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    Heath's plane landed at the Chicago’s O'Hare airport at 9:30am as scheduled. He gripped the arms of the seat tightly as the wheels touched the ground. He hated the landings. Taking off was cool, but to Heath the pilots just never seemed to get the landing smooth enough for him. The six hour time difference and stressful situation Simon put him in with Mrs. Thomas, was starting to take its toll on him and all he wanted to do was sleep in his own bed. He yawned taking a sip of black coffee as
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    Hey Cannd. You have a lot of great questions and they will be answered in the up coming chapters, stay tuned. with each chapter a little more is revealed. Heath's romantic background is touched on in the next chapter. And we learn more about his past, I promise. How did Alec become so wealthy and how he and Kaila became so close, maybe chapter 5 or 6 and last but not least we will find out more about the person who hired Heath. The Acts of Deception unfolds layer by layer. I hope you stick with it. It's a bumpy ride that's for sure. Thanks for reading and taking the time to share a review. Kim
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    unlikelyu *waves* too soon to hate Heath eh? I can't say too much about him you'll have to wait and see, but yes, Nina is a total bitch she'll be one you might love to hate And you will find out who Alec is soon my pretty, very very soon. And yes maam you can have more... Thank you My dear for still reading and letting me know you're out there. Kim
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    Lisa, in this situation Nina has no idea what she's getting into.There's an old saying "Be careful what you wish for," Alec Russo,lol I've never heard of 'Wizards of Waverly Place,' you know what they say about great minds. RE: Health, Bo, Alec and Kaila I can't say too much that would ruin it...after the next two chapters I can speak on the story a little more, but remember there are still players out there we haven't actually met yet. Oh and Kaila is named after my kid with the same spelling, so glad you like it... and Heath I worked with a fine ass man with the same name so I thought it fit Hang on Chica, it's going to be an interesting ride. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Love your comments to pieces. Kim
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    I know right, Jammi, Nina is worth a shake of the head. I don't think she knows what she's getting into with Heath, hell I'm not sure Heath knows what he's getting into. Danke for all the help and coming through at the last minute. You rock Chica...I like the name Heath too. I actually worked with a guy named Heath and girl he was smooth as silk and just as fine. Again thanks so much for editing and posting a review even after we've talked about it and talked about it...lol
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    And I've got soooooo many answers, 'All in good time my Pretty...all in good time. So in Chapter 3 we find out the name of the person who hired Heath, but you haven't met him yet...and I can't wait till you do... Merci, KC Kim
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    KC...YAY!!! so glad to see ya. So you're not liking Heath, and hating Nina eh? LOL Oh and let's not forget Bo with him it's strictly 'BIDNESS' And yeah like I told Joann, it's not called Acts of Deception for nothin...hold on, there's light at the end of the tunnel, but is it attached to a train?From on of my favorites Authors, I thank you for gracing me with you're presence...*bows* Kim
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    Awww, Krisz I totally enjoy you. So much going on it's crazy but trust me my friend it's about to get craizer. You haven't met Mr. Simon yet..hehehe. Heath,Alec,Bo, Kaila and Nina won't know what hit them when it does...just saying. Cheezing like Chester over here, glad I was your pick me up for the day, it's been a while since I was someone's pick me up Merci, Krisz Kim
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    thanks so much for the review and the words of encourgment, Conner. Though it's a finished story, my writting style as developed a little more, so as I read it I'm like this needs to be changed and that needs to be fixed, it's actually like writing from just an outline. LOL Now to the chapter...Um yeah is not a girlscout for sure. She don't know what she's getting herself into that's for sure. She's a determined little B, that's for sure she thinks she wants in...right now The story will pick up in the next chapters. So glad to have you aboard I really appreciate ya. Kim
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    This story seems like its starting out slow even to me, but I think that's because I wrote this back in 09 and I've had to do some major revamping so that's taking time, but it does pick up in the next chapter and I promise the left hand won't know what the right hand is doing. It's not calle 'Acts of Deception' for nothing...hehe Nina is a trip and as I menitoned before she only gets worse. Kaila is a smart girl and she has Alec's back for sure. Heath...well can't say much about him, you'll have to read to find out. which I thank you for doing by the way. Love, love your comments Danke... Kim
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    It was 2:30 in the morning and Heath was void of sleep. His body was tired but his mind wouldn’t shut down. He lay wide awake staring at the ceiling wishing for sleep but to no avail. He had been called away to London unexpectedly to clean up a botched job so his assignment was put on hold. The past week had been a stressful one to say the least, but he managed to keep it together. He had no choice. There was too much money riding on these deals. In the few short days of actual contact with
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    Merci... so glad you enjoyed it. I have a lot of fun writing and coming up with new story ideas. and I love hearing what the readers think of not only the characters but the story line as well. So again thank you very much! Kim
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    Chapter 14

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 14

    Awww...I'm sorry but yes, you need to keep reading... I actually work at a hospital so yea there are corridors that are on cameras but security is not always watching at the time... I think you will like what you read in the next few chapters. I've been reading too. I love doing that, follow the reader...lol *hugs* Danke, Kim
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    Chapter 4

    Naptowngirl commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4

    You likely eh? lol School Daze is actually one of my favs I had a lot of fun with those crazy kids...hehehe Thank you again for reading my lil ole stories I'm so glad you're enjoying them. Comments fuel the writers soul and you're keeping well fed Kim
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    Houdinii, please don't chase my lil bro he might give in and I'll have to chase him down myself...lol I really hope you enjoy this story it was one I wrote a few years ago and it needed a lot work but it is one of my favs so... Nina, that girl...shaking my head. You've to read it she's a total trip. Again thanks for the review Kim
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    Jams, break over eh? cool beans. Not sure how I feel about not being able to chat with my friend when I want, but I guess it's okay, we have to do NYC when you have a break and thanks for leaving a comment even though you edit and have read it before...LOL my girl MWAH
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    Hey Mike, So I've set the hook did I? Super cool. I'm gonna do my best to reel ya in the hold you hostage till the bitter end. Kim
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    Merci!!!
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    OMG...you're reading Undetermined Identity. my very first story I wrote on my own...I moved it over here. I know it needs a lot of work, but I'm glad you're enjoying it. Hopefully you can see my growth. I can. Now on to the story. if you're on chapter nine then you understand the story and yes Lisa is a trip. Again so glad you're enjoy the story. And guess what. There's a X-mas story for this group that I plan to post this christmas... Kim
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    Hehehe, Krisz I would say I'm sorry for all the unanswered questions, but I'd be lying lol. It's a heck of a lot of fun. I'm not so sure Alec is as comfortable as Heath is giving the type of person he is. I would gather licking the syrup off his face took Alec by surprise... Nina, I don't know what to say about her except if you don't like her now, you won't,she doesn't get any better. Heath is dealing with some new emotions even as he evokes mixed ones with you. I don't want to say much about him because I want you to draw your own conclusion. You've gotta stick around though, all questions will be answered and the action heats up pretty soon. Again, thanks Krisz. Kim
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    I love ya lil bro..MWAH and Merci for shushing and giving this story a second look....mumms the word.
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    Conner, Heath definitely wants something from Alec, which you will find out soon enough, I can't give too much away it will spoil the fun. Like Charlie said there will be some twist and turns along with a few OMG's so stay tuned. Danke, Kim
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    YAY!!! charlie, welcome to the jungle there will be a few twists and turns for sure. It's actually only 12 chapters. I'm a get in get out...lol kind of girl. You've read my stuff before and I hope you enjoy this one and I keep you entertained. Merci, Kim
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    *waves* unlikelyu. Danke for the review. I always love reading your reviews, getting your stance on the characters...Now we have many unanswered questions I know, but I promise all in due time my pretty...and I hope it's an exciting ride in the process... Kim
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    Heath, Heather...lol girl you are silly...*hugs* Ah man you are in for a real treat re: Nina...I think. Um, yeah Heath's suppliments his income alright and the plot will thicken with each chapter as well as the unanswered questions Now the 65,000 Q is..Is Heath really cheating on Alec...Hummm Merci, Chica so glad to see you're digging the story at this early stage of the "game" Hehe Kim
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