Naptowngirl

Mike00, not sure how I missed this. I haven't written in a while so I don't get on much, but I did today and saw soomeone commented and as I scrolled down and saw your post. I'm happy you are reading or should I say started reading this story, it was indeed a favorite of mine..Again I hope you enjoyed it. Kim

Briansboy, thanks for your attemp at reading the 2nd story I've ever written. I've always said I'm not a writer, I just love writing. You've brought out some great points and since I didn't have a beta or editor, I probably should remove the story until I have time to edit it. Trust me it's not because of your harsh critizing, I've thought about it before, you just reminded me. It's a good thing I'm not thin skinned otherwise I might be discouraged to continue. I think you mentioned you are new to the site, with that being said, I'm not sure if you realized you could have actually PM'ed me as some other's who were seriously offering corrective criticism have done. I have a beta and editor now and my writing style has changed, some say for the better, I don't know. I would say I'm sorry that you won't be reading any more of my newer stories, but I'd be lying, With that I'll say GA is a great site filled with amazing talent. I hope you enjoy your time here and not let my story ruin it for the other writers. Oh and I'm not going to write you off as a "jaded, bitchy queen" because I don't know you or anything about you, but I will just write you off...

Wow, what a mess. That rebounding thing never works, Asher didn't you know that. Totally great chapter KC, can't wait to see how you fix this one

Asher seems to be good for Micheal already...He's helping Micheal control his drinking and Micheal seems ok with it, so that's cool. Not to mention Micheal also seems a skeet taste protective of our dear Asher, coming to his defense about choosing not to attend the game. Maybe Micheal is calling to ask Asher for a non-date, just dude kind of date...hehe As always great chapter KC, keep em coming!!!!

Asher keeps thinking he has no change with the super uber "straight guy" Hummmm I wonder if Asher's "gaydar" needs a little tweeking...ya think? Great chapter and I must say I'm digging Michael. everyone has a softer side of them that only the priveledged are allowed to see, Asher might be Michael's one. So we find out that Asher is more then just a pretty face, he had depth and character! Curious as to why Michael avoided the bar for those two days....

Michael seems to have issues re: the drinking, but I think he's pretty cool....so far. I'm not sure where you're going to go with these two, so I'll just sit back, enjoy and watch it unfold

So sarapf, you liked my lil story eh? Wonderful!!!! I was actually looking to read another story and saw I had a review...thank you It felt amazing...I love that folks are still read ing Shades of Gray, it really just made my day. I loved the epilogue as well and we got to meet Lilly's brothers, sweet! Again thanks for reading and letting me know you were out there. Kim

Daithi, though the story has been finished for some time now it's always a joy to find it's still being read. Thank you so much for reading and posting a comment. Kaleb and Chase in my eyes are both amazing... I hope you enjoy the rest of the story I know I enjoy writing it! Kim

Okay, I'm starting to like Michael I love the jacket gesture so sweet, this crazy men might not be such an ass after all...totally enjoyable chapter KC.

Not to sound like a broken record, but I'm wondering the same thing, what's up with Micheal's drinking...poor baby he needs a hug.... totally laughed out loud at the Lost in Space reference...what you know about that? Micheal's co workers should be ashame of themselves... *shaking my head. Great chapter...

Okay so this should be interesting to see what transpires between the two men the next time they see each other...I see an interesting ride in our future

Happy Birthday to you, Happy Birthday to you....Happy Birthday dear Siddddddddd......lalalalalala Happy Birthday toooooo Youuuuuuu Dear Lil Brother, you're the Bestiest if that's even a word... Love ya,

Thank you so much for taking the time to read School Daze. I'm totally happy you enjoyed the ride. Thanks for the reviews and kind words as well, they fuel the writers soul. Kim

Our boys are angry, but they are smart, getting the cops involved would be the smart thing to do, check out chapter 15 Jace indeed gets what he deserves... Glad to see you're still reading. thanks for the review Kim

Yeah Ryan's small town innocence could be taken advantage of if he's not careful. Jace will always find excuses for his actions no matter what, that's just the kind of person he is. Kennedy dosen't trust and just speaks off the shoulder. I think she's harmless though. Joel has his faults, but he's honest and he doesn't want to hurt Ryan. When he says he wants to see where things go with him he means it. We'll have to see what the future holds for there guys... Merci for reading and taking the time to post a review I love it!!!!! Kim

I take it you dont like Jace....LOL Jace is indeed one of a kind who lives in his own reality thats for sure....

I really hope you continue to enjoy the story. I find myself glancing over each chapter you review going "yeah that was cool." I'm a romantic at heart if you haven't gathered that but their is much more of Joel and Ryan to come. I actually love Joel's parents not to mention Brye. he's a cutie too. Again thanks Randy. Comments fuel the writers soul. Kim

I actually find them totally hot together myself. They ooze chemistry so it was very easy to write them...

Jace is a bit over the top, and you haven't seen nothing yet . I must tell you Randy this was one of my first stories and there was no beta so please bare with the errors. It's my intentions to go in and correct them all, just haven't gotten around to doing it... Again thanks so much for reading and replying, you've just made my day Kim

Thank you, Randy, so glad you're enjoying the story. What a plesent surprise to find someone reading it... It put a huge smile on my face...

Danke, KC nice and neat, just the way I like it. Heath knows a great thing when he finds it LOL So happy that you caught the last chapter. Now moving on... Kim

Pour me another ....I dig the start and can't wait to see what you have in store for us...Marking my calendar for April!

Awwww, Lisa, thank you so much for your reviews...I totally look forward to them...I can tell you now that the story is over, didn't want to put too much pressure on ya...LOL. I think Heath proved where his loyalty lies and what he really wants to be happy. And in the end Simon had a heart after all... You Rock chica... Kim

Thank you Cm, I love happy endings too And thanks for taking the time to write a review to each chapter... Kim

Poor Simon, don't you just wanna give him a hug? Now lets hope he keeps his word, right? Thank so much for your reviews, CM Kim