting a review...I love both Kaleb and Chase,and loved writing the whole story,but I have to admit the epilogue was my fav, because we see that they have a wonderful life together and normal, beautiful children...Again thanks so much for the lovely review, Kim -
Merci, intune. I wanted the reader to get to know Brad and how cool he was not to mention why he was so important to both Max and Drake. I appreicate you reading and posting a review... Thank you!!!!
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What Song Was Number 1 The Day You Were Born?
Naptowngirl replied to methodwriter85's topic in The Lounge
Okay, so I'm a little jealous that my song is not as cool as most, I saw this and was like Seriously???? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1yW1GIYAGY -
Thank you for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, You're right things could have gone a lot worse.Thanks again for the review, I appreiciate ya! Kim
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...The Right Decisions Are Often the Hardest to Make
Naptowngirl commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...The Right Decisions Are Often the Hardest to Make
Wow, so I read this chapter with my chin cupped in the palm of my hand, snapping at anyone who interrupted me by asking dumb questions like can we eat now...lol joking but I agree with the majority very intense indeed. Poor everyone especially Cooper and CJ, man that poor kid...sighs. I'm sure I'm not the only one checking here daily for an update, with that said welcome back and thanks. I'm truly enjoying this story. and yes I'm still keeping hope alive with Kyle. You knew I couldn't post a review without mentioning Kyle -
“I don’t know, Mom,” Cody sighed as he sat down. He had just poured himself another brandy and was feeling a little melancholy. Whenever he was feeling this way, a ‘good dose of Mom’ always seemed to do the trick. He thought back to what brought him to seek solace from his mom. He and Drake were in the middle of making love and Drake answered the phone, right in the middle of the act. Who does that? Drake does, apparently, he thought. “I don’t mean it like that,” he clarified. “I just m
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Chapter 2 'Guilt' Riddance...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 'Guilt' Riddance...
Thank you Chibi, glad to hear you are enjoying the story. I love the flashbacks and thanks for the compliment, the editor actually took of the flashback tags...lol so I think I'll keep them off it looks better if nothing else lol. I'm hoping you'll continue reading and let me know what you think. Kim -
Chapter 22...The Epilogue
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 22...The Epilogue
Awwww.... Neph, thats so much. Kaleb and Chase are and will be always special to me. I actually have a one shot story that I plan to post sometime in the future so that should be fun. Them having kids of their own seemed only fitting being Kaleb loves kids so much. the fact that you even read the story let alone commented thrilled me to know end, so it's I that should be thanking you. So thank you... Kim -
Chapter 2 'Guilt' Riddance...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 'Guilt' Riddance...
Swhouston44, you are totally to kind and you know it. but thank you. I love the term "real good stuff" it makes me happy that you think so. Ozzing out the fingers eh??? lol well I hope you stick with me till the end, it's a short story so I shouldn't take up too much of your time Merci, Kim -
Chapter 2 'Guilt' Riddance...
Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 'Guilt' Riddance...
Thanks intune you know what I love more then getting reviews? getting thought provoking reviews...I love it when the reader tries to get inside the head of my characters...I just love it :D !!!! and as you well know Ican't give anything away, that takes the fun out of it...lol Thanks for the great review and come on now, writing tricks*blushes*, you've got my head swelled so big I couldn't fit through the door this morning... Kim -
They stepped inside the dark apartment, Drake allowed Maxwell to enter first. He stopped, and scratched the side of his head as he absorbed his surroundings. The place was a total mess and the smell wasn’t that great either. He didn’t notice it this morning when he came by to pick up Maxwell, probably because his mind was on more pressing issues like getting through the funeral without breaking down. As he stood there, he realized that Maxwell hadn’t been living, he’d been existing. The cu
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Love those cities, though I'm partical to NYC, any one will be cool with me, so count me in..
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Hey.... thank you, hope that means you plan on reading the rest..lol Kim
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Thanks intune. Yep it's a totally different vibe, and I hope to keep your attention and keep you reading. and thank you for the compliment, You Rock! Kim
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Thanks for encouraging words, now the pressure is on...lol. The characters in this story are a little different, and I've already fallen in love with one... the flashbacks will help us understand who Brad was and why he was so important in Maxwell and Drake's life. I hope I do the story justice and you enjoy it... Merci, Rebelghost85 Kim
