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  1. I know, and I'm totally ashamed of myself I've never taken this long to update, but low and behold there will be one tonight Sandyraz. Sorry for the delay, Kim
  2. Hey Lisa, *waves* lolSo you've got a db eh? LOL Hope he's not as dangerous as Simon's... Yeah, I agree Heath needs to come clean with Alec if he has hopes for any future with him after this...*sighs* As I mentioned before Simon lives in his own reality so we're have to see if what he is accusing Alec of is actually true.. :D Thank you girly, girl for reading and posting a review, I love IT!!! Kim
  3. Girl, ain't that right...LOL Simon is one of a kind for sure. I honestly think he has a brotherly love for Heath. Heath could probaby get away with stuff other's can't. Yes ma'am we will find out more in the next chapter... Merci my dear. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to post a review...what's my saying? Comments fuel the writer's soul...you're doing a heck of a job at that... Kim
  4. Very good question, saintsfan...um but you know I can't comment on that, Simon might have me offed you know how he feels about loyality...hehehe thanks so much for the comment, super excited you're still reading. I promise to do better on the posting again, merci Kim
  5. You know, Conner, I'm with you on that, Simon said it and I believe him...somewhat as well, even though he does lives in his own reality...LOL And you're right I can't comment much on it, so yeah please stay tuned..hehehe. Gotta tell you, you were spot on with your preception of how Simon would react when Heath wanted to quit...it just ain't happening...lol thanks for the review and still hanging with my little Motley Crew... Kim
  6. It was unfathomable. ‘Alec and Simon?’ Heath shook his head trying to rid himself of the thought, but he couldn’t. The vision playing over and over in his head of Simon's hands all over Alec made him want to throw up...literally. He grabbed the steering wheel tightly as he drove through the nearly empty streets. ‘What the hell was Alec doing with him? Was Simon truly gay or just bi-curious?’ Heath knew Simon had messed around with a few guys back in high school, but from what he knew of t
  7. SUPER Congrats to my lil Bro, SidLove. He and I have a history that exceeds GA. He loves writing and has worked really hard to improve his craft,couldn't be happier for him. Love ya...MWAH
  8. I know right, Conner...As I told Cannd, we know Heath is really digging Alec, but at that time, he was in strictly business mode. again out of the problem and into the solution. Everyone's life was put in danger with Alec's confession. I'd almost bet that Heath would have refused the job if he'd know Simon and Alec's involvement. So now the tables are turned. I laughed out loud when I read your responses from Simon it's so spot on and soooo Simon hehehe. Thanks for the great review, totally loved it. Kim
  9. Hey Lisa, Girl, I'm not sure Simon considers himself a cold blooded killer, more of a business man per se...hehehe, but did Alec know about Simon, you'll find out in the couple of chapters and as you know there are two sides to every story...just saying oh and Lisa, Simon may be ruthless and rotten to the core, but he's also very handsome and smooth as silk...I'm sure that's what drew Alec to him. LOL Thanks, Chica, glad you enjoyed the chapter Kim
  10. *waves* Cannd..I'm soooo glad you're enjoying my lil story. Love the compliment on my writing style..I really try 1st off I agree with you Heath should have stayed and explained what was going on to Alec before leaving, but knowing Heath, he's never been in love. Yes he understands what his mother said about soulmates, but he has not learned to channel those skills. for him it was get out of the problem and into the solution...Simon They both were hurting, Alec and Heath, but for different reasons. Alec thinking Heath left because of his involement with Simon and Health for his involement with Simon, if that makes since. Heath has a heavy burden to bear. What happens next is anyones game. How will Heath respond to Simon, how will Simon respond to Heath, most importantly how will Heath and Alec deal with is, if they do... Heath wasn't hired to kill Alec physically, he was hired to kill him emotionally and leave him broke and heartbroken. You're right Alec is a millionaire when you collect all his assists, remember I told you that Love your insite to the story and more importantly your review fuels my writers soul...Keep em coming Kim
  11. Yeah, Joann, indeed Simon is a dangerous man. He's proven he has on problem with getting rid of people getting in his way...Nina. Remember Bo warned Health about Nina. I guessed Heath didn't act fast enough. LOL Next is the fallout...Heath/Simon Heath/Alec Alec/Simon...stay tuned my dear... Kim
  12. Indeed, Terry, and Simon doesn't play...It's too bad Nina didn't get a free pass like Darrell did. yep Heath will have a lot to contend with. His developing feelings for Alec, his willingness to do the right thing could get him killed, not to mention he will still need to deal with Alec...so um yeah fun times ahead. Thanks for the great review, I love them :D Kim
  13. Thank you, Mike, glad you enjoyed enough to leave me a review.... Kim
  14. Simon scanned the area as soon as he stepped in the club; ‘Run This Town’ was blasting from the speakers as the people grinded each other and danced. He looked to his right to see a couple making out in a dark corner; to his left was the bar. Who was this girl and why did she think she had enough power to disassemble all his hard work? He narrowed his gaze as he moved even further into the dimly lit room to get a better look, peeking over the heads of the crowd. He eyed the people seated at t
  15. Wow, Cannd, totally love this...I was reading and grinning like Chester Cheese, my cheeks hurt I was smiling so much...Thank you. So glad you're enjoyng Acts. The story is actually coming to a close which also means it's coming to a head. The way I wrote the story, I left a lot of open questions on purpose, but trust and believe when it's all said and done and the curtain closes, all questions will have been answered.Simon/Heath, Simon/Alec and Alec/Heath Thanks for noticing the style of writing. I'm happy it came off to you the way I wanted it. I will say this, as you've read, Simon and Heath have a history, they grew up together, so yes, Simon trust Heath as much as he trust anyone, thou that's not saying much. Remember Bo said Simon would kill his own mother, if she got in his way so Heath is not above that ...Hehehe Again thank you soooooo much, you actually made my day and make this writing thing so much fun... Comments/reviews fuel the writters soul I always say. Kim
  16. Naptowngirl

    Chapter 1

    Hahaha, Markus, yep been enjoying Werther's for years... and I'm happy you enjoyed Dilemma...the story that is Kim
  17. Hey, RC... Simon my friend, gets in where he fits in...LOL remember he's calling the shots. but seriously we get where he fits into the puzzle in the next couple of chapters Merci for the review, glad you're still reading. Hope enjoying as well. Kim
  18. *waves* Lisa, and yeah I looked it up and that's how it's spelled...LOL Yep it's personal with Simon that's for sure, but now it's personal to Heath as well, and poor Alec has not a clue... The next few chapters should be interestering to say the least, we'll see what comes out in the wash.. Thanks so much, chica. Love thata you're still reading and still reviewing.. Kim
  19. It's a coming, Mike thanks so much for reading, glad you're still enjoying it!!! Kim
  20. What fun whould that be if we didn't keep you wanting more...I try, Conner. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and taking the time to let me know, you're still hanging with me! We get the scoop in the next chapter so stay tuned. Kim
  21. hahahah....Joann, I love your comment..still laughing as I type this. Um Yeah talk about your tailspin...I think everyone might be dizzy by the end of the story...So glad you're still reading. Thanks so much for the review. Comments fuel the writers soul.. :D Kim
  22. "The Prodigal Son returns," Paul laughed. Heath just grimaced at his father sarcastic sense of humor. “So how’s it going, Son?" "Hum, It's going. I just wanted to call and see how you and mom are doing?" Heath lied, giving a weak smile. Whenever Heath was feeling contemplative or down he called his father. Even though Heath's father was strict when he was a child, he was fair, and he stood for something. That’s what Heath loved about him, not to mention he was intuitive; he knew when some
  23. Hey Lisa, thank you, yeah you know how this young/new love interest goes..he he was taking up much of my writing time, but I think things have evened out, in a good way so thanks again. Yep that Krisz is on it...right, I love it when the reader tries to figure the plot out, means they are truly enjoying the story.. :D Oh and Nina could stir up a whole lot of trouble for Heath by talking to Alec it will be fun to see what happens from this point. How will Alec and Heath deal with it...Next chapter should be up by mid week! smooches, Kim
  24. saintsfan, I so appreciate you taking the time to review. I always see you like the chapter, but not sure if I ever read a review from you, so thanks so much... Oh yeah Simon is a pill indeed as we will see later on. Glad you're enjoying the story... Kim
  25. Oh yeah, Joann, Nina is indeed back with a vengence. It's probably better that Kaila wasn't there, she didn't like her the night they met, so yeah... Oh interesting indeed, but trust me Simon is probably the only one who has it all figured out. LOL Thanks, Chica... Kim
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